I have to start out by saying that, in my mind, this is the definitive Touji story. It was this story I read and re-read the most when I was asked to do a Touji side-story for 'The One I Love Is...' It gives what I believe is the most accurate portrayal of Touji.

This is a story about growing up and taking responsibility. One night, Touji and Hikari do something stupid - the likes of which I won't repeat here; that's what reading is for - and the repercussions of those actions. Actions which eventually force Touji to irresponsibly reenlist in NERV and once again place his life in jeopardy when the latest Angel, Sariel, attacks. Through this trial, Touji matures enough to realize that there are some things you can never change, but you can try to make up for them.

Now, while much of the story focuses on Touji, the other characters aren't left alone. Hikari is most prevalently although it seems that she does not take up an equal amount of time as Touji. Most of her characterization is in the severity of her and Touji's actions. Asuka is still herself, although at the end she shows a rare kindness towards Touji that was previously thought unthinkable. However, Shinji seems to be happily complacent for some strange reason.

Rei is Rei.

All in all, I would have to say characterization was handled excellently. Shinji and Touji talk like 15 year olds tend to. A scene with Misato, Ritsuko, and Hyuuga shows how much Misato does care for the children. And Touji's interactions with NERV are done well. There are a few questions to be asked, however, that might detract a reader's attention.

For instance, this takes place after the 16th Angel, but why is Asuka not in a coma? Why is there still a city? Did Kaworu ever show up? Why is Ritsuko out and about?

These are just a few of many that are never explained, and quite frankly, I don't think they need to be. The story is enjoyable as it is. I have only stated the above questions so that the reader is aware that this is not a direct continuation, but rather a possibility.

Spelling and other grammar errors were very minimal. So minimal, in fact, that I only noticed about two or three.

The material on the Angels is well researched; I myself own a copy of the book the author used.

All in all, a very good read, and one that you may find yourself reading again and again.

Until Instrumentality is needed again,