Read the paper out loud with a partner.

Name of person who wrote the paper______________________________

Name of person who helped revise paper___________________________
 
 

Revision Checklist

Does the paper have a clear beginning, middle, and end?	YES/NO
Does every paragraph have a topic sentence and supporting details?	YES/NO
Does the paper flow from one idea to the next, or does it seem choppy?	YES/NO
Does the paper have a wide variety of word choices?	YES/NO
Does the paper have a wide variety of sentence structure? (simple, compound, and complex sentences)?	YES/NO
Is the paper interesting?	YES/NO

If the answer is "no" to any of the above questions, go back and revise your paper.