A spy to remember.
Note: Actually this isn't really very Carmen. I wrote this essay for my English Final
exam. So since it's got Carmen and the gang in it. The exam question was: Write a
180 word essay with the following sentence "Someone tapped my shoulder and=-." Continue
from there. So here is the continuation.
Someone tapped on my shoulder and as I turned, it turned out to be my
classmate Ivy. Ivy was a foreign-exchange student in my school. I didn't really
know Ivy and was quite surprised that she tapped my shoulder. I look towards Ivy,
her face was pale, her eyes were pleading for help but somehow her mouth froze and
didn't say a word. One minute passed; the silence could have killed me. I broke the
ice by asking her, "What is the matter with you?"
She replied back, "I need your help Su Ling. I can't talk now. Spies
are all over the place." I didn't know whether she was joking or not. But
somehow I felt that she was telling the truth and I agreed to help her. She
took me to a dark alley and knocked on a wooden door 3 times. She said
something in Japanese and the door opened. She asked me to go in first. She
went after me. As I walked down the stairs I felt that I just got myself
into a terrible mess.
Down the stairs was a room. I entered the room and look at it
in astonishment, there was so many spy gadgets which you might expect
in a James Bond Movie. Ivy soon explained to me that she was a spy. Her
code name was Agent I. She was sent by an elite group of forces known only
as "ACME." She continued by saying she was sent to Malaysia to track down a
double-agent known as Agent C whose name is believe to be Carmen. Carmen
was sending secret documents about "ACME" to "VILE". I was shocked my
classmate was actually a spy!
I turned to her and asked her "Why are you telling me all this? If
you're a spy, everything you do has to be secret isn't?"
She answered back, "Because you have something I need."
I was even more confused at this point of time. She quickly explained that
on the third day of school, she brought her spy camera to school. Her spy camera was
in the shape of a blue pen. I suddenly remembered that I borrowed the pen and
forgot to give it back. It was in my pocket so I quickly gave it back. In the pen
were photos of Carmen. "ACME" needed these photos to track Carmen down. I needed
to go home soon or my parents would get worried. So I left the room. As I climbed
the stairs Ivy told me that I must never tell this information to anyone. I
promised that I wouldn't tell anyone about ACME, VILE and Ivy. She was
satisfied with my word.
As I was walking down the alley, I thought I heard a loud commotion. I
ignored the idea that she could have been captured and probably imagined the
sounds. I went home. The next day there was a package for me. In the package
were Ivy's Blue Pen and a note. The note said "They got me Su Ling, They got me.
Please keep the pen safely. Agent Z will collect it latter." As I examined the
pen a knock was heard on the door. I answered it. It was a boy about 14 dressed
in a black suit. He said to me "I am Agent Z or also known as Agent Zack. I
believe that you have something for me Miss." As soon as I heard that I nearly
fainted. "Here we go again!" I said to myself.
The End. A story done by Su Ling.
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