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» CHAPTER TWO: CHECK IN «
“Wow, it’s really hot here!” said Valerie as she climbed into the rental car next to Allison.
“I know!!” replied Allison, wiping the sweat off her forehead.
“Mom, how far is the condo from here?” asked Valerie.
“Only 30 minutes, so take a chill pill!” said Valerie's mom who was trying to get out of the airport parking lot.
“Ok” said Valerie.
~ Thirty Minutes Later ~
“Hey, Allison, we’re here!” yelled Valerie at Allison who slept the whole way to the condo.
“Good, should we go for a dip in the pool when we are done unpacking?” asked Allison, still yawning from her little nap.
“Sure, why not,” replied Valerie.
“Ok, everybody out!” said Valerie’s mom.
They all got out of the car and walked over to the lobby. An old woman sat at a desk and was filing some papers. Valerie thought that she should be retired, she looked so worn out. The woman looked up from her papers and greeted us with her best smile. Valerie and Allison looked around the lobby while Valerie’s mom checked in. They returned a few minutes later with some sodas.
“Ok, your room number is 13B; have a nice day!” said the receptionist.
“Thank-you,” replied Valerie's mom with a smile.
As they walked to their rooms, Valerie stopped in her tracks. “What?” asked Allison.
“Did you see that guy?!” said Valerie with a greedy smile on her face.
“No!!"
"You need to be a little faster next time!”
“Alrighty then!”
“Valerie, Allison, come on or I’ll lock you out!” yelled Eric from the door of their condo.
“We’re coming!” yelled the two. They took off running to the door, getting inside right before Eric slammed it.
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