EPISODES
Episode 1 is actually a lot more descriptive than a lot of my writings, lots of character intro it really gives you a feel of who these ppl are SUPPOSED to be. It's been criticized for being TOO descriptive and i think those comments are justified as it does get a little extreme sometimes, but in all, i've been told it's a good read.. check for yourself.. =)
Episode 2 is supposed to be much better than episode 1, which is not suprising since i had matured somewhat when i wrote it. It's much more intelligent and the characters turn out to be much more than the sum of their parts. Pay close attention to the varying views of Evangeline, Jason and Rachel. The first 3 scenes seem like they belong in episode 1 b/c i wrote them months before the last 7 scenes. I think scene 10 is funny, altho many ppl don't, take a gander for yourself. Enjoy!