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Chapter 9 - Blistered at the River 

by Ciejye






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Jenny blinked as she remembered that day, focusing now on the task at hand she looked down the hall and slipped out of her room, if she was caught she would be in for a paddling at least and proudly the strop, her bottom tingled in anticipation  as she moved silently down the hall, her movements like a dance to avoid the creaky floorboards, walking toe heel in silence.

Once outside, she moved quickly to the barn, speaking softly to Soquili her horse she saddled him quickly, then turned to the black, spending several minutes talking quietly Jenny was able to slip the bridle on with little problems, the chill was in the air as Jenny led the majestic creature out of the bar, a quick look around  assured her no one was up yet.

Jenny mounted Soquili and with the blacks reins in one hand, she headed for the river. 

Once there she let Soquili free to graze, it would only take a whistle to bring him back to her again, then she turned to the black, Jenny didn't waste time trying to put a saddle on him she had no need. She had gentled Soquili bareback and though the black was bigger she planned to do the same with him. 

Taking her rope she attached one end to the bridle and the other end to a near by tee "I trust You Emo'ôhtavo Nonóma'e" she said calling the black by the Cherokee name for black thunder,, "I just don't have the time to waste tracking you down and catching you again " the black did a two step back clearly not appreciative of Jenny's efforts. 

Jenny continued to talk quietly to the beast as she led him in the chilly water. Hens head barely came up mid way on the horses body, being short never detoured Jenny from doing what she needed or wanted to do. Shivering in the chest deep icy water, she double checked the tether, and spoke in soothing tones to the lack " easy there, I will not hurt you, look at how big and powerful you are, you wont even feel me on your back "during this Jenny kept stroking the horses back applying more pressure each time, the black snorted once but stood still in the cold water. 

A moment later Jenny took firm hold of the blacks mane, and with a tug and a kick pulled herself up onto his back, 

the next three seconds were a blur Jenny tightened her legs on the black then second her bottom touched him, the black choose that moment to jump straight up in the air, then came back down hard, he began bucking with a wildness tempered only by the water, as a result he could not buck as hard of as fast as normal, Jenny stayed on for 4 seconds then was pitched head first into the cold water. 

She came up shivering but happy, what a thrill to have all the power beneath her. 

Jenny didn't realize she was too short and the black was too large for her to adequately hold on with her knees, she thought a moment as she soothed the skittish beast, there was no way she could tie her feet under h the black, besides being dangerous it was just not possible to do, finally she decided to tie a loop around him and tuck her toes in, that would keep her in the saddle for a longer period of time. 

Jenny remounted the black, dripping wet and chilled to the bone in the icy water. Again as soon as her butt hit the saddle, the black begin bucking hard and wild, trying to dislodge her. Jenny clung to his wild flying mane, and managed to remain mounted for 5 seconds this time before the world rotated and she was plunged into the freezing water again. The black just stood there and snorted as if laughing at her. 

Jenny laughed and splashed water at the black, "You think your so smart, just you wait, I can do this as long as you can." The black nickered in response. Jenny flicked her legs up, onto the black a third time, and remained stuck to his back for 6 seconds this time before taking flight. The water poured off her face and hair as she surfaced again. 

Just as she took hold of the black's inky mane, about ready to swing up into the saddle, a voice slapped her like a brick wall. "FREEZE baby girl!" 

Jenny knew better than to disobey that voice, though the thought was there, firmly in her mind. "Adam, what are you doing here?" Jenny asked. 

"I might ask YOU the same thing, if I didn't already know." Adam stated plainly. "However, I see that you are hell bent on being an idiot, so go ahead, kill yourself, mount the black again. Then when your pitched off again and drown, I will take you back to Pa." Adam glared at his little sister. 

Jenny didn't even pause, she understood the sarcasm but totally ignored it, kicking up her right foot to land on the blacks back again. This time the black just stood there for several seconds before bucking. Jenny used that time to tuck her feet in the rope around his belly tightly, and get a better grip. The black bucked and kicked, throwing his body around in the cold water. Right then left, the straight up, backwards, twisting from side to side. Jenny held on tight, and stayed on for nearly 10 seconds before doing her dive into the water. 

When she came up, Adam was right beside her. "That was GREAT!" Adam was ecstatic, his dark eyes bright with the excitement. "you did it!! I can't believe you actually stayed on him!" Jenny laughed at her big brothers excitement and moved closer.

"So can I do it again Adam? Please? I mean, I stayed on for that one." Jenny had decided to press her luck with the look on her brother's face.

"Yes, go ahead, I will hold him for you." Adam said, taking the bridle in his hands. 

Jenny leapt up quickly before her brother could change his mind. Again she had a couple seconds to get situated before Adam let go and the black bucked up, wild again. Jenny just held on, tight, her body flopped about as she was tossed back and forth. And of course thrown again. 

As the morning wore on, Jenny was tossed more times than either she or Adam could count. But each time, she got back up and tried again. Adam encouraged her though it all, offering pointers and advice, being a great help. Each time Jenny stayed on the black a little longer, and finally mid morning, she remained on till the black stopped bucking. 

The whoop of joy was what brought Ben galloping in that direction. When Adam hadn't returned with his sister, Ben began to get concerned. And finally, headed out to find them. Seeing Jenny and Adam both soaked to the skin, didn't please Ben in the least. But seeing Jenny on the black and Adam clearly encouraging her made Ben see red.

Riding down to the pair, Ben didn't need to bellow, one look at the expression on his face caused Jenny to slip off the black and both of them to turn pale. 

"Explain to me, how this is bring home your little sister Adam!?" Ben bellowed. 

"I, amm well she was riding the black Pa, did you see it?" Adam tried to change the subject. 

"Adam!!" Ben snapped.

Adam did have the good grace to look sheepish. "Sorry Pa, I got carried away. When I saw Jenny actually staying on the black, I just forgot everything else."

Ben snorted, "Your supposed to be the grownup here Adam." Ben said frowning.

"Yes Sir." 

"And you little girl," Ben wheeled on Jenny. "You were told NOT to ride the black, not to even be NEAR it! You snuck out of the house to deliberately disobey me." 

"Pa, I, " That was as far as Jenny got before she found herself face down over Ben's strong thigh, her pants about her knees, her bottom bare and chilled in the cool air. Ben then proceeded to warm up the cool flesh, blistering his hand down on the poor defenseless bottom. Scolding the little girl. "I will not have you disobeying me over and over Jennifer! If I tell you not to do something you by God will NOT do it!! I will not tolerate your disobedience!" As Ben scolded his had accentuated every other word, turning the soft pale skin first deep pink then to a bright red. Jenny yelped and cried out, as she tried to explain. Ben was simply not listening. 

At last he stopped for a moment, Jenny breathed a sign of relief that turned into a gasp of terror as Ben commanded Adam to cut him a switch. Jenny howled "NOOOOOOOOO Pa please!!" 

Ben was not in the mood to listen, as his hand continued to rain down spanks, while Adam cut and trimmed a switch. Jenny squirmed and cried, sobbing in the pain as Ben's hand spanked every inch of her bottom to a crimson red. The moment the switch was in his hand, Jenny's screams achieved a new height, shrieking as the switch burned a path up and down her crimson bottom, striping it from mid thigh to the top of her bottom, then back down again. 

By the time Ben was finished, Jenny was laying limp over his leg, her bottom crimson and throbbing. Ben pulled Jenny up and shook her firmly. "Do not disobey me again Jennifer!" Ben shook her again, then pulled his little girl into a fierce hug. "never again" Ben whispered as Jenny sobbed out "I'm sorry" over and over again. 

After 10 minutes Ben let Jenny go, her pants pulled up over her blistered bottom. "go on home Jenny, I want to talk to your brother." Ben whispered in her ear. "I love you baby."

"I love you too Pa." Jenny said as she whistled for her horse. 

"You can start on the downstairs windows" Ben said giving Jenny her punishment chores. 

Jenny made a face, but said meekly, "Yes Sir." And with a look to her brother, she mounted, standing in the stirrups, and rode for the house. 

Adam swallowed nervously, as Ben crooked his finger. "You know the drill son." Ben said. 

Adam nodded as he walked over, "Pa don't you think I am a little old for this." His hands on his belt. 

"As long as you live in my house, you will obey my rules." Ben said. "and even if you move out, if you EVER help one of your siblings disobey me, I will wear you out with the strop." 

"Yes Sir." Adam said sheepishly, and unbuckled his belt, his fingers shook as he unbuttoned his pants and lowered them. Adam remembered his last spanking, and was not looking forward to this one. 

Ben placed his leg on the tree trunk again, and guided his eldest son over his strong thigh, positioning him helplessly, pale bottom, so strong and muscular lifted high. Ben didn't even hesitate, he lifted his strong right hand and cracked it down on the twitching flesh. The sound was like a rifle shot in the quiet, startling the black. The spot turned crimson immediately, Ben put more force behind these spanks than he had for Jenny, as Adam was a man. 

The cadence of the spanks was quickly established, three to the same stop, then a half inch movement and three more. Adam gasped on the third circuit around his bottom, but was stoic, not crying out, even as his rump turned scarlet, then a deeper darker red. Heat was radiating off Adam's rump when Ben paused to pick up the switch. 

Ben moved Adam from his thigh to over the log, tossing Adam's pants over first to protect his flesh from the rough bark. Ben straddled the log his right arm brought the switch down without hesitation. Adam hissed.

For the next few minutes the only sounds were the babbling of the river and the swish, CRACK, hiss as the switch whipped across Adam's bottom and Adam hissed in the pain. Each stripe immediately became a welt, Ben made the circuit four times before he stopped. Adam was gasping in the pain, barely able to keep from sobbing. He held himself together, his lip bitten 'til it bled. 

Ben knew his son was close, and with out a word, pulled the shaking man over his lap, Ben wrapped his arm around his son's waist, his hand blistering the crimson welted flesh, as he began scolding. "I need you to help me with your sister not hinder me boy!" each word punctuated with a swat on the sit spot of Adam's bottom. Hard slaps, on the same two spots.  Burning the tender flesh. 

"You can not disobey me in front of your sister, she could have been hurt, or killed." Ben riled, as he punished his son, the last words pushed Adam over the edge. Adam began to sob, deep in his throat, his body shaking as he let go the tears. Ben kept on spanking for another minute, then stopped, and gathered his eldest immediately to his chest. Hugging him tightly, slightly rocking as he let the younger man sob.

Ben softly held his son, shhhing him, stroking his dark hair, rocking just a little. "I'm s-s-sorry Pa" Adam sobbed into his fathers shirt. "I know son, I know. " Ben answered. "Its over now."

Adam stayed against his fathers powerful chest for another few minutes before he sat up, hissing as his sore bottom touched the fabric of Ben's trousers. "I am sorry Pa, I shouldn't have encouraged Jenny. I was just surprised she stayed on the beast." 

"I know son, she can be amazing, but remember when she came to us?" Ben asked. "Beaten, bruised, half starved, she would have died. Jenny needs to have us making her decisions for her, raising her to think before she does anything foolish, not encouraging her into them." 

Adam nodded as he stood up. "I'll remember that Pa."

Ben stood up, hugging his son. " I know you will son. Now lets go find your sister and you can give her a hand with those windows." 

Adam snapped his fingers. "Dang, thought you would forget about that." 

As he roared with laugher, Ben slapped Adam on the back. "Not a chance son, not a chance" 
 


to be continued in part10

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