“Entropy”
August 1, 2000

TEASER

EXT. FOREST – NIGHT

Two REPUBLICAN GUARD, in uniform.

			SERGEANT
	They have to be here somewhere.  Their 
	whereabouts were pinpointed to this 
	location.

			PRIVATE
	That would mean something if…

He stops when he sees the Sergeant’s look.

			PRIVATE
	You’ve heard the stories.

			SERGEANT
	There’s no room in battle for fairy 
	tales, Private.

The Private doesn’t look any less scared for the advice.

They continue to move through the forest.

The Private sees a STRANGE BLUE GLOW.

			PRIVATE
	Um, sarge?

He points at the light, which FADES and WINKS OUT.

			SERGEANT
	Interference.

The Private doesn’t look convinced.

			SERGEANT
	What? You think it was a UFO?

Humiliated, the Private can’t reply.

			SERGEANT
	If that’s the case, where’s the little 
	green alien men from the moon, 
	Private?

The Private looks down, biting his lip.

			SERGEANT
	Stupid kid.

He turns away and runs smack into the REBEL.  In clothes tattered and 
torn, the Rebel is gaunt and pale, a frightening, unexpected sight.  
The Sergeant pulls his gun, but the Rebel only smiles.

			REBEL
	That will do you no good here.

The Sergeant blasts him anyway.

The Rebel continues to smile as the bullets PASS THROUGH HIM easily.

			REBEL
	Come with me.

He beckons and turns.

The Private’s eyes are huge, on the Sergeant, waiting for orders.

			SERGEANT
	Got to be a hologram. A trick. But 
	this is what we’re looking for.

They follow the Rebel.

EXT. CAMP – NIGHT

Tents, in poor condition.  Some have holes; others flap where they’ve 
lost their tent pins.

The Rebel leads the soldiers into the center of camp, an open square 
marked out in the dirt.  He gives them a deep look.

			REBEL
	Pray.

He DISAPPEARS as though he was never there.

The Private freaks, falling to his knees.

			PRIVATE
	I don’t want to die!

The Sergeant smacks him in the head, hard.

			SERGEANT
	Get hold of yourself.

But the BLUE GLOW has returned, brighter, stronger.  The Sergeant’s 
mouth opens in surprise.  The glow intensifies, so strong we can see 
the men’s’ shadows on the ground.

It FLASHES.

The Sergeant and the Private are frozen in their positions, now reduced 
to charred bone, burned black.

As we back away from the scene, we see their shadows burned into the 
square…along with the shadows of many other people.


ACT ONE

INT. BAR – NIGHT

A DRUNK, at the bar, telling a story to the BARTENDER, who is barely 
humoring him.

			DRUNK
	They sucked the information from those men’s 
	brains.  And then, the very next night, without 
	warning, they struck an encampment of Santiago’s 
	soldiers.  Killed every last one of them. Took 
	their skin clean off.

Sitting in a booth near the end of the bar, not far from the drunk, are 
PINOCCHIO, HOBBES and FLORENCE.

Pinocchio groans and rolls his eyes.

Hobbes is looking at the drunk in earnest. Hobbes makes a move to get 
up but Pinocchio grabs his arm.  Hobbes glares at him.

			HOBBES
	What if it’s true?

			PINOCCHIO
	It’s an urban legend. That story’s been 
	circulating since the day they pressed the start 
	button on this godforsaken place.

INT. COUNCIL ROOM, GOVERNMENT HOUSE – NIGHT

SANTIAGO and his ADVISORS around the table.  A MAJOR stands in the 
center of the room, giving his report.

			MAJOR
	We lost two men last night.  As far as we 
	can tell, they went into the forest and then 
	their signals were lost to us and their virtual 
	characters ceased to exist.  They were 
	investigating the rebel cult believed to be 
	hiding in that sector.

He looks to Santiago.

Santiago is considering.

			SANTIAGO
	The two men were alone, facing such a dangerous 
	threat?

			MAJOR
	Ah, yes sir.

			SANTIAGO
	Then you won’t go alone, will you Major?

			MAJOR
		(uncomfortable)
	No sir.

INT. BAR - NIGHT

			HOBBES
	We’ve both seen things. Strange things. There’d 
	be no explanation for them in the real world, but 
	here –

			PINOCCHIO
	Think about it, Hobbes.  If every one of the 
	soldiers died, who told their skin was removed?

Pinocchio thinks he’s got him, but Hobbes grins slowly.

			HOBBES
	The people who did it.

Florence looks at Pinocchio: the kid’s got a point.

			HOBBES
	What if it’s true?  If they can take Santiago?  

Pinocchio rolls his eyes.

			PINOCCHIO
	Can’t be done.

			HOBBES
	Are you saying Santiago can’t be killed?

INT. COUNCIL ROOM – NIGHT

Although expectant eyes are upon him, the Major remains in place.

			MAJOR
	What exactly is the objective with regard to 
	these Rebels?

Santiago is beginning to become annoyed.

			SANTIAGO
	End their reign without mercy.  Bring their 
	leaders to me – alive.

			MAJOR
	But, sir, the danger they present –

			SANTIAGO
	Is of no consequence to you.

The Major frowns.

			SANTIAGO
	If you fail, Major, it means your death. Not 
	mine.

INT. BAR - NIGHT

Pinocchio just looks away. Takes another drink.

			HOBBES
	Isn’t it worth finding out?

			PINOCCHIO
	What makes you think they’d help us anyway?

			HOBBES
	What makes you think they won’t?

Hobbes gets up, Florence following. Pinocchio finishes down his drink 
and trails after them.

			PINOCCHIO
	I like my skin where it is.

EXT. FOREST – NIGHT

The trio, moving stealthily.

Pinocchio gets a sense of something that makes him uncomfortable.  
Looks over his shoulder, then all around, frowning.

			HOBBES
	What is it?

Pinocchio looks up.

A blue light is outlining the tree branches overhead.

			HOBBES
	St. Elmo’s Fire.  It’s a good omen.  Divine 
	intervention.

Pinocchio looks at Hobbes.

			PINOCCHIO
	You believe everything you read?

Florence shivers, looks unhappily at the phenomena as it grows more 
intense.

			PINOCCHIO
	It’s a bad sign.  Electrical discharge building 
	up.

			HOBBES
	Just means a storm’s coming.

			PINOCCHIO
	Yeah, but what kind of storm?

EXT. FOREST – NIGHT

The Major has a full squadron of men and two Humvees.  The men stand 
around, some of them looking for evidence, some keeping watch.

			MAJOR
	This is where they disappeared?

			PRIVATE
	Yes, sir.

The Major looks around.

			MAJOR
	With no trace.  I don’t like it.

			PRIVATE
	There wouldn’t have been any trace –

The Major’s look silences him.  The Private nods and returns to his 
business.

As the bustle continues around him, the Major happens to look up, and 
he, too sees the blue glow of St. Elmo’s Fire, only more distant.  He 
frowns at it, then turns his back.

			MAJOR
	This way.

He extends his arm, pointing away from the disturbance.  The men look 
at him and scramble.

He glances over his shoulder to see the disturbance disappear behind 
them.

EXT. FOREST – NIGHT

			HOBBES
	Their camp has to be around here somewhere.

He looks to Pinocchio, who seems utterly uninterested.

			HOBBES
		(low voice)
	What else do you know about them?

			PINOCCHIO
	Santiago’s not afraid of them.

			HOBBES
	Then why has he left their camp alone, even after 
	they killed his men?

			PINOCCHIO
	Because they didn’t do it, Hobbes. And sometimes 
	it’s better just to leave these things alone. 
	It’s a nice story.  Santiago, he ain’t scared of 
	stories.

			HOBBES
	Tell me the rest.  Why Santiago doesn’t take them 
	seriously.

Pinocchio sighs and stops walking.

			PINOCCHIO
	They’re kids, okay?

Hobbes just looks at him.

			PINOCCHIO
	Supposedly they were there, at ground zero, in 
	New York, when the bomb went off.  Somehow they 
	survived.  Or so goes the legend.

He shrugs, not buying it.

			HOBBES
	A rebel army is taking orders from kids?

			PINOCCHIO
	Still sure you want to stick your neck out to 
	find ‘em?

There is a rumbling, growing louder, like thunder.

Hobbes flashes a grin at Pinocchio.

			HOBBES
	Told ya a storm was coming.

			PINOCCHIO
	And there still ain’t a cloud in the sky.

Florence and Hobbes both look up.  No clouds. Just stars.

Hobbes looks at Pinocchio’s grim expression as the rumbling continues, 
growing louder.

The ground jerks, shaking hard.  They are barely able to remain 
standing.

			HOBBES
	Earthquake?

			PINOCCHIO
	I don’t think so.

EXT. FOREST – NIGHT

The Major and his men, trooping in between close trees.

The RUMBLING catches them by surprise. Tree branches fall.

			MAJOR
	Aftershock. Keep moving.

One of the men looks back and notices the blue glow in the trees.

			CORPORAL
	Major! Over there, look! We’re going the wrong 
	way.

Now all of the men have seen it.  The Major looks unhappy as they are 
forced to reverse their direction, moving toward the intensifying blue 
glow.

EXT. FOREST – NIGHT

			HOBBES
	Why not?

			PINOCCHIO
	Ever been in an earthquake?

Hobbes just looks at him.

			PINOCCHIO
	I grew up in California. Was stationed in 
	Japan.  Trust me.  That ain’t no earthquake.  

			HOBBES
	Then what was it?

			PINOCCHIO
	Ain’t a fault line around here for hundreds of 
	miles.

			HOBBES
		(louder)
	Then what was it?

			PINOCCHIO
	Believe me, kid, you don’t want to find out.

He begins walking again, and Hobbes looks to Florence. She follows, 
still looking uneasy. Hobbes looks downright unhappy.

			HOBBES
	Why can’t you ever be straight with me? Give me 
	an honest answer?

			PINOCCHIO
	Maybe I’m trying to develop your mind.

EXT. CAMP – NIGHT

Hobbes, Pinocchio and Florence emerge from the tree into the military 
camp.  Pinocchio stops short, a look of horror on his face.

			HOBBES
	What -?

Then he sees.

In the open center square, the scorched bodies of NINE REPUBLICAN 
GUARD.  The bodies are still smoking.

Hobbes starts to rush toward them, but Florence catches his arm, 
stopping him. He looks at her, surprised by this.

			HOBBES
	What happened to them?

			PINOCCHIO
	Obviously they were killed by supernatural 
	powers.

Pinocchio has turned around, looking into the tops of the trees.  
Listening. No glow, no rumbling.

			PINOCCHIO
	It’s stopped.
		(beat)
	For now.

He casts a sidelong look at the burned bodies.

			PINOCCHIO
	We should be safe for the moment.

Florence lets her bag slip down from her shoulder.

But Pinocchio spoke too soon, as they are SURROUNDED BY REBELS.

Hobbes reaches for his gun.

			PINOCCHIO
	Don’t.

Hobbes lowers it reluctantly.

They and the rebels just look at one another.


ACT TWO

Resume:
EXT. CAMP – NIGHT

After a moment, the Rebels begin to move the charred bodies away.

The GAUNT REBEL from the teaser approaches Hobbes, Pinocchio and 
Florence.

			HOBBES
	What happened to those men?

The Gaunt Rebel glances at him.

			GAUNT REBEL
	They were Santiago’s men.

His eyes flick over their clothing.

			GAUNT REBEL
	You are not. You’re like us.  Against him.  You 
	are welcome here.

He extends an arm toward the camp, inviting them in.

EXT. FOREST – NIGHT

POV SHOT:
Some distance away, we are watching the Rebel lead Pinocchio, Hobbes 
and Florence into the camp.

Reverse on:
The Major. His face dirty, his expression tight. Those were his men who 
died.  And now he is hiding in the forest. Alone.

INT. CAMP BUILDING – NIGHT

A long table, covered with a pristine white cloth.  Compared to the 
surroundings, the cloth practically glows. It has no holes.

The Gaunt Rebel leads Pinocchio, Hobbes and Florence into the building.  
They look around themselves.

The Rebels are gathered around the table.  Some of them are cleaning 
their weapons, assembling ammunition, preparing themselves.  There are 
a couple of families, fathers or mothers with children.

A TIRED WOMAN catches Pinocchio’s eye and they look at each other for a 
long moment before she purposely looks away.

A rebel moves in and sets bowls of stew down at the end of the table, 
in front of the Gaunt Rebel and our trio.

Hobbes looks at the food, then to Pinocchio.

The Gaunt Rebel puts his hand on Hobbes’ shoulder, and pulls out a 
chair for him.

			GAUNT REBEL
	Eat.

Hobbes isn’t so sure.

			PINOCCHIO
	I thought we were your prisoners.

			GAUNT REBEL
	We take no prisoners.

He sits down and is served a heaping bowl of stew. It’s filled with 
vegetables. He smiles at them, and takes a steaming bite.

Hobbes, Pinocchio and Florence look to each other, none of them 
decided. Finally Hobbes sits down. He scrapes the spoon through the 
soup in the wooden bowl, looking for anything untoward.

Pinocchio looks around.  Food is being served all around.  People are 
eating without fear.  The Tired Woman is eating.  She glances in his 
direction, and nods: It’s okay.

Pinocchio picks up the spoon and eats, shoveling it in.  Starving. 
Hobbes and Florence follow suit.

The door to the building opens and an immediate hush falls over the 
room.  All sound ceases, everyone puts down their spoons.  It takes our 
heroes a moment to notice and then they look up, too.

Standing in the doorway is a pair of BOYS.  They are thin, lithe, 
almost ethereal in their beauty.  They are twins, twelve years old, 
mirror images of each other.  Despite this, LEON seems stronger and 
more willful than NOEL, who wears a peaceful expression on his face.

As they sweep into the room, heads bow.

They stop at the center of the table, standing directly behind the 
Tired Woman.

			LEON
	Give thanks!

Those with their heads bowed begin whispering to themselves, a prayer 
for the meal.

One of the Rebels pulls up a pair of chairs for the boys.  Leon sits 
down, but Noel sits in the Tired Woman’s lap, winding himself around 
her neck as they are served.

			PINOCCHIO
	She’s their mother.

Hobbes looks at him, surprised by his perceptiveness.

Pinocchio notices the look.

			PINOCCHIO
	Keep your guard up.

Finished with his food, he shoves the bowl away and reaches for the 
pile of ammunition toward the center of the table.

The Gaunt Rebel is there immediately.

			GAUNT REBEL
	That’s not for you.

Pinocchio looks at him, one eyebrow raised: oh yeah?

			PINOCCHIO
		(eyes on the kids)
	I want to talk to them. Your leaders.

			GAUNT REBEL
	They talk to no one.

HE turns away. Pinocchio grabs his arm, and the Gaunt Rebel gives him a 
warning look.

			GAUNT REBEL
	I’ll show you where you may make your camp.

EXT. CAMP – NIGHT

The Gaunt Rebel leads them to the tent at the far edge of the camp, 
right next to the square.

He opens the flap.

			GAUNT REBEL
	I trust you’ll be comfortable in here.

He leaves the door open and walks away, leaving the trio alone.

INT. TENT – NIGHT

It’s a good-sized tent, equipped with cots that have warm sleeping 
bags.  A small oil lamp burns in the center of the tent, throwing 
shadows onto the walls.

Hobbes throws his stuff down on the middle bed, flops down comfortably. 
Florence is a little more cautious.

Pinocchio lingers at the tent flap, squinting to see through a tiny 
gap.

			PINOCCHIO
	I don’t like it.

HIS POV:
The camp.  Guards patrol, heavily armed.

			HOBBES
	Will you stop saying that?  They fed us. We have 
	a place to sleep, on beds, with a roof over our 
	heads.  Why can’t you accept that these people 
	want the same thing we do?

			PINOCCHIO
	I’m not so sure.

He gives Hobbes a hard look, then sits down on the bed closest to the 
door.

			PINOCCHIO
	You didn’t find something odd about those kids?

			HOBBES
	They’re twins.

Pinocchio looks at Florence.

			PINOCCHIO
	Florence knows what I mean.

She nods.

			PINOCCHIO
	Something just ain’t right there.

He gets up again, peeking out.

			PINOCCHIO
	I’m gonna find out what it is.

He slips out of the tent.  

EXT. CAMP – NIGHT

A moment later, Hobbes emerges from the tent, looking for Pinocchio.  
No one is there.

A second later, he notices the twins.  Noel sees him, and nods to him 
invitingly.  With a backward glance at the tent, Hobbes goes over to 
them.

EXT. FOREST BEHIND CAMP – NIGHT

Pinocchio, tracking someone through the woods.  

			PINOCCHIO
	Hey.

The figure turns, startled. It’s the Tired Woman.  She looks at him, 
then continues on her way.

Pinocchio follows.

EXT. FOREST STREAM – NIGHT

The woman comes to a shallow stream and kneels by it, holding the 
bucket she carries in the stream to fill it.

Pinocchio kneels next to her. He picks up a handful of water and rubs 
it on his face and neck.

			PINOCCHIO
	You’re their mother.

She gives him a hard look.

			TIRED WOMAN
	Yes.

			PINOCCHIO
		(conversationally)
	Must be a hard job.  Mother of twins.

			TIRED WOMAN
		(oddly)
	Not always.

She looks at him.

			TIRED WOMAN
	What do you want?

			PINOCCHIO
	You’re planning to take out Santiago.

			TIRED WOMAN
	No.

			PINOCCHIO
	Your sons are.

			TIRED WOMAN
	You can’t imagine their plans.  Not even in your 
	worst nightmares.

She starts to get up, and he catches her arm.

She glares at him.

He eases the bucket from her grasp.

			PINOCCHIO
	I’ll carry that for you.

Hesitant, she lets him take it.

			PINOCCHIO
	Why are you afraid of them, if they’re just kids?

			TIRED WOMAN
	Why do you think they can help you?

They start back to camp.

EXT. CAMP – NIGHT

Noel and Leon are sprawled in the dirt, kneeling over something.  
Leon’s eyes are intent with interest.

Hobbes looks around cautiously, but there are no guards.  

Noel’s eyes are on him.

			HOBBES
	Hey.  Whatcha got there?

Leon snaps closed a thin hardcover book and moves his body protectively 
in front of it, his eyes dark and fiery.

			HOBBES
	Secret stuff?

			LEON
	Don’t patronize us.

			NOEL
	It’s a storybook.

Hobbes sits down with them in the dirt.

			HOBBES
	Oh, yeah? Which one?

The twins exchange a look.

			HOBBES
	Can I see?

Noel shakes his head, lips tightly closed.

			HOBBES
	Okay. That’s fine.

A bit of awkward silence.

			HOBBES
	Must get pretty lonely out here sometimes. You 
	must feel lucky that there’s two of you.

			LEON
	Yeah. Lucky.

			NOEL
	Is that…is the other man with you your brother?

Leon glares at him angrily for daring to speak, for being interested.

Hobbes smiles at the thought.

			HOBBES
	No.  He’s my…he’s my friend. We’re soldiers.  
	We’re trying to raise an army, like the one you 
	have here.  We want to defeat Omar Santiago.
		(beat)
	What are you fighting against?

			LEON
	We want freedom.

Hobbes nods.

			HOBBES
	That’s what everyone wants.

			LEON
	Not Santiago.

			HOBBES
	You know him.

Leon’s eyes are dark. Noel nods, pressing close against his brother.

EXT. CAMP – NIGHT

At the opposite end of the camp, Pinocchio and the Tired Woman emerge 
from the woods together.

The Tired Woman turns to Pinocchio for one last statement.

			TIRED WOMAN
	What my sons are doing…believe me, you don’t 
	want to be involved.

She hurries into her cabin.

EXT. CAMP – NIGHT

Leon looks in the direction of the other end of camp, and sees the 
exchange between Pinocchio and his mother.  Sees them together.

The intensity of his stare makes Hobbes look and he sees Pinocchio 
slipping back into the tent.

			HOBBES
	How do you know Santiago?

Leon shoves the storybook into Noel’s hands, and the two of them get to 
their feet simultaneously.  Leon propels Noel toward their tent, 
without a word.

			NOEL
		(turning back to Hobbes)
	Bye.

INT. TENT – NIGHT

Hobbes goes inside.  Florence is on the bed farthest from the door, 
lying on her side, head propped up.  Alert.  Pinocchio lounges on his 
cot, arms folded behind his head.

			HOBBES
	What’s going on?

			PINOCCHIO
	Missed ya.

			HOBBES
	You’re the one who took off without any warning.

			PINOCCHIO
	Get anything out of the kids?

Hobbes sits down, angry.

			HOBBES
	I was starting to, until they saw you come back.  
	For some reason that scared them off.

Pinocchio’s smug expression turns to a frown.

			PINOCCHIO
	Their mother warned me not to get involved.

			HOBBES
	They saw you with her.

			PINOCCHIO
	Must have.

			HOBBES
	Do you think they’ll…

He trails off – it’s silly.

			PINOCCHIO
	They’re just kids.

He puts out the lamp.

			PINOCCHIO
	Go to sleep.

But his eyes remain open and worried in the darkness.

INT. SANTIAGO’S OFFICE – NIGHT

Santiago, working at his desk.  He has pencils and ruler, a geometrical 
compass and a series of maps.  At first it seems as though he is 
setting out a battle plan.

Then we see he’s drawing.

The door to his office opens unexpectedly and his head comes up.  The 
MAJOR slinks in, filthy, ragged.

			SANTIAGO
	You’re unannounced, Major.

The Major nods, his throat working, looking for words. He glances at 
the desk. Santiago makes no move to cover his work.  His glare does the 
job for him.

			MAJOR
	My squadron – all lost. Killed.  By the Rebels.

			SANTIAGO
	Sit down.  We have much to talk about Major.

He motions to the chair and the Major sits down gratefully.  Santiago 
also takes his seat, looking to him expectantly.

			MAJOR
	They have power.  Strong power. Supernatural 
	ones. There was a blue glow. A rumbling in the 
	trees. I could feel their energy snapping.  And 
	then…the men…

			SANTIAGO
	Were you captured, soldier?

			MAJOR
	No sir.  They were killed instantly.

			SANTIAGO
	Your entire unit is killed and yet – here you are.

Guilt crosses the Major’s face.

			MAJOR
	I don’t know why I was spared.

			SANTIAGO
		(threatening)
	I suggest you find out, sir.  And quickly.

He returns his focus to his work on the desk in front of him.

The Major rises from his chair uncertainly, starts toward the door, 
where he hesitates.

			MAJOR
	There is one more thing.

Santiago glances up, unamused.

			MAJOR
	Pinocchio. And Hobbes.

			SANTIAGO
	Make sure they’re taken care of, Major.  As you 
	took care of your men.

The Major nods and goes out, closing the door firmly behind him.

Santiago snaps his pencil in half, the rage not reflected in the 
expression on his face.

INT. TENT – NIGHT

The twins lie together in the same cot, arms and legs tangled in an 
innocent sibling embrace as they sleep.

The Tired Woman enters the room, silently.  A worried expression on her 
face.  She walks over to the children, smoothes the blanket over them 
in a motherly way.

She’s making sure they’re asleep.

She turns and picks up the storybook from the floor. She leans against 
the tent pole, glancing through it.

Leon’s eyes open, watching her with a dark, hard expression.

The Tired Woman’s eyes are sad as she turns the pages of the book.

Black and white photography. Horrible images, of burned cities, of 
destruction and war, of people with their skin burned directly off.

A crisp, clear black and white photograph of the fiery mushroom cloud 
of an atomic bomb.

She stares at it for a long, long moment, then looks at her children, 
sadness in her eyes as she closes the book and holds it against her 
chest.

Leon is staring at her.

She looks back at him, resigned.

EXT. CAMP – NIGHT

The armed patrol.  They have the Tired Woman by the arms, dragging her 
to the end of the row of tents.  She does not resist.  The twins, 
solemn-faced in white nightclothes follow them.

The mother looks back at her sons.

The patrol lead her into the square, then look at Leon and Noel.  
Noel’s mouth is pursed, like he wants to be sucking his thumb, as he 
presses against his brother in his habitual way, looking for comfort.

Leon nods.

The guards force the Tired Woman to her knees, tying her hands behind 
her.  They secure the rope to a wooden pole and step back and away, 
leaving her there, helpless. Her head hangs down, an acceptance of her 
fate.

The twins remain there.

The blue light begins to glow around the edges of the square, and the 
rumbling comes.

Noel hides his face in Leon’s shoulder.  Leon watches.

We see the reflection of the blue glow, the intense flash of light, and 
the poof of smoke in Leon’s eyes.

Now the Tired Woman is nothing but a charred body.  Her position looks 
like one of prayer.  


ACT THREE

INT. TENT – DAY

Light filters through the canvas walls of the tent.

Florence leans over Pinocchio, shaking his shoulder gently.

He groans and opens his eyes sleepily.

			PINOCCHIO
	Just ten more minutes.

He starts to roll over and snuggle back into the bed.

Florence shakes him harder.

He rolls his eyes at her.

			PINOCCHIO
	A guy just can’t catch a break with you, can he?

Then he sees the serious look in her eyes and gets up quickly.

EXT. TENT – DAY

Florence steps out into the bright sunlight, leading the way.  Their 
tent is right next to the open square.

He sees the body.

			PINOCCHIO
	Burned alive.

He looks at Florence, who nods once.

			PINOCCHIO
	It’s the only way she didn’t digitize. 
	Carbonized before she took her last breath.

Pinocchio walks over to the body of the woman, looks at the way her 
hands are tied to the stake.

			PINOCCHIO
	Get Hobbes.

Florence goes to get him.

Pinocchio surveys the land, walking in a wide circle around the woman, 
looking at the ground. He bends down, touching the hard, smooth ground, 
frowning, his mind working.

Then he returns to the body and touches it lightly, flaking off a bit 
of ash and rolling it between his fingers.

			REBEL GUARD
	Stop right there!

He takes a deep breath, knowledge in his eyes, and straightens up.  He 
turns around and sees the Guards pointing their guns at him, the twins 
standing off to one side.  Noel’s pale face is streaked with tears.

Hobbes emerges from the tent in time to see this: Pinocchio standing 
next to the dead woman.  Pinocchio puts his hands up, and the two Rebel 
Guards grab him, moving him off.

			LEON
	For the brutal murder of our mother, this man 
	will be executed at sunset.

Pinocchio’s eyes catch Hobbes’ as the guards march him past.  There is 
doubt in Hobbes’ eyes.

EXT. JAIL CELL – DAY

The jail is nothing more than a pit dug at the outskirts of the camp.  
The Rebel Guards force Pinocchio in.  His expression is grim.  The 
space is small and he hugs his knees to his chest.

The Guards set a notched wooden grid, almost like bars, over the top of 
the pit and weight it with stones, locking him inside.

Pinocchio hits the bars with his hands, but he can’t get enough 
leverage in the cramped space to raise them, and the stones are large 
and heavy.

One of the guards sits down in a chair nearby, his gun across his lap.

Pinocchio grunts as he hits the bars again.  The guard rises from his 
chair and stands on top of the bars until Pinocchio is quiet.  The 
guard steps away and returns to his chair.

Pinocchio drops his head against his knees.

INT. TENT – DAY

Hobbes paces, and Florence sits on the cot, edgy.

			HOBBES
	What happened?

Florence shrugs.

			HOBBES
	He didn’t do this.

He looks to Florence.

			HOBBES
	Did he?

She shakes her head – of course not.

Hobbes races from the tent, headed for the jail.

EXT. CAMP – DAY

The twins move in front of him, stopping him.  Hobbes look at them a 
little guiltily.

			HOBBES
	I’m sorry.  About your mother. I lost my mother, 
	not long ago.  It’s difficult. Especially at 
	your age.

Noel nods his acceptance.  Leon continues to look at Hobbes.

			LEON
	You don’t believe your friend committed the crime.

			HOBBES
	No. I don’t.

			LEON
	You’ve never seen him kill before?

Hobbes is silent a moment.

			HOBBES
	Never without reason.

			LEON
	And yet, he was the last person with her. He 
	told you as much last night, didn’t he?

Hobbes has nothing but a guilty nod to answer.

			LEON
	You and I are men. Soldiers. We both know that 
	things can happen. That some men have 
	uncontrollable instincts and desires.  Even your 
	friend.

Hobbes is silent.

			LEON
	You find it difficult to defend him now.

Leon pats his shoulder, an anachronistic image: the boy giving the man 
encouragement.

			LEON
	You’re learning.

The twins move away, clearing the path for Hobbes.

Hobbes’ steps are slower as he moves toward the edge of camp where the 
jail cell is.

EXT. JAIL CELL – DAY

The guard sits up straighter, at attention, when Hobbes approaches.  
Ready to act if Hobbes attempts to help Pinocchio escape.

Hobbes goes over to the jail cell, and sits down.

			HOBBES
	Pinocchio.

Pinocchio raises his head.

			PINOCCHIO
	Hobbes.  Get me out of here.

			HOBBES
	I can’t do that.

			PINOCCHIO
	You heard them! They’re gonna kill me at sunset.

			HOBBES
	What happened to that woman.

			PINOCCHIO
	Hobbes!

			HOBBES
	What happened to her, Pinocchio? You were the 
	last person to see her alive.

			PINOCCHIO
	Augh. They got to you, didn’t they.  Those kids.  
	Look, Hobbes, I didn’t kill her. Is that what 
	you want me to say?

			HOBBES
	Only if it’s the truth.

He holds Pinocchio’s eyes in a steady gaze for several seconds.

			PINOCCHIO
	Hobbes.  I would never…

He stops when he sees the unchanged look in Hobbes’s eyes.

			PINOCCHIO
	Something’s going on here. Something bigger than 
	you, bigger than me.  You've got to help me find 
	out what it is.

Hobbes’ expression still doesn’t change. He’s waiting to hear Pinocchio 
say the words: I didn’t kill her.

Pinocchio sighs, giving in.

			PINOCCHIO
	Send Florence. If it’s not too much trouble.

He puts his head back down.

Hobbes gets to his feet.

EXT. CAMP – DAY

The other people in the camp stare at Hobbes as he walks along the 
center path. He notices, looking in their weary, dirty faces, but he 
doesn’t know why.

He passes Florence.

			HOBBES
	Pinocchio – 

He points, and she nods. That’s where she was going anyway.

He stands there, alone, being stared at, trying to pull himself 
together. Takes a deep breath.

Notices something inside the twins’ tent.

Hobbes draws closer until he is spying through a crack between the 
canvas flaps.

POV:
INT. TENT – DAY

The twins sit on the floor, breathing deeply, almost as though in some 
sort of trance.  They are holding hands, mirroring each other.

Between them is the storybook, open, but the picture is not visible 
from where Hobbes stands.

In unison, they turn their heads.

			LEON
	Come inside.

EXT. JAIL CELL – DAY

Florence lies on her stomach beside the bars, her fingers threaded 
through them, touching Pinocchio’s hand.

			PINOCCHIO
	There’s got to be something…some reason…

He looks up at her imploringly.

			PINOCCHIO
	Hobbes thinks I’m guilty.

Florence shakes her head.

			PINOCCHIO
	Either way, I’ve got to get out of here before 
	sunset.

He pulls his hand away to rub his face with both hands.  He stops, 
fingers exploring a patch of skin near his temple.  It’s rough.

Florence frowns, seeing it for the first time.  The patch of skin is 
red and flaky.  As he rubs it, skin peels off, layer by layer.

She sticks her fingers through the bars and touches him.  Instantly the 
skin heals.

			PINOCCHIO
	This is more serious than I thought.

He looks at her gravely.

			PINOCCHIO
	The blue glow…the electrical disturbances…you 
	know what this is.

She nods, not wanting to believe it.

			PINOCCHIO
	You have to convince Hobbes.

INT. TENT – DAY

Hobbes enters the tent cautiously.

			HOBBES
	Are you doing all right?

He looks at Noel, whose eyes and nose are still red from crying.

			HOBBES
	She was all you had.

			LEON
	We are men. We do not need our mother.

			HOBBES
	Even a grown man can need his mother.  His 
	family.

He touches Noel, rubbing his back comfortingly, and Leon flinches as 
though Hobbes had struck him (Leon).

			HOBBES
	Isn’t that right, Noel?

			LEON
	Leave my brother alone!

			HOBBES
	You two aren’t identical twins, are you?

He looks from one to the other.

			NOEL
	Mirror twins.

Hobbes nods.

			HOBBES
	I thought so.

			NOEL
	We started out as one.  But now we’re two.

Hobbes looks at him.

			HOBBES
	Then you are identical.

He reaches for the book, left unprotected.

			HOBBES
	So what’s your story book about?

He picks it up.

			LEON
	Our childhood.

Hobbes is looking at a photograph of the explosion of the atomic bomb 
in New York City in 1995.

INT. SANTIAGO’S OFFICE – DAY

INGA FOSSA stands before Santiago, who sits behind his desk.  She 
stands at attention, uncomfortable, uncertain why she’s there.

			SANTIAGO
	Were you here when the bomb exploded in New 
	York?

			INGA
	No, sir.  I wasn’t with the project until 
	several months afterward.

He nods.

			SANTIAGO
	A nuclear explosion is a beautiful thing. It 
	cleanses with fire.

He glances at her, sees her expression.

			SANTIAGO
	Do I sound like a madman to you?

			INGA
	No, sir. I’ve seen footage and simulations.  The 
	explosion is a sight to behold.

			SANTIAGO
	Sit down.

She does, crossing her legs, never quite relaxing entirely.

			SANTIAGO
	One of our enemies may have acquired the 
	materials and the knowledge to detonate a small 
	nuclear device.  I’m thinking of permitting it.

He raises his eyebrows, inviting her opinion.

			INGA
	The bomb was the foothold that propelled you 
	into your position today.  It might be just the 
	thing to convince those outside the fence that 
	their resistance brings more peril than 
	submitting to your rule.

He nods.

			SANTIAGO
	I thought you’d say that.

A look crosses her face as though she’s been set up and said the wrong 
thing.

He nods.

			SANTIAGO
	Thank you, Inga. 

She rises, dismissed.

			INGA
	What have you decided, sir?

			SANTIAGO
	I haven’t.

EXT. JAIL CELL – DAY

Hobbes, hurrying toward the pit where Pinocchio is.  Florence gets up 
and goes to him, touching his face. She finds unbroken blisters and 
touches them quickly. Hobbes moves his head, then realizes she’s 
healing something.

			HOBBES
	What?

			PINOCCHIO
	Trouble.

Hobbes goes over to the cell as Florence surreptitiously moves toward 
the guard.

			HOBBES
	We’ve got bigger problems than your execution at sunset.

			PINOCCHIO
	Problems like a nuclear bomb.

The eavesdropping guard starts, shocked.  Florence uses his reaction to 
grab him.  They struggle, with him going for his gun, but she wins.  He 
DIGITIZES a moment after the gun fires.

			HOBBES
	You know.

He moves for the rocks. Florence goes to help him.

			PINOCCHIO
	They’re playing with raw plutonium.  That’s what 
	caused the blue light.  I thought the little 
	brats were freaks, turns out they’re nuclear 
	physicists. Go figure.

Hobbes and Florence pull him out of the hole. He is unable to stand, 
his legs cramped, and the two of them pull his arms around their 
shoulders, holding him up.

			HOBBES
	That’s not all they are.

			PINOCCHIO
	The stories are true?

			HOBBES
	You know?

			PINOCCHIO
	Knew, but never believed it.

He breaks away from them and limps a few steps away before sinking into 
the guard’s chair, rubbing the cramps out of his legs.  Florence 
reaches for him, but he pushes her hand away.  He looks directly at 
Hobbes.

			PINOCCHIO
	Ground zero was a park in New York City.  

EXT. CITY PARK – DAY – FLASHBACK

Kids playing a soccer game.  Mothers with babies in strollers.  In the 
distance, we see the MAN WITH THE BOMB sitting on the bench in front of 
the fountain.

			PINOCCHIO (VO)
	Nice fall day.  Kids were out. Families.

A woman stands behind a swing. She is the TIRED WOMAN, only younger, 
vibrant.  She is pushing her SON, a thin, blond six-year-old with 
bright eyes and a smile.

			PINOCCHIO (VO)
	They had no way to guess their world wasn’t real.  That it 
	was all a computer simulation, a video game designed to 
	suit some twisted purpose.  And even if they had known…

The first CHIME of 12.

A BRIGHT WHITE FLASH.

			PINOCCHIO (VO)
	They say a child survived, seemingly untouched 
	by the bomb.  

The small blond boy has fallen from his swing.  Aside from a smudge of 
dirt on his face, he is unhurt, unaffected by the fires that burn all 
around him.

			PINOCCHIO (VO)
	Except in that fraction of a second when the 
	timer went off and the detonator struck, 
	splitting the smallest measure of matter, the 
	atom, in an explosive flash of light, something 
	else was split.

REVEAL:

Sitting opposite the small blond boy is another, identical blond child.  
The first child gets to his feet, curious, and the other child does the 
same.  They touch hands, as a baby touches a mirror, fascinated by his 
own image.

Their arms wrap around each other in a hug, tighter, and the first boy, 
the stronger boy, seems to be trying to absorb the second boy into 
himself.  But he can’t.  He can’t do it.

EXT. JAIL CELL – DAY

Pinocchio blinks, and looks at Hobbes.

			HOBBES
	They think another blast will reverse it 
	somehow. Will make them back into one.

			PINOCCHIO
	They don’t realize none of this is real. That it 
	wasn’t them that was split, but a file in some 
	messed-up mainframe, fragmented in the influx of 
	data, by the sheer number of calculations per 
	second required to set the bomb off, to bring 
	Harsh Realm on line.  To transfer it from our 
	world into theirs.

Hobbes just looks at him.

			HOBBES
	They’re going to do it soon.

			PINOCCHIO
	At sunset.


ACT FOUR

EXT. JAIL CELL – DAY

			HOBBES
	They’re gonna know something’s up if they see you.

			PINOCCHIO
	No way am I going back in that hole. You botch 
	this, we’re dead.  In a major way, you got that?

			HOBBES
	Just tell me what the plan is.

			PINOCCHIO
	You gain the kids’ trust. They already like you. 
	You’ve both got that blond hero-savior complex 
	about you.

Hobbes opens his mouth to protest, but Pinocchio continues too quickly.

			PINOCCHIO
	Find out where their supplies are. Where the 
	bomb is. How to disarm it.

			HOBBES
	How’m I gonna do that?  Ask them?

			PINOCCHIO
	You’re a smart boy, Hobbes. Figure something 
	out.  Florence, you’re with me.

He nods to her and they head into the woods.

Hobbes stands there, hands open at his sides, not certain what he has 
to do.  Then he turns to go back to camp.

Neither of them notice NOEL, lurking close enough to overhear 
everything.

INT. TENT – DAY

Hobbes, at the opening.

Leon sits on the floor cross-legged.  Drawing something with a pencil.

			HOBBES
	Mind if I come in?

Leon looks at him, a hard look, then nods.

Hobbes steps inside.

			LEON
	I am drawing a battle plan.  You’re an 
	experienced soldier, although you have no army 
	to lead.

Leon passes the sheet of paper to him and watches carefully as Hobbes’s 
eyes roam over the very precise drawing.  Hobbes hands it back.

			HOBBES
	Is that really the way you intend to take out 
	Santiago?

Leon looks at him questioningly.

			HOBBES
	You raised your army because you and your 
	brother have special powers. People respect and 
	fear you.

			LEON
	We raised our army because we are great 
	warriors.  We do not need special powers to win 
	our battles.

			HOBBES
	How many battles have you won?

			LEON
	Three.  How many battles have you won? Single-
	handed, with only your brother at your side?

			HOBBES
	Pinocchio isn’t –

			LEON
	Isn’t he? One of you is weak, and one of you is 
	strong.  You need each other to survive.

EXT. FOREST – DAY

Pinocchio is agitated.

			PINOCCHIO
	He’s gonna have to produce a miracle to pull 
	this one off.

Florence just looks at him.

			PINOCCHIO
	Our asses are dust.

A small hand catches his sleeve and Pinocchio begins to brush him away 
as he would a mosquito, then he looks at Florence, and looks down.  
Noel is standing there.

			PINOCCHIO
	Great.  And the kid overhears all our plans.

He looks again to Florence.

			PINOCCHIO
	I hate killing kids.

			NOEL
	Please.  Listen to me.

His voice is so soft Pinocchio has to lean in to hear him.

			NOEL
	I can help you.

			PINOCCHIO
	You can help me? Why would you?

Noel looks to Florence, and Pinocchio frowns at Florence, wondering why 
the kid wants encouragement from her. But it’s innocent – she smiles at 
him and Noel looks back to Pinocchio.

			NOEL
	I’m afraid of Leon.  I don’t want him to be me.

INT. TENT – DAY

Hobbes leans back, looking at Leon.

			HOBBES
	But your brother is you.

			LEON
	No. He is not me.  He is not any part of me.  
	And yet…

He looks at Hobbes, almost trying to seduce him.

			LEON
	I need him.

He picks up his pencil and his paper again.

			LEON
	You do not seem upset your friend will die at 
	sunset.

			HOBBES
	Maybe he won’t.

Leon looks at him, calculating, and Hobbes flashes him a semi-phony 
grin.  Letting the kid know what he’s up against.

Hobbes takes his pencil.

			HOBBES
	Let me show you how to plan a real battle.

EXT. FOREST – DAY

Florence has put one hand on Noel’s shoulder, holding him against her.  
With her other hand, she ruffles his hair gently, comfortingly.

Pinocchio crouches to get down on the kid’s level.

			PINOCCHIO
	You know what your brother’s planning?

			NOEL
	I miss my mom.  Leon says to be a man, that 
	we’re men, that we’re warriors and it can’t hurt 
	us, but I miss her. She shouldn’t be dead. Leon 
	didn’t have to kill her.

Pinocchio sighs, then uses the corner of his shirt to dry the boy’s 
tears.

			PINOCCHIO
	I know you miss her. Men cry. Even grown men cry.

He looks up at Florence and wipes the boy’s tears again.

			PINOCCHIO
	Why did Leon hurt your mom?

Noel rubs his eyes, trying to hide his face. He seems much younger than 
he is.

			NOEL
	Because she talked to you. About us. And because 
	she looked at our book.

			PINOCCHIO
	What book?

			NOEL
	The book about the bomb.

			PINOCCHIO
	What do you know about the bomb, Noel?

			NOEL
	It was bad.

			PINOCCHIO
	What else about the bomb?

Noel looks at him cautiously.

			NOEL
	I shouldn’t be talking to you.

He breaks away from Florence and runs off into the woods.

			PINOCCHIO
	Noel!

He looks at Florence, exasperated.

			PINOCCHIO
	Kids.

INT. TENT – DAY

Hobbes is sketching on the notepad while Leon looks on.

			HOBBES
	What you need is firepower.  You can have all 
	the men in the world, but if the other side has 
	more arms than you, you’re going to lose.  And 
	while you have a lot of men, you don’t have much 
	firepower.

			LEON
	We have all the firepower we need.

			HOBBES
	Against Santiago’s army?  I don’t think so.

Leon looks at him.

			LEON
	You treat me as an equal.

			HOBBES
	We are both soldiers.  We fight for the same 
	cause.

Leon continues to give him a measuring stare.  Then he pushes up from 
the ground, leaving his paper and pencil behind him.

			LEON
	I will show you our firepower.

As an afterthought, he picks up the book, pressing it to his body with 
one hand as a child might a security blanket.  He takes Hobbes’ hand, 
leading the man as though he were a child.

EXT. TENT – DAY

Leon glances up at the sky.

			LEON
	It’s almost sunset.

EXT. WOODS – DAY

Pinocchio is pacing, looking for Noel.

			PINOCCHIO
	We’re going to have to find it ourselves.

Florence nods.

			PINOCCHIO
	They would need tools.  Room to work.

The idea catches fire in his mind.

			PINOCCHIO
	Of course.

He heads back to camp.

Florence grabs his arm, shakes her head: you can’t go back there.

			PINOCCHIO
	I’ll risk it.

INT. CAMP BUILDING – DAY

The long table is clear, the ammunition and food put away.  Its white 
tablecloth hangs neatly to the floor.

Leon looks at Hobbes and set the book down on the table.

			LEON
	Have you ever seen a nuclear bomb before?

Hobbes waits, anticipating.

EXT. CAMP – DAY

Pinocchio rushes to the square at one end of camp.  He stands in the 
middle of the cleared area.  The twins’ mother’s body is no longer 
there. 

			PINOCCHIO
	This has to be it.  It has to be right here.  
	This is where she died.

He looks up, at the tent they occupied.

			PINOCCHIO
	There was a reaction last night.  That killed 
	her.  That’s how we got the burns.

He raises one hand to his forehead unconsciously.

He looks at Florence, who has one hand raised, pointing.

For a second, he doesn’t see it.  The pattern is buried beneath the 
twilight shadows of the trees.  But then it becomes clear – the black 
shadows of those who have died, the shadows melding into one another, 
baked into the ground.

INT. CAMP BUILDING – DAY

Leon gets down and slides under the tablecloth. He emerges dragging an 
ordinary looking battered brown suitcase.  He looks at Hobbes and flips 
it open, revealing the bomb mechanism.

Leon grins. It’s the first time we’ve seen him smile and there’s death 
in his expression.

Eager to impress, he touches the parts of the bomb as he enumerates 
them for Hobbes:

			LEON
	Explosives, to make it more powerful.  The 
	timer, for the detonator, so our army will have 
	time to get to safety.  Fuses.  Packing material 
	to keep it all steady in the suitcase until 
	we’re ready to go.

			HOBBES
	Something’s missing, isn’t it?

Leon looks at him.

			HOBBES
	You need something to start the reaction, don’t you?

			LEON
	Of course.  

			HOBBES
	Where is it?

			LEON
	I can’t show you. Not yet.

The door bangs open. Noel stands there, his eyes wild.

Leon’s smile grows serene.

			LEON
	The moment has arrived.

Hobbes jumps to his feet.

			HOBBES
	No! You can’t do this! It’s wrong, you know it’s 
	wrong.  You were there when the bomb went off. 
	You know the pain and destruction it caused.  
	You can’t do that again.

He grabs the suitcase and smashes it, tearing the parts out and 
throwing them on the ground.

Leon looks at Noel.

			LEON
	They’re in the woods. 

Noel nods.

			LEON
	You’re not the only one who’s learned about our 
	plan.  We don’t have to go to Santiago.  He’s 
	come to us.

			HOBBES
		(to Noel)
	You can stop this.

			PINOCCHIO
	No. He can’t.

Hobbes looks up, to Pinocchio slouching in the doorway.

			PINOCCHIO
	I can.

Pinocchio holds out his hand. He opens his fingers and a blue glow 
begins to slowly fill the room with wondrous light.

The twins’ faces light up with it.

			PINOCCHIO
	Newton’s law: Matter cannot be created or 
	destroyed.

Pinocchio closes his fingers.

			PINOCCHIO
	Except in Harsh Realm.

He puts one hand over the other, as though crushing the ball of light.

			HOBBES
	Pinocchio –

Pinocchio opens his fingers and the blue glow is there again, only this 
time it’s different. It digitizes and goes out.  Pinocchio’s hands are 
empty.

			PINOCCHIO
	An atom…is a living thing. Destroy it, and we’re 
	all destroyed.

He turns his back on the twins.

Leon charges at him.

			LEON
	No! That was my only chance!

Pinocchio deflects the blow as what it is – an attack from a small, 
thin adolescent.  He knocks Leon back into the dirt without missing a 
step.

			PINOCCHIO
	Come on, Hobbes.

He keeps walking.

EXT. CAMP – DAY

Outside the tent, Florence is behind the wheel of the car. Dexter barks 
at the sight of Hobbes.  Pinocchio climbs in back, Hobbes sits up 
front.

Florence floors it.

INT. PINOCCHIO’S CAR – DAY

Pinocchio rests his head back against the seat.  We see now that he’s 
sweating profusely.

He sighs.

Hobbes twists in his seat, sees Pinocchio’s condition.

			HOBBES
	What’s going on?

Pinocchio grins, opens his hand.  The blue glow is there.

Hobbes gapes.

Pinocchio closes his fingers, hiding the light.

			PINOCCHIO
	Sleight of hand. Oldest trick in the book.

He smiles weakly.

			PINOCCHIO
	And they fell for it.

Florence glances at him worriedly and pulls the car over.

Pinocchio pulls himself into a sitting position.

EXT. FOREST – DAY

Between the shadows of the trees, they get out of the car. Pinocchio is 
visibly weak as he stumbles over to a HOLE IN THE GROUND.

			PINOCCHIO
	They say this well goes straight to the center 
	of the earth.  If you drop something down it, it 
	never hits bottom. Just keeps going.

He drops the radioactive material down the well, followed by a scooping 
handful of dirt.

Then he collapses.

Florence rushes to him, propping him up, administering aid.  Hobbes 
watches, cautiously, until Pinocchio sits up on his own.

			PINOCCHIO
	Thanks.
	
			HOBBES
	That was a stupid thing you did.

Pinocchio gets up.

			PINOCCHIO
	You’re welcome.

He ambles back to the car.

INT. SANTIAGO’S OFFICE – DAY

Once again, Inga is sitting before General Santiago.

			INGA
	You averted the crisis.  Excellent work, 
	General.

			SANTIAGO
	You assume it was my doing?

Inga is mildly surprised.

			INGA
	What other man would have the power to stop a 
	nuclear holocaust – even one on a small scale?

She smiles at him, on the seductive side of flirtatious – an “I’m 
right, aren’t I?” kind of smile as she leans back in her chair.

Santiago returns the expression.

			SANTIAGO
	It didn’t happen this time.  But there is a 
	storm coming.  One that once it has begun, no 
	one will be able to stop.

She looks at him, blinks, as wide-eyed as she ever gets.

			SANTIAGO
	No one.

END.


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