Um... I don't have a title yet! If you have suggestions, email me!

"He's been here. I can feel it. I'll get you... You will pay for your cowardice!" he smiled, a sharp tooth clearly seen.

"Yes, he was here. Don't worry, sugar. We'll find him."

A man with a funny hat walked towards them. "Welcome, sirs, to the..." He was interupted by a shrill female voice.

"Coming through! Watch out!"

A giant panda and a red haired girl ran into them and kept on running.

"Huh? What? Aaaaahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!"

The two fell screaming into the pool below.

"Oh no..." said the man. "The cursed springs have taken two more victums. A very tragic story indeed..."

Okay, there it is. This is sort of a teaser for an alterniverse story that I'm writing. Do you think this is a good idea, should I put it off till I finish the others, or kill it completely? Let me know by e-mail.
Anyway, in case you didn't know, that was Ukyo and Ryoga getting knocked into one of the cursed springs in Jusenkyo by Ranma and Genma. This is the same as the real story, but this time, Ukyo and Ryoga meet before Ryoga catches Ranma in Jusenkyo and joins forces with Ukyo. They follow him to Jusenkyo and then everything else has not been written yet!

P.S. I need feedback, so please e-mail me what you think.