Redemption
written by Megan Reilly
eponine119@worldnet.att.net

TEASER

EXT. SANTIAGO CITY ALLEY - NIGHT

Pinocchio sits on the ground, hidden in shadow.  His knees are pulled 
up, making him as small as possible. Hiding.  His weapon still in his 
hand.

He's breathing hard.

			PINOCCHIO (VO)
	I have done what they said no man could do.  

Heavy footsteps as Republican Guard run past him on the main street, 
responding to the alarm.

			PINOCCHIO (VO)
	I executed General Omar Santiago.

DISSOLVE TO:

INT. SANTIAGO'S BEDROOM - NIGHT - A FEW MINUTES EARLIER

The scene from the end of "Betrayal."  Santiago and Inga in bed 
together, Pinocchio standing there, his weapon at the ready.

			PINOCCHIO (VO)
	The one who kills Santiago controls the game.

Inga stumbles backward out of bed, thinking he's going to shoot her.

			PINOCCHIO (VO)
	They will know I'm the one who did this.  She 
	saw. That was the plan.  The plan Hobbes and I 
	crafted when Santiago came to me with his offer.

CLOSE ON THE GUN
As he fires

In the same motion, Pinocchio smoothly turns and runs back out through 
the door.

			PINOCCHIO (VO)
	I don't know why I ran.  Habit.  Fear. 

Inga begins to take another step back, horror in her eyes, and faints 
dead away.

EXT. ALLEY - NIGHT

Picking up Pinocchio again, excited and afraid.

			PINOCCHIO (VO)
	I never wanted to assume control.  I just wanted 
	to stay alive.  

O.S., Republican Guard begin to cluster outside the building.

			GUARD (OS)
	Is it true?

			INGA (OS)
	Yes.  General Santiago is dead.

Pinocchio begins to slide up the wall, to his feet.  Standing taller and 
prouder than we've ever seen him.

A flashlight illuminates his face.  Inga & the Guard have found him and 
he pushes away from the wall, the gun still in his hand.

			INGA
	This is the man who will rule us now.

			PINOCCHIO (VO)
	All this is only temporary.  Till Hobbes gets here.


ACT ONE

INT. WATERS' OFFICE - NIGHT

A pair of Guard toss Hobbes and Florence back into Waters' office.

			HOBBES
	What?

He stops when he sees the expression on Waters' face.

			WATERS
	You did this.

Hobbes says nothing, trying to hide the anxious anticipation on his 
face.

			WATERS
	You wanted to destroy Harsh Realm, you may well 
	have succeeded.

He turns, flicking a remote control.  An ugly painting on the wall 
wavers and then settles into the general outline of a flat, LCD TV 
screen.

Hobbes looks to Waters.

			HOBBES
	You didn't order us in here to watch the Andy 
	Griffith show.

			WATERS
	Look, damn it.

The crystals settle on the wall.  Pinocchio fills the TV screen in his 
tattered clothing.  In the corner of the screen, a small icon like CNN's 
- SCNN.

Florence looks at Hobbes, confused, then takes a step toward the 
television, a deep frown on her face.

			PINOCCHIO 
	General Omar Santiago is dead.

Florence's mouth drops open slightly in reaction.

			PINOCCHIO
	I shot him at approximately thirteen minutes 
	past ten this evening.  As of now, Santiago City 
	as you knew it no longer exists.  The Republican 
	Guard do not exist.  There is no more occupied 
	territory.  No more fence.  No more insiders and 
	outsiders.  We all live here together.

			WATERS
		(muttering)
	He sounds like Kevin freaking Costner.

Hobbes glances at him.  Florence is still floored.

On the screen, Pinocchio falters, detaching himself from the speech he's 
been giving.

			PINOCCHIO
	That's all for now.  Get some sleep. There'll be 
	time to work it out in the morning.

He takes a couple steps back, out of focus, and the camera turns to a 
reporter.

Waters turns to Hobbes.

			WATERS
	Do you have any idea what you've done?

			HOBBES
	What makes you think I had anything to do with 
	this?

Hobbes gives Waters a smug look.  Then he puts his hand on Florence's 
arm.  She's still staring at the screen, a lost bewildered look on her 
face.  Hobbes tugs at her arm, pulling her away, and they leave Waters 
alone.

Waters falls back into his chair.  Looking back at the screen.

ON SCREEN:

			REPORTER
	As one of the late General's closest advisors, 
	you must be shocked by this turn of events.

REVERSE ON:

Inga.  She nods weakly.

			REPORTER
	And yet you're not exactly unfamiliar with the 
	man who would take General Santiago's place.  
	What do you think Mike Pinocchio will do?

			INGA
	I'm afraid I can't comment.  I honestly have no 
	idea.

Shakily she turns to leave.

WIDER ANGLE TO:

INT. GOVERNMENT HOUSE - NIGHT

A madhouse of reporters and temporary television lights.

Inga goes to the door of Santiago's office and slips inside.

INT. SANTIAGO'S OFFICE - NIGHT

Pinocchio stands behind Santiago's desk, his back to the door.  Standing 
as though he's in pain, bent over the credenza behind the desk.

CLOSE ON:

The memorabilia of Santiago's life.  An old photograph from early Army 
days - Santiago with hair.  A medal sealed inside a glass case.  A 
miniature American flag with 13 stars in a circle.

Pinocchio touches the flag and speaks without turning around.

			PINOCCHIO
	There's nothing here to show what sort of man he 
	was.  Nothing personal.

			INGA
	This was personal.

He glances at her.

			PINOCCHIO
	I really did it.  I killed him.

She steps in close to him, fierce.

			INGA
	There's no time for sentimentality.  Take 
	advantage of the confusion. 

He nods, but his fingers are still caressing that American flag.

			INGA
	I always knew you had it in you.

She touches his lips with hers, but he doesn't move, doesn't react, and 
she steps back.

			INGA
	This is the only chance you'll get.  Don't waste 
	it.

INT. WATERS' OFFICE - NIGHT

Waters at the telephone, dialing frantically.

			PHONE VOICE
	The party you are calling is unavailable. Please 
	hang up and try your call again later.

He sighs, having heard this before.  Looks out the window at the camp 
something needs to be done with.  And dials again.

INT. BARRACKS - NIGHT

PAN:
Men in their beds, asleep. Unaware their world has changed.

Florence, in her old clothes, sits on her knees near the window, staring 
out.  Despite everything, the fence is still there.  There are no guards 
around, no one to care they aren't where they're supposed to be.

Hobbes is beside her, buttoning up his jacket.

			HOBBES
	This is why he left.

Florence doesn't look at him.

			HOBBES
	I know this must be hard for you.  You thought...I 
	was the one...

Florence glares at him.

Hobbes corrects himself quickly.

			HOBBES
	The one who would kill Santiago.

He waits for her response, then stares out the window himself.

			HOBBES
	We have to go there.

He puts his hand on her shoulder, gently, to her surprise.

			HOBBES
	In the morning. Get some sleep.

She gives him a long, hard look.

INT. WATERS' OFFICE - NIGHT

He dials again, eyes on the TV.

The phone RINGS and connects.

			WATERS
	What the hell is going on?

			INGA 
	I don't have time for this right now.

She hangs up on him.

INT. HALLWAY - NIGHT

Inga stands outside the portal room, tucking her cell phone back into 
her pocket.  She stands in front of the barcode reader, and the door 
opens.

She goes to the chair and sits down.

INT. PROJECT WAREHOUSE - NIGHT

Inga rises from her gurney.  A technician slips a robe over her 
shoulders and Inga pulls it around her.  She stands there staring at row 
after row of soldiers, immobile, fueling Harsh Realm with their dreams.

			TECHNICIAN
	There's no one here.  They weren't expecting 
	you.

Inga turns on her, eyes flashing as she reaches for her clothes.

			INGA
	Get someone here. Now.

INT. PROJECT OFFICES - NIGHT

Inga sits at the table, fully dressed.  The clock ticks past midnight.

TIME CUT TO:

The clock ticks past 12:30.

Inga gets to her feet, angry.

EXT. COUNTRY STYLE HOUSE - NIGHT

Inga stands on a dark porch.  Pounds on the door. Waits. Nothing.

She looks at the dark sedan parked in the driveway.

Pounds on the door, harder.

Lights come on inside the house. The porch light overhead stops her 
pounding on the door.

The Man in Charge appears, wrapped in a tattered bathrobe.

			MRS. MAN IN CHARGE (OS)
	Honey, what's going on?

			MAN IN CHARGE
	This had better be good.

He slips out onto the porch, pulling the door closed behind him.  Stands 
there in his bare feet, waiting.

			INGA
	Santiago's dead.

The Man in Charge blinks.

			MAN IN CHARGE
	Then it's up to you to see our plans are carried 
	out.

He turns to go back inside, the matter settled.

			INGA
	Sir -

He pauses, hand on the door. Pissed.

			MAN IN CHARGE
	After all, we know exactly where to find you in 
	the real world.

Inga takes a step back as the door slams in her face.

INT. PINOCCHIO'S APARTMENT - NIGHT

The faces of reporters on TV play as blobs through the filter of an 
empty glass, held up to the light.

Pinocchio is slumped back on the couch, a huge bottle of liquor beside 
him.  From the redness of his eyes, the level in the bottle, and the 
fact that it's a water glass in his hand, we can tell he's been at this 
a while.

Dexter is sitting in his lap, and Pinocchio's other hand rests on the 
dog's head, idly scratching his ears.

The door opens and Inga comes in.  She stops short, looking at him.

			INGA
	You're wasted.

			PINOCCHIO
	Remind me to revoke your security clearance.

She closes the door.

			INGA
	What the hell do you think you're doing?

He refills the glass and holds it out to her.

			PINOCCHIO
	Sorry. Only got the one.

She takes it from him and sets it down away from them.  He frowns, his 
eyes following it.  Inga looks oddly at the dog.

			PINOCCHIO
	Drink. We ought to celebrate.  Ding dong, 
	Santiago's dead!

He picks up the bottle and drinks from it directly.

			INGA
	What is wrong with you?

He meets her eyes.

			PINOCCHIO
	I swore when I took off that uniform I'd die 
	before I took another life.

			INGA
	You're crying for Santiago?

			PINOCCHIO
	The gun felt so damn good in my hand.  And I 
	wanted him to die.

			INGA
	You can't take it back now, Michael.

She reaches out and smooths down his hair, a comforting gesture that 
rings ever so slightly false.  But he closes his eyes and leans into her 
hand, turning his head and nuzzling about her wrist.

			PINOCCHIO
	I wish I could forget the past between us.

He opens his eyes and nails her with his gaze.

			PINOCCHIO
	What do you want?

			INGA
	The people will be waiting to hear from you. We 
	need to start planning.

			PINOCCHIO
	_ We _ don't need to do anything.

He nudges Dexter and the dog jumps down, scurrying away.  Pinocchio gets 
to his feet.

			PINOCCHIO
	I told you to stay the hell away from me and I 
	meant it.

He puts his hands on her, dragging and shoving her toward the door.  She 
struggles, but he wins, depositing her in the hallway and shutting the 
door soundly behind her.  Shoves one of the heavy chairs in front of it 
to keep her out.

INT. HALLWAY - NIGHT

Inga, outside Pinocchio's apartment.  She stamps her foot, but the look 
on her face is more worried than angry.

			INGA
	Damn it.

INT. BARRACKS - NIGHT

Hobbes kneels next to his bunk where Florence is asleep. He pulls the 
thin blanket up over her shoulders and then steps back, watching her.

He eases out of the barracks.


ACT TWO

EXT. WORK CAMP - DAYBREAK

Hobbes at the fence in the darkness.  The perimeter lights have been 
shut off.  After a moment of examining the fence, Hobbes picks up a rock 
and hurls it.

When it strikes the fence, it burns and sets off sparks.

In the next second, the entire section of fence DISAPPEARS.

			WATERS
	All you had to do was ask.

He stands behind Hobbes, remote device in his hand.

			HOBBES
	I won't go until you let them go.

			WATERS
		(bitter)
	I'm waiting for my orders.

			HOBBES
	I'm ordering you now. Set them free.

			WATERS
	I don't take orders from you.

The remote still rests gently in his hand and he nods toward the fence.

			WATERS
	There's your chance, Hobbes. Take it.  You can 
	make it to the portal by morning.  

			HOBBES
	Why are you doing this?

			WATERS
	You saved my life.  Now go. Before Pinocchio 
	finds you.

Hobbes shoots him a funny look.

			WATERS
	You don't think he'd send you home?  You're a 
	threat to him, now more than ever.  He'll kill 
	you when he finds you.

Hobbes closes his mouth, determined.

			HOBBES
	Liberate the camp.

			WATERS
	No.

			HOBBES
	Then I will.

He marches past, back to toward the barracks.

INT. GOVERNMENT HOUSE - COUNCIL ROOM - DAY

A few of Santiago's advisors. A couple of Republican Guard, still in 
partial uniform, looking strange and lost without their berets.  And 
Inga, of course.

Pinocchio sits at the apex of the U shaped table, his face pale, 
expression blank.

			INGA
	The city has erupted into chaos.  Rioters from 
	beyond the fence have stormed in, most of them 
	determined to kill the citizens of Santiago City 
	- We'll have to change the name.

Pinocchio's expression doesn't change at her implied question.

			INGA
	By our projections, a complete breakdown of all 
	social systems will occur within the hour if 
	order isn't restored.  I recommend armed troops-

			PINOCCHIO
	No.

Inga gets to her feet, pounds her hands on the table.

			INGA
	People are dying!  How can you just sit back and 
	let them kill each other?

Pinocchio looks down.

			INGA
	If you're not going to do something, I will.

She heads for the door, but he's on his feet.  A monstrous CRASH stops 
her.

Pinocchio stands in front of what was the frosted glass map.  He sets 
down the chair in his hands in the pile of glass shards.

			PINOCCHIO
	Order will restore itself.  All this will 
	settle.

			INGA
		(shocked)
	You are going to stand back.  Passively see what 
	happens.  You always were a coward.

She leaves.

			ADVISOR
	Santiago would have had her killed for such 
	words.

			PINOCCHIO
	Shut up.

INT. BARRACKS - DAY

Hobbes throws the doors open. Light blasts the room.

			HOBBES
	Come on, get up!  Come on!

He starts throwing people out of bed.

			HOBBES
	Santiago's dead! You're free!

No one moves.  They look at him as though he's gone insane.

			HOBBES
	Go! Go on! You're free!

Still no one moves.

			HOBBES
	Damn it --

There's no use.  He turns and stomps out.

EXT. BARRACKS - DAY

Florence at his side, they head for the fence.

			WATERS
	Where do you think you're going?

			HOBBES
	Home.

Waters walks quickly, backwards, to try to fend him off.

			WATERS
	You had your chance, Hobbes. You blew it.

			HOBBES
	I'll break your neck with my bare hands if you 
	don't get out of my way.

Hobbes plows on as Waters drops back.  Florence glances back at him, and 
Waters reluctantly clicks the fence. Letting them go.

TIME CUT TO:

EXT. PINOCCHIO'S CAR - DAY

As they left it.

INT. PINOCCHIO'S CAR - DAY

Hobbes sliding inside, turning the key and fiddling with the dials on 
the ancient radio.  Nothing but static.

The passenger door closes. Florence looks at him. Hobbes slams shut the 
driver's door and smashes the gas.

EXT. FOREST - DAY

The car hurtling down the path, toward the city.

INT. PINOCCHIO'S APARTMENT - DAY

Dexter moves anxiously around Pinocchio's feet.

Pinocchio stands behind the curtain of the window, high above the 
ground, looking out.

Pinocchio's POV:
Rioting in the street.  A melee between those in nice, clean clothes and 
those in rags.  Their mouths open, screaming, but the sound is blocked 
by the windows.

Pinocchio rests his head against the window with a sigh.

He glances to the TV, and reaches for the remote. The sound snaps on 
suddenly.

			REPORTER
	No one knows where he is now, this mysterious 
	man who murdered General Santiago and 
	disappeared.

			PINOCCHIO
	They ain't looking very hard.

ON THE SCREEN:

EXT. GOVERNMENT HOUSE - DAY

Inga, with a microphone shoved in front of her.  The roar of the crowd 
is overwhelming and people jostle her.

			INGA
	Troops will be deployed at fifteen hundred 
	hours.  Order in the city must be maintained.

			REPORTER
	Is this by the orders of --

			INGA
	They're my orders.

The TV abruptly shuts off.

Pinocchio rests his head back against the window, eyes dull.

The door opens.

			PINOCCHIO
		(unconcerned)
	Could've sworn I locked that...

			HOBBES
	Bang.  You're dead.

Pinocchio turns at the sound of his friend's voice, a smile beginning to 
play on his face.

			HOBBES
	You let just anybody walk in here?

			PINOCCHIO
	I got bodyguards outside. Hundreds of 'em.

He glances Hobbes up and down, taking in his rumpled clothes, the dirt 
smudged on him.  Hobbes nods to him, then kneels to let Dexter lick the 
dirt off his face.

			PINOCCHIO
	Where's --?

Boom!  Out of nowhere, a strong right hook sends Pinocchio reeling.

As he blinks and tries to maintain his balance, his question is 
answered.

			PINOCCHIO
		(wryly)
	Florence.

He takes her hands in his before she has a chance to sock him again.  
Her expression is wary, still ready for a fight.

			PINOCCHIO
	We couldn't tell you.

She jerks her hands, to hit him again, but he holds her firm.

			PINOCCHIO
	If we could convince you...

She breaks away and punches him again, in the stomach.  He howls and 
falls back into the chair.

			PINOCCHIO
	I deserved that.

Hobbes shuts the door.

			HOBBES
	We got troubles.

			PINOCCHIO
	You're telling me?

INT. PLUSH, SMOKY ROOM - DAY

Rich, elegant furnishings, the air heavy with smoke and shadows.  A 
cadre of MEN in nice suits, looking like politicos or businessmen, 
linger in the chairs and in the corners.

			LEADER
	You're telling me you're allowing them to 
	destroy this world we so carefully created?

Inga opens her mouth to respond and thinks the better of it.  A beat 
passes as the Leader's eyebrow arches further.

			INGA
	Everything is under control.

			LEADER
	That's what Santiago said, and look where it got 
	him.

Inga glances away.

The Leader moves forward, demanding her attention.

			LEADER
	Listen to me, young lady.  I was working on his 
	project before you were born.  Nothing is going 
	to ruin Harsh Realm.  Nothing.

Inga glares openly at him.

			LEADER
	The plans Santiago set in motion must go 
	forward.  Without delay.  Or there may be 
	unexpected consequences.

INT. PINOCCHIO'S APARTMENT

They have found Hobbes a new set of clothes.  Pinocchio almost fusses 
over him, brushing a spare bit of lint from the perfectly tailored 
shoulders.

			PINOCCHIO
	Ready for your close-up?

Florence sits on the couch, arms around her knees. Dexter is with her.  
Neither looking very happy about this.

			HOBBES
	I'm not sure if I -

			PINOCCHUIO
	You'll do great.

			HOBBES
	Why should they listen to me?

A long moment.

			PINOCCHIO
		(lightly, with an underlying edge)
	'Cause you're the one, kid.

INT. COUNCIL ROOM - DAY

The Advisors seated around the table. The (former) Republican Guard 
gathering to both sides.  Bright lights and reporters in back, like at a 
White House Press briefing.

The doors open and Pinocchio strides in, still in his tatty clothes, his 
hair mussed.  He waits a beat for the cameras to get rolling.

			PINOCCHIO
	I am not your leader.  Everything I have done, I 
	have done for one purpose and for one man.

He raises his hand toward the doors.

			PINOCCHIO
	Tom Hobbes.

Pinocchio takes several steps back as Hobbes makes his entrance.

Hobbes quickly assumes control over the reporters in the room.

			HOBBES
	What Santiago did was wrong. He kept people 
	against their will.  He forced them to choose 
	between his way of life or no life at all.  He 
	is the cause of the fighting in the 
	streets...brother against brother, men made to 
	choose...

DISSOLVE TO:

HOBBES ON A TV SCREEN

INT. SANTIAGO'S APARTMENT - DAY

Waters turns away form the TV disgustedly.  Inga slips in through the 
front door, glances at the TV and then to Waters.

			INGA
	The prodigal returns.

			WATERS
	Where have you been?

Inga glances around.

			INGA
	This isn't the time or the place...

			WATERS
	He's dead.  He can't hear us. He can't threaten 
	us any more.

			INGA
	That's where you're wrong.  He still has power, 
	even beyond the grave.

Waters gives her a 'what the hell?' sort of look but she goes to the TV, 
standing before Hobbes' larger than life image.

			INGA
	You know him.  

She looks at Waters over her shoulder.

			INGA
	What's he going to do?

			WATERS
	He's not going to stay and rule the realm. He'll 
	go home to his beloved wife and country.

			INGA
	Sophie.

She says it to hurt Waters.

			INGA
	And you?  Will you be returning home?

			WATERS
	Know any reason why I shouldn't?

They're bluffing each other.

			INGA
	Of course not.

Waters puts his hands on her arms, almost playfully, but the touch 
becomes menacing within a second.

			WATERS
	Then why did you come back?

INT. COUNCIL ROOM - DAY

Hobbes is still talking to the reporters - to the public - about truth, 
justice & the American way.

Pinocchio looks at Florence.

			PINOCCHIO
	He doesn't need us any more.

He nods to her and turns to go.

She doesn't move, her eyes locked on Hobbes.

Pinocchio puts his hand on her shoulder.  She bristles away. He looks at 
her, but she won't look at him.  Finally he drops his hand and walks 
away.

That's when Florence turns and looks at him, leaving.

EXT. THE FENCE - DAY

Pinocchio walks up to it, hands in pockets.  He stops to consider it. 
Everything around him is quiet.  No people. No anything.

He picks up a rock and hurls it at the fence.

Nothing happens. No fire, no electricity, no sparks.

He doesn't bother with a rock to find the glitch and slip through it.

EXT. CHURCH BAR - DAY - ESTABLISHING

INT. CHURCH BAR - DAY

The place is empty.  Pinocchio strides up to the bar, looks around. 
Leans over it, helps himself to a bottle of whiskey and a cute little 
shot glass which he fills until it overflows the rim.

He downs it, eyes watering.

No one bothers him.

INT. COUNCIL ROOM - DAY

The room cleared. Hobbes' eyes are bright from his speech giving and he 
practically bounces, filled with excited energy as he goes to Florence.

			HOBBES
	That was great!  I said all the right things. It 
	was like...it wasn't even me talking, like I was 
	listening to someone else who knew exactly what 
	to say.

He grins at her, but her eyes are sad.

			HOBBES
	Where's Pinocchio?

Florence tips her head toward the door.

Hobbes takes a few steps toward it.

			HOBBES
	Pinocchio!

He turns back to Florence, whose expression now says it all.

			HOBBES
	He's gone?

She nods.

Hobbes plasters on a stoic, if disappointed expression, and takes his 
dog from her.

INT. SANTIAGO'S APARTMENT - DAY

			INGA
	You're hurting me.

			WATERS
	You would have left me there to rot.

			INGA
	I suggest you let go of me, Major Waters. Right 
	now.

He releases her with a hiss of disgust.

			WATERS
	I thought we were on the same side.

			INGA
	We are.

			WATERS
	You're on every side but the losing one.

He starts for the door.

			INGA
	Where are you going?

			WATERS
	Home.

Inga makes an ugly face at his back, but doesn't try to stop him.

INT. GOVERNMENT HOUSE HALLWAY - DAY

Hobbes and Florence walking to the entrance to the portal room.  Hobbes 
has Dexter tucked under his arm.  They come to a stop and Hobbes gives 
the dog to Florence.

			HOBBES
	You'll take care of him for me.

It's not just the dog he's talking about.

Hobbes puts his hand on the door, ready to go inside.  To leave Harsh 
Realm behind.

He hesitates.

			HOBBES
	I wish you could come with me.  That you could 
	see it for yourself.  How different it is there.  
	You could meet Sophie...

He trails off and she shakes her head, knowing it's impossible. He seems 
to realize this himself and closes his mouth. Nodding.

Hobbes puts his hand against Dexter's face, patting the dog goodbye.  
And then he raises his other hand and touches Florence, skimming her 
cheek for the barest second.

			HOBBES
	Thank you.  For everything.

A long last look between them.

And he goes into the portal room.

INT. PORTAL ROOM - DAY

The dentist-style chair the room's only fixture.  The door closes 
ominously behind Hobbes and he looks at the chair.

Then he slides into it.

INT. SANTIAGO'S APARTMENT - DAY

			VOICE (OS)
	No one will be going home.

Inga's breath catches and she turns to see:

Santiago.

Alive and well.


ACT THREE

INT. PORTAL ROOM - DAY

Hobbes sits in the chair. Nothing happens. No light, no vanishing, 
nothing.  He squirms, waiting.  Then, giving up, twists around, looking 
for some kind of "on" button or control panel.

INT. SANTIAGO'S APARTMENT - DAY

Inga facing the not at all dead Santiago.

			INGA
	I thought you were -

			SANTIAGO
	You underestimate me.  That can be a dangerous 
	thing.

			INGA
	But you...he shot you.

Santiago tosses something to her...not quite throwing it at her, but not 
underhand and easy to catch, either.

It's a digi-wand.

			SANTIAGO
	You might consider keeping one around the 
	house...if someone was likely to assassinate you.

			INGA
	Why did you let everyone believe you were dead?  
	There's been panic, rioting in the streets -

			SANTIAGO
	I know.

He goes to the window.

HIS POV:
The disturbance in the street below.

			SANTIAGO
	It should prove something to them.  I am their 
	leader. Their savior.  And I can bring peace to 
	them again.

			INGA
	What about Hobbes? Pinocchio?

			SANTIAGO
	They'll be taken care of.

INT. CHURCH BAR - DAY

Pinocchio at the bar in the solitude of the establishment.  Examining 
the bottle as though it contains the mysteries of the universe.

The light patter of paws as Dexter runs over to him. Sits at his feet, 
staring up at him.

Pinocchio closes his eyes as though to ward off pain, then looks down at 
the dog.  Nudges him with his foot.

			PINOCCHIO
	Take off, you mangy mutt. Before you end up 
	somebody's dinner.

Florence leans against the bar and Pinocchio raises his head to look at 
her.

			PINOCCHIO
	Hobbes get home okay?

Florence makes a brief nod.

			PINOCCHIO
	Guess he was the one. The one who saved himself 
	instead of Harsh Realm.

Florence gives him a hard look: That's unfair.

Pinocchio rolls his eyes a bit, takes another drink.  He pours her one, 
sets it in front of her. She just looks at it.

			PINOCCHIO
	Gather your rosebuds while you may.

She looks at him: what the hell? Not realizing he's quoting.

He takes another drink.

INT. SANTIAGO'S APARTMENT - DAY

			INGA
	Taken care of how?

Santiago raises an eyebrow at her.

			INGA
	This changes your original plan, to bring 
	Pinocchio in and gain his trust to remove him 
	and Hobbes as an obstacle.

			SANTIAGO
	It changes nothing.

			INGA
	When are you going to reassume control?

			SANTIAGO
	Soon.

INT. PORTAL ROOM - DAY

Hobbes is out of the chair, examining it closely.  Ready to pull it 
apart to figure out how it works.

He jumps at the sound of someone trying the door.  He's ready, weapon 
drawn, but the time the door opens.

Waters walks in. It takes him a moment to notice Hobbes sitting there, 
gun pointed at him.

			HOBBES
	Give me one reason not to do it.

			WATERS
	Why aren't you home?

			HOBBES
	Broken. Sabotaged. I don't know. It doesn't work.

Waters walks over to it, checks the control panel Hobbes already has 
opened. None of the lights are lit.

			WATERS
	Disconnected from the system.

Hobbes' gun cocks at Water's head.

			HOBBES
	Reconnect it.

			WATERS
	I'm not a programmer, Hobbes. I'm a soldier. 
	Same as you.

He looks at Hobbes, trying not to let his fear show too much.  Hobbes 
looks a bit maddened.

			HOBBES
	There are other portals.

			WATERS
	If this one's down they're all down.

			HOBBES
	Who did this? Inga?

			WATERS
	She doesn't have the know how.

Waters looks at him.

			HOBBES
	Don't say it. Pinocchio's long gone, and he 
	couldn't do this if he wanted to.

			WATERS
	Santiago must be alive.

			HOBBES
	What?

			WATERS
	He's the only one with this kind of system 
	access.  This is something he would do.

			HOBBES
	Santiago's dead.

			WATERS
	You no longer believe that when Santiago dies, 
	the game is over?

			HOBBES
	I don't know what I believe any more.

He looks regretful - that was too personal a revelation.

			HOBBES
	Pinocchio killed Santiago.

			WATERS
	Did he?

			HOBBES
	He's not a traitor.

			WATERS
	He betrayed Santiago.  What makes you think -

			HOBBES
	I'm not Santiago!

They both grow silent as they hear heavy footsteps in the hall.

			WATERS
		(whisper)
	They're coming.

EXT. HALLWAY - DAY

A group of Republican Guard, in uniform, moving with weapons drawn 
toward the portal room.

INT. PORTAL ROOM - DAY

As the Republican Guard enter.

It's empty.

They make a quick sweep. A shake of the head and they take off.

INT. HALLWAY - DAY

Inga, with Waters and Hobbes.  Silent, holding their breath until the 
sound of the portal room door being secured.

			INGA
	That was too close.

Her eyes flick to Hobbes.

			INGA
	You've missed your chance now.

			HOBBES
	Santiago is alive?

Inga nods.

			WATERS
	How? You were there.

			INGA
	I don't know.  But he's alive.  And he's going 
	take over.

Hobbes chambers the cartridge in his gun.

			HOBBES
	Where is he?

			INGA
	Don't be a fool, Tom.

			WATERS
	Pinocchio set this up.

Hobbes stalks off down the hall.

			INGA
	Hobbes, wait.

Hobbes pays her no mind. Inga turns on Waters.

			INGA
	Santiago overheard our conversation in his 
	apartment. He was there.

			WATERS
	I'm not convinced this isn't all part of your 
	plan.

She gives him an angry, intense look.  Then turns on her heel to go, 
hair bouncing.

Waters grabs her arm and she glares at him.

			WATERS
	What happens now?

			INGA
	You'd better get back to your post.

She jerks away from Waters' grip. He leans against the wall with a sigh, 
watching her go.

INT. CHURCH BAR - DAY

Florence has taken a seat. Dexter is up on the counter.  Pinocchio has 
one arm draped over the bar, his head resting against it. He's not 
passed out - his eyes are open.

			PINOCCHIO
	Think I'd have better sense.  I believed in him.  
	Like I believed in Santiago, once.  Like I 
	believed in her.  When I was young.  Stupid.

Florence rests her hand against his shoulders.  Comforting.

			PINOCCHIO
	What the hell kind of place is this?  Can't 
	trust anyone...always hungry, always running.  
	No softness, no light, no...nothing.  At least 
	in the real world...

His voice breaks and he trails off.

			HOBBES
	I'd like my dog back.

			PINOCCHIO
	You were supposed to be home by now.

			HOBBES
	Change of plans.

He picks up Dexter, tucks him under his arm.  Ready to go.

			PINOCCHIO
	You miss this hellhole, Hobbes? Decide to come 
	back?

			HOBBES
	Santiago's alive.

			PINOCCHIO
	That's impossible.  I shot him.

			HOBBES
	Apparently you missed.

			PINOCCHIO
	I never miss.

But he's thinking back, analyzing in his mind.

			PINOCCHIO
		(worried)
	I didn't stick around to see him digitize.

			HOBBES
	Guess he didn't.

			PINOCCHIO
	You're taking this awfully well.

			HOBBES
	We can still strike.  He's still vulnerable.

			PINOCCHIO
	How many people know he's alive?

			HOBBES
	Two...three.

			PINOCCHIO
	Who?

			HOBBES
	Me. Waters. Inga.

			PINOCCHIO
	Great.

He turns back to the bar.

			HOBBES
	You know his plans.

			PINOCCHIO
	Not all of them.

Hobbes' quiet stare is palpable.

			PINOCCHIO
	Santiago plays it close. Nobody gets 
	all the pieces of the puzzle.

			HOBBES
	You know enough?

			PINOCCHIO
	There's not much time.

INT. SANTIAGO'S APARTMENT - DAY

Santiago has his computer screen up before him, studying projections.

Hands twine around his neck.  Inga.  He tries his best to ignore her 
until she reaches to shut the screen down.

			SANTIAGO
	Our benefactors must be appeased.

Inga removes her arms, takes several steps back. Santiago doesn't seem 
to care.  She goes to the window, sees the tanks rolling through the 
streets, scattering the rioters.

The elegant clock on the wall reads exactly three o'clock.

			INGA
	It's time.

INT. COUNCIL ROOM - DAY

Santiago makes a grand entrance.  His advisors are there, at attention, 
as are his best soldiers. Including Waters, who has a tight expression 
on his face.

A dark look crosses Santiago's face when he sees his glass map is gone, 
shattered.  He walks behind it.

			SANTIAGO
	The damage that has been done will be repaired.  
	Our enemy has acted and failed, and in failure, 
	proven that what we are working for here is the 
	only way.  To maintain order, a way of life.

			WATERS
	What about them, sir.

Santiago is surprised at the interruption.

			WATERS
	Our enemies.  How will they be dealt with?

			SANTIAGO
	Find them. Bring them to me -- alive.

He takes a second to regroup.

			SANTIAGO
	Make no mistake.  We have force and right on our 
	side. We shall prevail.

Waters is staring at Inga.  Santiago looks at her and catches this 
stare.  Inga quickly diverts her gaze, but not before Santiago's 
noticed.

The meeting breaks up, and Waters leaves quickly but not without a 
backward glance.

			SANTIAGO
	What happened while I was indisposed?

			INGA
		(bold)
	Nothing.

Santiago gives her a look. He doesn't particularly believe her.

INT. CHURCH BAR - DAY

Hobbes has his scrap of paper and his pencil out.  Pinocchio leans in 
close. They're in full planning mode.

			HOBBES
	Santiago --

			PINOCCHIO
	It doesn't matter about Santiago, not now.  

Hobbes gapes at him.

			PINOCCHIO
	Don't you get it, kid?  The plans have been 
	threatened.  Santiago's going to push them 
	through.  Destroy the real world before he loses 
	his chance.

			HOBBES
	Why?  

			PINOCCHIO
	Because he has to.

INT. SMOKY ROOM - DAY

The Leader & his compadres, gathered around what looks like a modified 
dentist's chair...or an electric chair.

One of the MEN pushes forward.

			MAN
	Let me try.

He throws himself into the chair, jams a set of headphones on his head.  
The other men stand back.

Nothing happens.

			LEADER
	Damn.

The other men look at him with alarm.

			LEADER
	He's locked us out.  Get me the Pentagon.

He holds out his hand for the telephone.

INT. PROJECT OFFICE - DAY

The MAN IN CHARGE, papers scattered before him, a telephone in his hand.

			MAN IN CHARGE
	Sir.  To what do I owe --

BEGIN INTERCUT:

			LEADER
	We need to send someone into Harsh Realm.

			MAN IN CHARGE
	That's impossible. No one can go in or out.  The 
	portal has been disabled --

			LEADER
	Then enable it!

			MAN IN CHARGE
	It isn't that simple.  It's been destroyed from 
	inside the game.

			LEADER
	You must have programmers --

			MAN IN CHARGE
	You and I both know there's only one person who 
	could possibly repair such damage to the 
	program. And she's inside the game.

			LEADER
	Darling Gretchen.

			MAN IN CHARGE
	Yes.

INT. SMOKY ROOM - DAY

There is a long pause as the Leader looks at the other men in the room.  
Their expectant eyes on him.

			LEADER
	Then we have no choice.  The countdown must be 
	stopped.

INTERCUT:

			MAN IN CHARGE
	Sir, not even the President himself --

			LEADER
	Leave that fool out of this. I gave you an 
	order, Sergeant. I expect to have it carried 
	out.

The Leader puts the telephone down.  But he does not look at ease.

INT. MISSILE SILO - DAY

The darkness of the closed-up room.  There is a counter, some old 
controls, a dusty chair.  Two slots for keys.  Unused now.  
Unneccessary.  Replaced by:

A COMPUTER

On its screen are red numbers, a countdown.

01:11:30

END ACT THREE

ACT FOUR

INT. CHURCH BAR - DAY

Pinocchio is getting his stuff together.  Reloading his gun.

			PINOCCHIO
	I'm going back in.

			HOBBES
	It's suicide.

Pinocchio flashes a grin at him.

			HOBBES
	Take Florence with you.

Pinocchio looks at her, and she raises her eyebrows.

			PINOCCHIO
	No dice. I gotta do this alone.

The three of them look at each other.  Not knowing if they'll see each 
other again.

Hobbes puts a hand on Pinocchio's shoulder, squeezes it.

			HOBBES
	Mike. Be careful.

			PINOCCHIO
	I'll see you, kid.

He walks out of the bar, a slight cowboy swagger in his slow step.  Like 
he doesn't really want to go.

Hobbes and Florence look at each other like 'what the hell do we do 
now?'

Then Florence grabs her gun and her bag and scrambles after Pinocchio.

Hobbes makes no move to stop her.  He stands at the bar, alone. 
Considering his options.

The sound of a gun being readied to fire.

Hobbes doesn't turn.

			HOBBES
	Put it down, Waters. You're not going to kill me.

He turns and faces his enemy.

INT. COUNCIL ROOM - DAY

Santiago, alone.  His computer is up in front of him again, but he's not 
looking at it.  He's staring at the place where his glass US map was.  
Behind it on the wall is a map of the world.

A long moment passes, the thoughts crossing his face so intense as to 
hold our intention.

Then he looks at the computer screen.  The countdown:

01:00:00

flicks down to 

00:59:59

Santiago at the keyboard, pressing the keys slowly, unwillingly, 
scrolling through screens.

A map of the US as a red spot appears over New York City, blossoms out.  
Lines trace across as other spots begin to appear in the traditional 
format of a simulated nuclear war game.

Until once again the map is still.  The green and brown colors of the 
topographical map are now ashy gray and black.

Santiago flips it back to the countdown.  And waits.

EXT. THE FENCE - DAY

Pinocchio barreling toward the fence, ready to slip through the glitch 
as he did before.

From behind him, a rock thrown hard.  It hits the fence and bursts into 
flame.  Pinocchio stops, and turns.  Knowing what he's going to find.

Florence.

			PINOCCHIO
	You can't come with me.

She walks right up to him. Determined.

			PINOCCHIO
	You can't come with me.

She's not going to give in.

He sighs, plants his feet.

			PINOCCHIO
	You need to be with Hobbes.  Take care of him.  
	You and I both know he's the only chance any of 
	us have in this godforsaken place.

She shakes her head, crosses her arms. Just as stubborn as he is.  Maybe 
a pointed look at the rock, now in flaming pieces on the other side of 
the fence.

			PINOCCHIO
	You've heard the stories, same as me.  The 
	warrior gives his life for the simple man.  
	Nothing you can do to stop that.

She gives him a challenging look: you don't believe that.  Even as he 
stands there with defeat written all over him.

Then she slips through a glitch in the fence and turns and looks back at 
him, waiting for him to follow her.

He gives a loud, angry sigh and follows her through.

INT. CHURCH BAR - DAY

Waters with his gun still pointed at Hobbes' head.

			WATERS
	You're awfully sure of yourself, Hobbes.

Hobbes has a cocky grin.

			HOBBES
	Santiago told you not to kill me.

Waters lets his gun drop, surprised.

			WATERS
	How did you -?

Now Hobbes turns.

			HOBBES
	Santiago's predictable.  He wants to do it 
	himself. Get some enjoyment out of it.

			WATERS
	I have to bring you back with me.

Hobbes holds up his hands.

			HOBBES
	I'm not exactly resisting.

Waters leans in close, threatening.

			WATERS
	What're you up to, Hobbes?

			HOBBES
	Saving that real world you want so much to go 
	back to.  

He brushes past Waters and leaves the bar.

EXT. CHURCH BAR - DAY

Waters' Humvee is parked outside and Hobbes walks over to it, letting 
himself in on the passenger side.

EXT. INSIDE THE FENCE - DAY

Pinocchio is walking fast. Trying to lose Florence, who refuses to be 
lost.  She catches up and shoves him.  When she has his attention, she 
gestures to him, then points at herself.

			PINOCCHIO
	I do not need you.

She looks at him defiantly, then pulls from her bag the book from part 
one.

Pinocchio stops and turns around, looking at her, as though he could 
somehow sense the book.

			PINOCCHIO
	No.

She nods: Yes.

			PINOCCHIO
	Give it to me.

She shakes her head, tucks it back away.  He's not going to get it.  She 
walks ahead of him.

INT. HUMVEE - DAY

Waters, driving. Pissed.

			HOBBES
	I want to see him.

			WATERS
	You'll see him, all right.  At your execution.

			HOBBES
	Why are you doing this?  We're on the same side.

			WATERS
	I don't want to die here, Hobbes.

			HOBBES
	But if you don't help me, this is all that's 
	going to be left.

			WATERS
	Your methods are weak and ineffectual. You don't 
	know the whole story.

			HOBBES
	But you follow Santiago blindly -

			WATERS
	Better than believing everything Mike Pinocchio 
	tells you.

Hobbes falls silent, his confident grin fading.  They're not going to 
agree, and no amount of persuasion will get Waters on Hobbes' side.

INT. SANTIAGO'S OFFICE - DAY

Inga is frantically searching for something, not even being neat or 
subtle about it.

			PINOCCHIO
	Fancy meeting you here.

He steps inside and she stops and looks at him.

			PINOCCHIO
	Reorganizing the General's files?

			INGA
	I have to find it.  He's going to destroy the 
	real world, Pinocchio.  It's been set into 
	motion. 

She goes back to her searching.

Pinocchio puts out his hand and Florence reluctantly puts the book into 
it.  She's glaring daggers at Inga.

			PINOCCHIO
	This what you're looking for?

Inga turns.

			INGA
	Where did you get that?

She reaches for the book, but Pinocchio slips it back to Florence, 
keeping it from Inga. The two women look ready to fight for it.

			PINOCCHIO
	You have to distract the General. We'll do the 
	rest.

			INGA
	How do I know I can trust you? Somebody with no 
	use for the real world and a VC?

			PINOCCHIO
	You don't.

A couple seconds as Inga decides she'll have to live with that.

INT. COUNCIL ROOM - DAY

Santiago rises to his feet as the door opens.  Waters enters. In the 
hall behind him, we can see Hobbes, flanked by ten or so Republican 
Guards.

			WATERS
	Hobbes, sir.

			SANTIAGO
	And Pinocchio?

			WATERS
	He'll be located. It's only a matter of time.

Santiago looks a little less than impressed.

			SANTIAGO
	Put this one in jail.  Make certain he doesn't 
	escape this time, Major.

Hobbes breaks free of the guard, storms into the council room, slams the 
door and secures it.

			HOBBES
	We need to talk.

Santiago is mildly amused by this turn of events.

			SANTIAGO
	I've won the game, and you've lost it.

Hobbes spins the computer screen around to see the countdown on it.

			HOBBES
	Stop this.

			SANTIAGO
	Why should I?

Hobbes glances at Waters, which catches Santiago's attention.

			HOBBES
	The game will be destroyed when the real world 
	is destroyed.  None of this will exist.
	
			SANTIAGO
	The things you've been told are a lie.  You've 
	chosen to believe those who are untrustworthy.  
	There is only one person who knows it all in 
	Harsh Realm, Lieutenant Hobbes. And that person 
	is not Pinocchio, or Waters or Inga Fossa or 
	your little dog Toto.  It's me.

We've never seen Santiago angry before. It's kind of cool.

			SANTIAGO
	You've no doubt been told, by one of your 
	dubious informants, that no computer can hold 
	all of Harsh Realm.  That it requires the 
	storage space and calculating power of the 
	soldiers sent into the game in order to operate.

Hobbes nods slightly.  Waters looks worried even though neither of them 
have so much as looked at him or mentioned his name.

			SANTIAGO
	Yet one who is dead in the real world can exist 
	inside the game. Do you think that's possible 
	under the scenario you've been told?

			HOBBES
	I don't know.

			SANTIAGO
	For all you know, you could be dead in the real 
	world.  Or Waters, or Pinocchio. Any one of the 
	people you consider to be real could have long 
	since ceased to exist in the real world.  Even 
	me.

A beat as we all absorb this statement.

			HOBBES
	Stop the countdown.

			SANTIAGO
	No.

Now he looks at Waters.

			SANTIAGO
	Take him away.

			WATERS
	Yes, sir.

He grabs Hobbes' arms roughly, and Hobbes goes willingly.

INT. HALLWAY - DAY

The clump of Republican Guard moving down the hall, rounding a corner.

From the opposite direction come Pinocchio, Inga and Florence.  
Pinocchio and Florence hang back as Inga approaches the doors to the 
council room.

She takes a moment to gather herself, then throws open the door.

			INGA
	General Santiago.

The door swings closed behind her.

Tense moments tick by. 

CLOSE ON
Pinocchio and Florence's faces. Well aware Inga could be telling 
Santiago everything. That their trust could be misplaced, that they 
could be about to die.

The moment stretches into infinity.

The doors to the council room open.  After a second, Inga appears.

			INGA
	There's not much time.

INT. COUNCIL ROOM - DAY

Santiago has been dropped to the floor, unconscious. Pinocchio steps 
over his body with barely a glance.

			PINOCCHIO
	What'd you do to him?

			INGA
	That's not important.

She looks pointedly at the computer screen.

The numbers are down to 00:04:29.

Pinocchio's eyes widen.  Slowly he looks to Florence.

Florence slides into the seat vacated by the unconscious Santiago, 
places the book on the table.

			INGA
		(to Pinocchio)
	She can't...

He gives her a sharp look.

			PINOCCHIO
	Can you?

Inga close her mouth, pouting a bit as she watches Florence.

Florence touches the keyboard tentatively.

Inga's face as the numbers continue to spiral down.

The tension on Pinocchio's face.

Florence puts her hand on the book and inhales deeply, as though drawing 
power from it.  Then when she begins to type, it's with more confidence.

The numbers continue to count down.  The room is silent but for the 
clacking of the keyboard.

Florence looks up at Pinocchio. Fear in her eyes.  She's suddenly not 
sure she can do this.  Her eyes flick over to Inga, who doubts her.

He moves to stand behind her chair, close to her.  He puts his hand on 
her shoulder.  Calming.  Assuring her.

Santiago groans and stirs.

Pinocchio's fingers dig into Florence's shoulder.

The numbers continue to count down.  Inga kneels next to Santiago, looks 
up at Pinocchio, at the numbers.

			INGA
	You'd better go.

			PINOCCHIO
	No.

			INGA
	He's coming round.  Save yourselves.

Florence bangs away at the keyboard

Pinocchio pulls her away

			INGA
	Hit me.

			PINOCCHIO
	What?

		INGA
	Otherwise he'll know I -

Florence obliges maybe a little too willingly.  Inga stumbles backward 
just as Santiago moves, pushing up into a sitting position, shaking his 
head.

The door closes quietly.

			SANTIAGO
	They got you too.

Inga's still dazed from the unexpected blow.

Santiago spies the computer, sees that the numbers have locked.

He lunges at it, presses in a code, but the numbers are frozen.

He looks at Inga, but she has no answers.

INT. MISSILE SILO - DAY

The Man in Charge stands in the room, having disturbed the dust and the 
plastic coverings.  The display on the monitor in the silo is frozen at 
the same numbers.

His cell phone RINGS.

He sighs, regaining his composure, and answers it.

			LEADER 
		(phone)
	I assume you stopped it.

			MAN IN CHARGE
	Yeah.

He twists a key and the monitor goes to black.

			LEADER
	Don't let it happen again.

The dial tone as the cell phone goes dead in the Man in Charge's ear.

INT. HALLWAY - DAY

Santiago comes tearing out of the council room.

			SANTIAGO
	Stop them!

Two Republican Guard further up the hall react and grab Pinocchio and 
Florence as they hurry past.

Santiago catches up.  He dismisses Florence with a glance.

			SANTIAGO
	Put these traitors with the other one.

Pinocchio & Florence exchange a look: the other one?

			SANTIAGO
	They die tomorrow.

He starts away.

			PINOCCHIO
	Hey, Omar.

Santiago stops, turns on Pinocchio. Ready to give him a good piece of 
his mind.

But Pinocchio's manner is mild.

			PINOCCHIO
	You say you're creating the ideal society.  But 
	you execute people without so much as a trial 
	and call it justice?

			SANTIAGO
	You want a trial? You want your crimes exposed 
	before everyone?

Pinocchio looks at him, not speaking.

			SANTIAGO
	So be it.

Off his face, we:

FADE OUT

END OF SHOW


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