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THE OUTSIDERS, S E Hinton


Correcting Errors in a Student's Writing

Read the following piece of writing, which contains many errors. Your task is to identify all the errors and correct them.

I think Ponyboy should not be put into a children home. Because he is better off with

his own loving, caring family. Firstly, his brother darry work hard to look after him:

he make sure that Ponyboy has enough to eat; he buys him cloths; and supervise his

education. Second, Ponyboy quiet close to his other brother, Sodapop, and would miss

him badly if he had to stay in an institution. Thirdly, Ponyboy has a positive attitude

towards school at present, but if he lose his friend he may become a truant and

perhaps even a crime person. For all this reason, I think Ponyboy Curtis should be

allowed to remain with his two brother.

 

Frankie Meehan