Review by Destiny on Oct. 17, 2000.

Woodland Park Breeding Center.

First Impression:

Mmm, I don't think I like the buttons. Also, the font is HUGE.

Okay, I get it. My graphics suck. I'll work on new ones the next long weekend I have no homework. I'm sticking to Courier and green and brown, though.

Comments (Improvements & Good Points):

Yays. No midi. That's an easy 100% on that section!

*Shudders at the idea of a midi.* Thank goodness for my mute button.

Why is the welcome in bold, others regular, and the bottom in another font? You should stay with the same font throughtout the site...and make it smaller.

I never noticed the font size varies. I'll have to change my browser preferences to see what you mean and fix it.

Nifty frames! I like how they change for each new thing!

Thank you. A pain to make but a breeze to update and navigate.

oOo. You're breedz are so kyoot! I don't like how you have to go back the to previous sections to check out another, though. You could have them listed in another frame...like add a bottom one.

A bottom frame won't work when I get more breedz, but a "remote control"... Hmm... That may work. I'll work on it after the whole graphics deal.

Oh...you're near-sighted? That's why the fonts are so large? Ok...never mind that part. Oh! You have another site with about me and all? Ok. Only thing is it's not at this one and this is the one I'm judging. You could always link it to the other's server...that way you'd still have room for more breedz!

I have about me pages all over the internet (mostly non-petz sites). There are sites everywhere for those "popular" things. This site isn't about "me" or those other things, after all.

oOo. There's Destiny's linky!

Hehe, neat idea on reviewing the person that reviews you! That'll give you some more points in originality...

You are now part of the legacy...

Final Impression:

Well, you don't have quite a few popular sections, but with what you do have, it's great! It's nice to see a non-hexing person who actually makes nice, cute breedz for once! Your graphics could be a little better, though. Instead of the splash page, I'll grade you on your HTML, I guess. Ok?

Thanks. It's interesting, in 1998, there were NO splash pages anywhere. Actually you only run into them in the infamous "petz community," on sites with alternative viewing (like frames and non-frames, java and no java, or Netscape and Explorer), or on sites where people have tons of ads or want to show off.

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Grading.

Graphics = 10/20
Content = 14/20
Originality = 14/20
Layout = 13/20
HTML = 7/10
Petz = 4/4
Midi = 3/3
Review link up = 3/3

Subtotal = 68/100 = 68%
Bonus = 5 points for having those kyoot breedz! Now that I understand you have another site with the other information there, it makes your grade pretty higher! I figured I had to add something for being one of the few selective breeders left!

68/100+5/100 = 73/100 = 73%
Grade = C

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My final comments on the review Boy, that was fast! I emailed her before class and had the review when I got back. Her suggestions are nice, and I may make some changes but not neccesarily the way she suggesst. She was very friendly and presented her gripes and suggestions in a positive way. Also, my site was her first review for her site, and she is very mature. I'm not into the way the reviews are centered on the site, but that's the way a lot of people do it, and probably just my preference (which seems to vary from the opinions of the masses quite often).

Friendliness: 19/20
Grammar/spelling: 16/20
Organization: 16/20
Promptness: 20/20
Usefulness: 11/20

Deductions: none
Additions: +5 for respecting my visual problems.
Overall: 87/100