Welcome! If you are looking at this, then you are a good person. I need input if I'm ever to get this completed.

Anyway, I've divided up what you should know into different sections so it's easier to understand what's going on here. So, here they are, I'll tell you when I update these things, which probably won't be too often. Eventually, I plan to start posting chapters of the book here as I write them, for your approval : )

Please feel free to give this address to friends and family, and please feel free to post it on the web somewhere.

Thanks, and I hope you like it.

-Kieran Fox

e-mail - kcrfox@hotmail.com

ICQ - 42134845 "Aegis"

The Characters-A vital part of every book, here are character descriptions, and what role each character plays in the book. Eventually I plan on making drawings of each character, or getting friends to do it. (That means you Hai!) Currently I have two drawings, though.

The Locales-This section has descriptions of all the locales of the story, including cities, mountains, masses of water, the differences between Mammon and Terra, and, most importantly, a map I drew of Mammon, presented for your consideration. : )

The Storyline-Remember, this is quite long, nearly 20 pages on computer, so you should just download it. This is the point by point outline of basically all the key happenings of the story. Unfortunately, it is not divided up into chapters yet, and there is no real character development shown here, but rest assured there will be in the final version. This is the part I need help most with! If you see any inconsistencies, anything that doesn't make sense, or something you don't understand, meaning that I haven't explained it well enough, ANY input at all, I'd be happy to hear it, positive or negative.

I promise that I will post chapters here as I write them, but I have to finish the storyline before any writing of the actual book begins, so please help out by giving me your input! Thanks!