Alien Chick Magnet
Part 8-13
By Kylie
Alien Chick Magnet Part 8
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(Scene:School)
Max and Liz walking down the hall,hand in hand.
''Max thanks for helping me with.......''said Liz
''It's ok Liz.....''said Max
Liz smiles at Max and Max smiles back at her
Liz opens her locker and sees a rose with a care in it
Liz opens the card
''Dear Liz,
I love you so much.I will never leave you again.I promise.
Love,
Max''
Liz turned around and sees Max smiling
Liz kisses Max
Max pushes Liz against the lockers and kisses her back
''Woo!Hoo!''said one of the students walking down the hall
Liz and Max broke away and noticed they was a crowd watching them
Max grabs Liz's hand and walks to the eraser room.
Max and Liz makes out in the eraser room passionatly
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(Scene: Lunch Time)
Liz gets her lunch from her locker and walks to a table
Isabel walks right behind her and sits down
''So is it true??''said Isabel
''What's true??''said Liz
''That Max pushes you up against the wall and you guys starts to make
out?''said Isabel
Liz looks down on the table,embrassed
''So it is true!''said Isabel
Liz laughed
''You know my brother really loves you??''said Isabel
''I know,he left a rose and a card in my locker today''sid Liz
Isabel smiles
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Max sees Liz and walks to the table and sits down
''Hi Liz''said Max
''Hi Max''said Liz
''Hi Isabel''said Max
''Hi Max''said Isabel
Max opens his lunch bag and takes out a sandwich and tabasco sauce.
Tess walks to where max is sitting
''Hi Max''said tess
''Hi''said Max
Tess grabs his shirt and pulls him to a tree
Liz looks at them weridly.
''Max You have to choose''said Tess
''Choose what??''said Max
''Between Liz and me''said Tess
''I choose Liz''said Max
''That slut??''said Tess
''She is not a slut''said Max
''Fine whatever''said Tess
''I hope you have a great time with her''said Tess
''Ok.....''said Max
Tess thinks that maybe if I can make him think I'm good maybe he will come
back to me or I can make Liz jealous while I flirt with him.....
Tess hugs Max
Max is confused at Tess
Tess steps out from the tree,still hugging Max
Liz sees them and gets a bit angry
Tess walks away
Max walks back to the table
''So what were you and tess doing??''said Liz
''Nothing''said Max
''Nothing??I saw you two cuddling behind the tree!''said Liz
''We were not cuddling......She hugged me and I don't know what is wrong with
her''said Max
''I don't believe you''said Liz
Max kisses Liz,giving her flashes of what happened
Max breaks away and Liz looks at him and kisses back
''Hey!Hey!You two! I'm eating here!''said Isabel
Liz and Max breaks away
''I'm sorry for doubting you Max''said Liz
''You have to have faith in me and trust me Liz''said Max
''I just don't like Tess''said Liz
''You don't have to worry''said Max
''I know.......''said Liz
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Alien Chick Magnet Part 9
(Scene:Max's room)
Max is sleeping on his bed dreaming about Liz and him
Tess climbs through his window slowly and very quietly
Tess walks over to Max and looks at him
She puts her hand on Max's forehead
Tess thinks ''If I put Mind Control on Max maybe I can get him to break up
with Liz''
Tess focuses on her Mind Control Power
''Done''said Tess, quietly
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(Scene: Backroom Of The Crashdown)
''I'm breaking up with you Liz''said Max
''What?!?''said Liz
''I'm breaking up with you....''said Max
''Why?I though we were back together again.......''said Liz
''I don't love you''said Max
Max felt his stomach tighten and he said he didn't love her
Maria walks out the backroom of the crashdown
Liz ran to her room,crying
Maria looks at Max
''You hurted her again didn't you??''said Maria
Max didn't answer
Maria punches Max
Max falls to the ground
Max gets up and tries to tackle Maria but then Michael came in
''Hey! Get Your Hands Off Of My Girlfriend!''said Michael
Michael pushes Max out the backdoor of the Crashdown
Tess thinks'' Yes! My Plan worked!''
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Liz thinks ''I'm not gonna do this anymore.......I'm gonan change.....Not
More Miss Perfect....
I'll still be smart but I will have a new attitude..I wil try to be
cooler......Maybe if I flirt with Max or wear sexy clothes and Maybe max will
come back to me.......No Liz! No More Max........I got It! I will flirt with
Max and wear sexy clothes and flirt with other guys. Max will regret breaking
up with me!''
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(Scene: Liz's room)
Liz went through her closet
''I have sexy clothes somewhere....Ah!Found it!''said Liz
''Liz?''said Mariaas she peeks through the door
''Come In Maria''said Liz
Maria comes into Liz's room
''You Ok??''said maria
''I'm great''said Liz
''Are you sure??'said Maria
''Maria....I'm not gonna wait for Max no more........I'm gonna change....into
a new person''said Liz
''Well I've never seen you like this before so I think you are really sure
about this.....are you sure about this??''said Maria
''Yep''siad Liz
''Ok''said Maria
Liz puts on a tight pants and a Stringless Tank Top
Liz puts on some Lipstick
Liz combs her hair and puts Flower Clip in her hair
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(Scene: School)
Liz and Maria walks down the halls of West Roswell High
Guys were whistling and flirting with Liz all day long
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(Scene: Lunch)
''Nice Clothes Liz''said Isabel
''Thanks Isabel'' said Liz
Max and Tess walks to the luch table
''Hi Liz''said Max
''Hi''said Liz
''Hi''said Tess
''Hi''said Liz
Max sits next to Liz
Tess sits next to Max
''So Liz is it true?'said Isabel
''What's true??''said Liz
''Like Guys are Whistling and Flirting with you like all day!''said Isabel
''Ya.....''said Liz,blushing
Max felt his heart break into pieces when he heard this
''So how are you Tess??''said Isabel
''I'm fine Isabel''said Tess
''Good''said Isabel
Isabel went to Liz's side and sat next to Liz
''Liz Don't you think Tess is stupid and ugly??I don't even know why I was
friends with her.''whispered Isabel
''Yep, you feel that way too??''said Liz
''Duh!I went to Alex's house yesterday and I wrote a lot of Tess
jokes.....they are so funny.....Alex helped me.......Wanna come later and
help me??"whispers Isabel into Liz's ear
''No I'm busy today''said Liz
''Well, Tess looks like whore.She looks like she is poor with no home.She is
so ugly and she has to flirt with everyone she knows to get some....if you
know what I mean.....''whispers Isabel and laughing a bit
Liz burst out laughing when she heard what Isabel said
Max and Tess looks at them confused
Liz stops laughing
''Don't say that....She is gonna hurt you if she found out''whispers Liz
''I know''whispers Isabel
Alex walks to the Lunch Table and signals everyone to be quiet.
Liz had no idea that Alex was right behind her
Alex tickled Liz
Liz shrieked and turned around
''You scared me Alex''said Liz
''Sorry,Just having fun''said Alex
Liz gets up to throw out her lunch
Max gets up to throw out his lunch too
Alex tickles Liz again
Liz laughed and threw her lunch into the air and pushed Max down onto the
floor
Max is on the floor with Liz on top of him
Liz looks at him and gets up,uncomfortably
Max felt a bit of a connection when Liz fell on top of him
Tess doesn't like his sight
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A couple of days passed and Liz is still flirting with Max and other guys
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(Scene: Biology Class)
Liz and Max were sitting next to each other in Biology
Max couldn't stop looking at Liz
Liz was wearing a Baby Blue Tank Top that showed her stomach a bit and some
really Black tight pants
Liz knew Max was staring at her but she didn't look at him
Tess sat behind them and looked at them closly
Max was glad that Liz is still smart but what happened to Liz? Why is she
acting like this??
Liz's hand brushed his when she reached for the Paper that the Biology
Teacher had put on their table
Max's head hurts so he pretend to rubbed his forehead but he used his powers
to take it away
Max had a flash
*Flash* Tess comes into his room
*Flash* Tess puts Mind Control On Him
Max know knows why he is with Tess and not Liz again
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The Bell rings
Max followed Liz out the door but lost her in the crowd
He will just have to wait till he sees her again
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(Scene: Next Day in Biology Class)
Max sat next to Tess trying to talk to her about What he knew of what she did
to him in his room
''Excuse Me Max Evans Would you please return to your seat next to
Liz??''said the Biology Teacher
''Sorry''said Max
Max though ''Damn!I didn't get to tell Tess''
Max walked to Liz's and his table
Max lifted Liz out of her seat and kissed Liz
Max pushes Liz lightly onto their table still kissing
Tess looks at them Shocked!
The Biology Teacher looks at them Confused at what he is seeing
Maria had her mouth hanging wide open
Alex was smiling at this sight
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Max and Liz making out on their Biology Table caused one of the people to
Whistle at them and then the whole class started to whistle
Max and Liz broke apart
''Um......''said Liz looksing at Max and her biology Class,and her Biology
Teacher
Max grabbed Liz's and His things and grabed her hand and walked out of the
door
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Max opened the eraser room and walks inside with Liz
''Liz we have to talk''said Max
''We sure do!''said Liz
''Look I had a headache and I was trying to talk to Tess.I used my powers to
heal my headache and then I had a Flash. Tess came itno my room and used mind
control on me.You have to believe me Liz!''said Max
Liz looks at Max's eyes
Liz could tell that he was not lying
Liz hugged Max tightly
''If you do this next time again,I'm not gonna forgive you again Okey??''said
Liz
''Ok I Promise I willn ever do this again''said Max
Max kisses Liz and they make-out in the Eraser Room
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Alien Chick Magnet Part 10
(Scene: Biology Class)
''Miss Parker and Mr. Evans You're not gonan try what you did last time you
were in Biology again are you??''
''No''said Both of them,embrassed
Max and Liz tried to make it through Biology with out losing control and
start to make up in Biology Class.
The bell rings and Max grabs Liz's hand and runs to the Eraser room
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Max kisses Liz and he gripped her bottom,holding her very close to him.
Liz lifted up her legs and wrapped them around max's waist.
Max and Liz pulled apart, gasping for air.
Liz still have her legs around his waist.
''Liz?''said Max
''Yes Max??'' said Liz
''I love you''said Max
''I love you too Max''said Liz
Max and Liz continued to make-out in the Eraser room
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''Max......''said Liz while max kisses her neck and back on her lips
One of the Students in Roswell High named Steve,walked by the Eraser room and
heard someone moaning out Max's name.He told his friends and people who knew
Max to come wait outside of the Eraser room.The people did as they were told.
Maria,Michael,Isabel,and alex heard this and went too.
Max pushed Liz against the Door lightly,still making-out.
''My Friends......I present you the couple making-out in the Eraser
Room''said Steve
Max and Liz couldn't hear Steve talking since they were busy making-out.
Steve opens the door.
Max and Liz fell out of the Eraser Room with Liz's legs wrapped around Max's
waist and Max had his first two buttons unbuttoned. Max's hand was on Liz's
stomach and Liz's hand was on his shirt unbuttoning them. Liz was on the
ground with Max on top of her
The people started to cheer for them.
Max and Liz started to get up and fix themselfes.
''Liz!''screamed Maria and Alex
''Max!''screamed Michael and Isabel
Michael and Isabel grabbed both of Max's hand and lead them into a classroom
Maria and Alex grabbed both of Liz's ahnd and lead them to a different
classroom.
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''Liz?This is your second time getting caught making out with Max in the
Eraser Room!''said Maria
''Ya.....Wait.....Second time??''said Alex
''I didn't tell you Alex??''said Maria
''Nope''said Alex
''Well now you know........''said Maria
Liz just looked embrassed
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''Max!Second Time!''said Isabel
''Max!We can't get that close!''said Michael
''I'm sorry Ok??''said Max
Michael and Isabel just stared at him like he was a little kid who was gonna
get grounded.
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Alien Chick Magnet Part 11
(Scene: Crashdown)
Max walks into the Crashdown with Isabel and Michael.
Liz walks over to them.
''Hi What can I get you?''said Liz
Max looks at Liz with passion in his eyes
''I will have usual''said Max (Cherry Coke)
''Ok.....How about you guys??''said Liz
''Same''said Isabel and Michael
''Ok''
Liz walks off and gets their Cherry Coke.
''Max you have a usual?You come here a lot don't you??''said Isabel
''Ya.....''said Max
''Of Course, to see Liz''said Michael
Max smacks him on the side of his head.
''Ow......''said Michael,laughing
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(Scene: Liz's Room)
Liz turns on the Cd Player and puts in her favorite Cd ''Savage Garden''
Liz makes the volume very hgih since her parents are out and she has the
whole house to herself.
(Affirmation)
I believe the sun should never set upon an argument
I believe we place our happiness in other people's hands
I believe that junk food tastes so good because it's bad for you
I believe your parents did the best job they knew how to do
I believe that beauty magazines promote low self esteem
I believe I'm loved when I'm completely by myself alone
Liz is in her tub with Vanilla soap with bubbles
Max climbs up her ladder.
Max hears water running and smiles
Liz closes her eyes and relaxes into the water and listens to the music
I believe in Karma what you give is what you get returned
I believe you can't appreciate real love until you've been burned
I believe the grass is no more greener on the other side
I believe you don't know what you've got until you say goodbye
Max opens the door
Liz doesn't hear,still have her eyes closed
Max kisses Liz
Liz gasps and opens her eyes and sees Max
''You scared me Max!''said Liz
''Sorry''said Max,smiling
I believe you can't control or choose your sexuality
I believe that trust is more important than monogamy
I believe your most attractive features are your heart and soul
I believe that family is worth more than money or gold
I believe the struggle for financial freedom is unfair
I believe the only ones who disagree are millionaires
Max undresses and gets inside the tub
Max kisses Liz
Liz rubs herself against Max
Max moans
I believe in Karma what you give is what you get returned
I believe you can't appreciate real love until you've been burned
I believe the grass is no more greener on the other side
I believe you don't know what you've got until you say goodbye
Liz's parents comes back from their party with their friends
Mrs.Parker and Mr.Parker brought food from the party
Mrs.Parker and Mr.Parker walks up the stairs
Mr.Parker sits on Liz's bed
Max and Liz are kissing and Max prepares to enter her
Mrs.Parker opens the door
''Oh My God!''said Mrs.Parker
Max and Liz broke apart and saw Liz's mom
Mr.Parker walked to the bathroom, to see what had happened
''Oh My God!''said Mr.Parker
Mrs.Parker and Mr.Parker sees Max and Liz in the tub,naked.
''Young Man Get Out!Get Out!''screamed Mrs.Parker
''Get Dressed!Both of you''said Mr.Parker
Mrs.Parker and Mr.Parker walks out of the bathroom and closes the door
Liz and Max looks at each other
''I can't believe my parents caught us''said Liz
''I kinda got out of control when I saw you''said Max,smiling
Liz smiles
I believe forgiveness is the key to your unhappiness
I believe that wedded bliss negates the need to be undressed
I believe that God does not endorse TV evangelists
I believe in love surviving death into eternity
''Isabel,Michael,and My Parents are gonna kill me....''said Max
''My Parents are gonna kill me......''said Liz
I believe in Karma what you give is what you get returned
I believe you can't appreciate real love until you've been burned
I believe the grass is no more greener on the other side
I believe you don't know what you've got until you say goodbye
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Alien Chick Magnet Part 12
(Scene:Crashdown)
Mrs.Parker and Mr.Parker called Mrs.Evans and Mr.Evans to come to the
crashdown.
Isabel,Michael,Alex,and Maria are hanging out and walks into the
Crashdown,finding Mrs.Parker,Mr.Parker,Mrs.Evans,and Mr.Evans sitting down by
Max and Liz.
They notice Max and Liz's hair are wet.
''What's going on here?!?''yelled Mr.Evans
Max and Liz looks down on the floor
''Dad?''said Isabel
Mr.Evans turns around and sees Isabel
''Hi Honey''said Mrs.Evans
''What's going on??''said Isabel
Isabel,Alex,Michael,and Maria walks over to them and stands by Max and Liz
looking confused
''Well Your Brother Max,was caught in the tub with Liz and both of them
naked''said Mr.Evans
''What?!?!''yelled Isabel,Michael,Alex,and Maria
Michael walk and goes behind Max and smacks him on the head
''Ow!''yelled Max
''What was that for?''said Max
''That was for being so dumb''said Michael
''Max I'm very sorry to do this to you but.....I forbid you to see Liz''said
Mr.Evans
''Liz,goes for me too''said Mr.Parker
''What?!?''yelled Max and Liz
''Dad!''said Max
''Don't do this to me!''said Liz
''Sorry but we have to''said Mrs.Parker
''Yep''said Mrs.Evans
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Max and Liz haven't seen each other in weeks expect in Biology and the
Crashdown.
Michael and Isabel are watching Max very closly so he doesn't do something
stupid again
Alex and Maria are watching Liz very closly too.
Max and Liz has been getting urges to kiss each other but they didn't.
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(Scene: Crashdown)
Liz didn't have to work today.
Max,Isabel,Michael,and His Parents walks into the Crashdown
Liz is wearing a black tight leather pants and a baby blue tank top.
Max sees Liz.
Max gets a urge to kiss Liz but fights it.
Liz gets a urge to kiss Max but fights it too.
Liz sees Maria busy so she decide to take their order.
Liz walks over to Max's table and stand a bit close to Max
''Hi Welcome to the Crashdown What can I get you?''said Liz
''Usual''said Max,smiling
Max takes off his leather jacket and covers his hand.
''Same''said Isabel and Michael
Max touches Liz's leg and rubs it back and forth
Liz smiles at Max
''I'll have coffee''said Mr.Evans
''Me too''said Mrs.Evans
Liz writes it all down
Liz pretend she need to scratch her leg so she reach down and took Max's hand
and rubbed it quickly and took it off her leg
Liz walked away
Max smiles widely
Max's parents looks at Max confused
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Liz gets their orders.
Liz sits down sneeking peeks at Max
Mr.Parker sees Liz looking at Max
Max sneaks peeks at Liz without his parents nocticing but his parents did know
''Liz?''said Mr.Parker
''Yes Daddy?''said Liz
''Why don't you mop the floor since you are doing nothing?''said Mr.Parker
''Ok''said Liz
Liz grabed the bucket and mop
Liz starts to mop back and forth
Max is watching Liz move back and forth
''Max?''said Isabel
''Max?''said Michael
Isabel and Michael just keep saying Max's name over again but Max is
distracted with Liz, watching her move back and forth.
''Max!''said Mr.Evans
Max jerked when he heard his father screamed his name
Max knocked over his cherry coke
''Huh?''said Max
Liz saw what had happened and laughed quietly
Liz went to their table and picked the cup up and put it on the counter and
started to mop the cherry coke.
''If you hadn't been so busy looking at Liz maybe you wouldn't have knocked
your cherry coke and maybe you could have heard me when I said your
name''said Michael
Max blushed and Liz heard this and blushed too.
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Liz sweeped the floors after she was done moping the floors
Max watched Liz again and felt the urge to kiss her
Max tried to fight it but he couldn't this time
Max got up from his seat and walked over to Liz and Picked her up
Max put her on the counter and kissed her
Liz wrapped her legs around Max's waist.
Max's parents,Liz's Parents,Michael,Isabel,Maria,and Alex are shocked at what
Max did.
The Customers looks at Max and Liz
Max picked up Liz and carried her into the backroom.
Max lied them down on the sofa and started to make-out
Max's Parents,Liz's Parents,Isabel,Michael,Maria,and Alex walked into the
backroom and they find Max and Liz Making-Out.
Michael coughs
Max and Liz are still making-out ,not hearing Michael coughed.
Michael coughed louder
Max and Liz broke apart,this time hearing Michael cough.
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Alien Chick Magnet Part 13
(Scene:Crashdown)
Max looks at his parents and at Liz's.
He knew they were angry and upset.
Liz looked at Max
''Max?''said Mr.Evans
Max looked at the ground
Liz knew her and his's parents were gonna kill him
Liz grabbed Max's hand and squeezed it
Max looked at Liz
Liz smiled
Max smiled back
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''I'm sorry''said Max
''You should be''said Mr.Evans
''Honey maybe we have been a bit harsh on you''said Mrs.Evans
''Ya...''said Mrs.Parker
Mr.Evans and Mr.Parker looks at their wife
''We've discussed that you and Liz can see each other but you have to be more
responsible''said Mrs.Evans
''We don't want you to rush into sex''said Mrs.Parker
''Ok''said Liz
''Ok''said Max
''But....''said Mr.Evans
''But nothing....They're good kids. Max never done anything bad in his life
before. So I trust him''said Mrs.Evans
''I trust Liz too''said Mrs.Parker
''Ok Fine''said Mr.Evans
''Fine''said Mr.Parker
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Max looked at his parents.
''Thank You So Much!''said a happy Max
''Thanks''said Liz, looking at her parents
Max turned to Liz and grabbed her hand
Max lead her outside of the crashdown
''Where we going Max?''said Liz
''Somewhere''said Max as he turned on the jeep
Max drove home which he knew his parents were not home
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Max opened the door and led Liz up to him room
Max kissed Liz
Max layed them down on his bed while making-out.
Liz moaned and just kisses Max like she hadn't drinked in a week
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(Scene:Crashdown)
Justin is at the Crashdown with his new friends that just came from Roswell
Orignally they were from Roswell but was adpoted by their Foster Parents.
They just chatted about Roswell and Their school.
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Max lied down on his bed, happily.
Liz had gone home an hour ago.
Liz is at home lying on her bed, happily too.
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(Scene: School)
Liz walks to her locker and smells something nice like flowers
Liz opened her locker
Flower Petal fell down her locker and Liz saw a perfume bottle.
Students stop and looks at Liz and her locker weridly.
Liz saw a card.
Liz opened it.
Dear Liz,
I Love You
From,
Max Evans
Liz smiled.
''Wow!''said Isabel
Liz turned around
''I know''said Liz
''My Brother is crazy. He loves you very much''said Isabel
''I know''said Liz
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(Scene: Biology)
Liz walked into Biology.
Liz saw Max and smiled
Max saw Liz and smiled
Liz walked to their table and sat down
Max moved closer to Liz and kissed her very quickly without the class noticing
Liz laughed
Liz moved closer to Max till they're shoulders were touching each other.
Max looked for his pencil in his Schoolbag but couldn't find it.
Liz notices that he doens't have a pencil out and is looking through his
schoolbag over and over again.
Liz opens her schoolbag and takes out a pencil.
''Need a Pencil??''said Liz
''Thanks''said Max
''I seem to lost mine''said Max
''It happens to me so I bring a lot of pencils in case i lose one''said Liz,
smiling
''Very Clever''said Max
Max smiled back
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(Scene: Lunch Time, Gang sitting under a Tree)
''Wow!it's hot!''said Isabel
''I know''said Maria
''Liz where's Max??''said Michael
''He is in biology asking the teacher some questions''said Liz
''Oh Ok''said Michael
Max walks to the gang
''Hey''said Max
''Hey''said the gang
Max sat down next to Liz
Liz took her t-shirt off
Max looks at her take off her t-shirt
Liz is wearing a Forest Green Tank Top
Max kissed Liz
Liz kissed back
Max mouthed ''I Love You''
Liz mouthed back '''I Love You''
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