HAIKU

Sierra Scenes


The newest (& best?) (what's the one special word in it?):

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Busy stream; carved rocks;

transportation to the sea

for innocent leaves.

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Gently thru the air,

a snowflake touches the pond.

One becomes other.

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A bear, still at last.

With limp wings, a small bird falls.

The river flows on.


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Night rain has frozen.

In silence, a breeze moves thru.

Twigs make thin crisp cracks.


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On the mountain stream

it was either dusk or dawn

reflected on the ice.

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It catches the eye.

A tiny cloud that dances.

Insects on the wing.

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Stars fade, trees appear.

The colorless time of dawn's

most subtle approach.

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A wild dragonfly

enjoys his only summer,

flying and resting.

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It is nothing else;

the red flower does not try

to be as it is.

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The shadows of clouds

climb fresh-blown from the ocean,

easily uphill.

...or:

Moving up the hill,

lazy shadows of small clouds

climb without effort.

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Morning's last fogbank

with a belly-dancer's veils,

shows seductive hills.

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Starry, starry night...

the artist's brush that showed us

pain and daffodils.

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Lying in darkness,

up through silhouettes of pines,

a tunnel to a star!

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East moon; western storm.

between the moon and lightning,

an Egret awaits.

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The spotted bettle

in his life, wanders widely...

within a man's stride.

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The cool autumn rain

falls on hollow onion greens.

Tiny, empty sound!

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Alone on the ice,

snow crystals blow through the mind,

piercing without chill.

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Sneak up like a cat;

a string of tiny, sweet sounds.

Mountain brook in May.

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The first three Mallards

breaking trail with plaintive honks,

echo on bare hills.

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Clothed in snowy pines,

the bottom half of mountains

rest under flat clouds

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Stream-water meets rock.

sound as clear as the water

crisp as melted ice.

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Sharp ice, smooth water.

Dark earth beside white snowbanks.

Brave first flowers grow.

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Smooth or rough, the waves

move everywhere on the earth,

and make no mistakes.

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Mountain ices melt

and make their way to the sea,

observed... or unseen.

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In the just-thawed mud,

waking but still icy frogs

soon will croak for love.

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Even cold-blooded frogs

in the chrysalis of spring

will sing for warm love.

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Ever so gently,

"yugen" can turn around,

and take you back home.

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Ground-bound creatures stay.

Where weather suits his feathers,

the wild goose will go.

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. . . Poe-ish Haiku (Lowku)

One world goes away

with the setting of the sun.

Its alter-ego rises.

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. . . A modern one:

The foolish spider

rushes to the high thick grass

as the mower comes.

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All above by JKH, mostly when in the Sierra
(physically or mentally).

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Ripple in still water

where there is no pebble tossed

or wind to stir it.

by JKH, adapted from a line
in the Tibetan Book of the Dead,
seen on the Yahoo UU club.


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Camellia-petal

fell in silent dawn... spilling

a water-jewel.

. . from basho


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Thus too, my lovely life

must end, another flower...

to fall and float away.

. . . onitsura

.
. . Most of the "rules" of Haiku,
from Lorraine Ellis Harr,
consulting editor of the magazine
"Dragonfly: a quarterly of Haiku"

  1. Haiku isn't a prose sentence divided into 3 lines. It also isn't just any 3-4 or 5 line poem.
  2. Haiku isn't padded w adjectives and modifiers to make the 5-7-5 syllable count. Nor are "A" and "The" ignored.
  3. Haiku isn't always divided into 5-7-5. Japanese ONJI, on which Haiku is based, are different than syllables. A short-long-short form is preferred, tho.
  4. Haiku isn't a simile or metaphor. Those would turn Haiku into English poetics.
  5. Haiku isn't a telegram. Haiku should flow from line to line. Read Haiku aloud!
  6. Haiku isn't rhymed, unless it happens naturally.
  7. Haiku isn't a poem so much as it is a playful phrase. Use strong but simple words and phrases.
  8. Haiku isn't of human values, morals, judgements. But it can be of human living.
  9. Haiku isn't anthropomorphic. Don't humanize nature. No personification [of nature]. Rather, naturalize man.
  10. Haiku isn't a generalization about something. Haiku is a thing/ time/place/event/season.
  11. Haiku isn't a story. It is a sketch, an indication of deeper thoughts and emotions that are not stated.
  12. Haiku isn't vague. Be specific. Tree? What kind?
  13. Haiku isn't obscure. Give the reader clues. Include season words.
  14. Haiku isn't just anything that comes to mind. Haiku comes from direct experience. It is a specific enlightened experience shared with the reader.
  15. Haiku isn't a formula poem. Haiku is a way of life. The poet lives the Haiku. [which is why I say it happens to you. jkh.]
  16. Haiku isn't one-dimensional. It is an interplay between two or more objects.
  17. Haiku isn't easy to write. Haiku is what is.

[...which is why it fits in with Zen and Gaia!]


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Your life is yours, but yours alone--
only you can claim it, know it.
To others, it is distant and soon lost...
and it is none the less for that.

You may take life's value only while you are in it.
While others, later, may value what they can take from it,
that adds no value to the life you now have.
and the thought of that merely distracts from it.
JKH


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