author's note:
I in no way justify or excuse suicide. Suicide is wrong and
extremely uncool, it is the lowest form of self-pity and gets you no where.
This piece is not sponsoring suicide. The protagonist needs help and so do
all people who consider suicide a way out. It is NOT a way out, only coward
and *very* disturbed people commit suicide. You don't wanna be categorized
that way do ya?
copyrighted to Aria(crune@coqui.net) 1998
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To Drown
by Aria(crune@coqui.net)
I remember as if it were yesterday...a drowning feeling...sinking...
trying to hold on, but infinitely lost in a sea of hopelessness. In my
hands all I could hold on to was the smooth bottle of the pills. I did not
know or care what they were. I put as many pills as I could in my mouth
desperately trying to end the storm, the whirlwind of confusion and
hopelessness that tore at me violently from the inside. It was not a
moment to meditate, or to ponder, I had to do this fast. I have to do this,
I kept repeating to myself. At the time I did not notice that this was about
proving to myself I could do it. I swallowed the pills. In my momentary
madness I wanted them to act quickly-- so that I could fade away fast and
not realize what I was doing.
But something went wrong.
After I passed out, my mother came home early. She flew instantly
in action after seeing the crumpled body of her daughter in front of the
bathroom sink, hands clutching a bottle of Valium.
Paramedics came and worked hard to save my life-- harder than I
worked to take it and I came to, dazed and confused beside a weeping mother.
I spent some time in the hospital-- a lot of psychiatric help later I left to
go back home, where people whispered about 'the poor suicidal girl'.
I wandered about, studied for school, got a job...became normal.
I don't know why I tried to take my life that September afternoon.
I can only phantom bits and pieces.
But sometimes, late at night I wake up from this dream where I'm
drowning... sinking...
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