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"Take The You Out Of Us"
by Alice Bateman

What do the Fates have in store for me next? They change my whole life on any pretext They give me a man and then take him away When will they give me a man who will stay? Take the you out of us and the me out of we Soon we will find out how sad we can be The dreams and the mem'ries that we both once shared Was it just an illusion, thinking you cared? Now you're gone for good and I'm left all alone My heart full of love has been turned to a stone We had something so strong, or at least I thought so I guess I was wrong, or else why did you go? I'll get over you, I have to, or else my soul will die It's hard for me to realize that your love was a lie If you had really loved me I would not be in this state Even after what you've done, my love won't turn to hate That doesn't mean I'll take you back, my heart has had enough But I wonder, yes I wonder, when the Fates will send true love Oh I wonder, yes I wonder, when the Fates will send true love I need a man who wants to do the things I want to do A man who can erase the hurt that was brought on by you A man who wants my children, and will help me care for them Am I asking for too much, from the world of men?
Contact the author at alice.bateman@sympatico.ca.