Another WAFFy piece of work. If this continues I'm gonna rename my monolith WAFFY-02... :)
This one is a little alternate story of what would have happened if Asuka didn't held Shinji's nose when they first kissed in episode 15.
So? What's so good about this fic? Nothing really. I felt this fic to be nice, but that's all. Nothing much to remember of. Just that it was a nice and waffy fic. Too short, too OOC to my taste (yeah, even a romance/WAFF lover like me has its standards in OOCness). I think that Asuka and Shinji reacted too well to that kiss, almost if they were already in love.
Script format has been used. It may be easy to read, but it lacks description a lot. And it shows. Even if there are some parts where description has been used correctly, there's some lack of it at the beginning of the fic, mainly. Nothing to worry really on the spelling side. There may be some grammar errors to me, but since English isn't my mother language, I can't really tell. Nothing to really worry about on this side.
In other words, it's a "a bit more than average" fic, but nothing you would remember of after reading another WAFFy fic, really. Still, something to read when you're bored, or something similar :)
Until instrumentality is needed again...
WAFFY-02 :)
November 7th 2000
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