Emily_r47 said:

Ooh I loved it! I´m curious as to what happens on their date ;)

I´ve only read it one time, I´ll have to get back to you on the unclear parts of the story...

Emily (who has a smile on her face now)

Fatmat426 said:

That was a nice little read, but it left me feeling very eager to see what happens when they finally get down to 47 Cochrane Ave. later that night... I certianly hope there's another Chapter or section to this tale coming up!

BTW, that was a great description of how Earth looked from the ship's window. I also liked the part where Kim called them both at the same time, interupting their precious moment, so that they now have to arrange another private meeting for sometime later.
 

Chakotayfan2001 said:

I liked it. I agreed with the rest of the gang - another chapter would be nice. But I have to say, why couldn't Endgame end this way. A simple moment that gives a hint of hope for a future relationship for our fav people - J & C.

Good job!
SuzieQ2

Drakkenfyre said:

I swore that with this new workshop story, I would present some intelligent criticisms. Gee, thanks NE, for writing a story this good. Now I have nothing to say, except that I think it's great as a stand-alone story. To add more would be to ruin it, IMHO.

Drak

Maquis Leader said:

I liked it! Really good but I want to see what happens later! So,  what's on the second floor?

Maquis Leader