作業: 寫一篇日記, 寫完後 E-mail 到 leon_taro88@hotmail.com 給我

(1998/7/3)
作業(日記):

Coz I'm at my boyfriend's place,I use his email system,sorry!!

1. 千萬記住 Coz 不等於 because.
2. 逗號後記住要空一格.
3. Sorry 的嘆號只需一次.

I was busy these days,so I didn't do my homework untill now.

1. 這一句是好句子, 不過 So 不能當連接詞. 切記!
Correction => I didn't do my homework until now because I was busy these days.
或者 Because I was busy these days, I didn't do my homework until now.
(P.S. Because, While, Since, As...etc 都是因為的意思)

I download a new pc game named Bistro the day b4 yesterday,and it's really interesting!

1. b4 應寫成 before. 2. 逗號在此是多的, 因為 and 已是連詞!
3. 逗號後記住要空一格.

U must chose a place to build ur resterant and then hire cooks and waiters,and u also have to decide ur menu.

1. U 應寫成 you, ur 應寫成 your.(正規英文法)
2. chose 是 choose 的過去式, 這裡要用現在式 choose.
3. "resterant" 正確為 "restaurant". 4. 切記 and then 口語可行, 但書寫為錯! and then 不能當連接詞. 切記!
5. 在此把 and 省略為 "逗號" 及可. 不需多餘的!

I will go back to Kaohsiung this week,so I can be online for several weeks.But I will come back to TPE soon.

1. so 前面不能加逗號.
2. 此第的 "but" 為連詞故無需句號.

Thanks a lot to teach uw English!!

1. Thanks 後不能加 to, 要加 for. 但是, for 後要為 ing. 故此地為 teaching.
2. uw = ? 3. 嘆號只需一次.

Take care and have a wonderful summer vacation!! my email address is myra@ucs.com.tw or myra@pcmail.com.tw okay,c ya!

1. 嘆號只需一次.
2. my 之 m 為大寫.
3. c ya 應為 see you!

評語: Myra, 寫得不錯喔! 小地方請多注意! 繼續加油!
(1998/7/3)
作業: 請把錯的地方看一下! 再複寫一次寄給我, Thanks ! ^_^

(1998/7/4)
作業(日記):

The United College Enterance Examination finished yesterday
1. 這一句是好句子, ^_^

One of my cyberfriend called me last night and told me he did a good job.
1. cyberfriend ??

Though I had passed my exam next year, it's still my hightmare,especially math.
1. 此處只要用完成式即可. => I have passed.
2. 逗號請空一格.

You won't believe it!I got only 18 in math and I didn't pass my calculus last semester.
1. will not 此處最好為 would not, 因為假設語氣.

I hate math!
1. No problem here! ^_^

I think I will go back to Kaohsiung today or tomorrow!
1. 此處嘆號請改為句號.

I can't do my homework for several weeks.I will eamil to you if I'm back.
1. 句號應空兩格(double sapce)

Have a nice day! 1. No problem here! ^_^

評語: Myra, 寫得不錯喔! 英文不錯喔! ^_^
(1998/7/4)


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