LEADS- The beginning of a story is called a "lead". The lead can be a sentence, a paragraph, or even a page long. A good beginning "leads" a reader into the story. It makes them want to find out more. It catches their attention, enticing them to continue reading. Skilled writers start their stories with good leads. A good lead adds to your "voice". It  helps your reader connect with you. You can communicate a sense of excitement, sadness,  mystery, fear, or any other emotion with a good lead.

 
 
Bad lead
Better Lead
Last night Shelly had a very bad dream. Shelly sat up, paralized with fear.
The game was cancelled due to rain. Billy rushed to the door in his baseball uniform. His face fell when he saw the raindrops beginning to fall. There would be no game today.
It was a dark and scary night. Something moved behind her. She turned, frightened. The night was too dark. She couldn't see anything. There it was again! 

 
 
Now, you practice! Using this photo as inspiration, write a lead sentence to a paragraph. Make your reader want to find out more!

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