Subj:[gilmoregirlsfanfiction] Rather Severe ch (1-4) more to come ^_^
From: sickslacker@bolt.com
Rather Severe
By Kat
note: this is WIP, my ideas for this story may change day to day. My
main focus is Jess because he is gorgeous. *grins*
This fic begins when Tristian has already gone to military school.
Chapter 1
Jesse
He couldn't deny it. He liked her. He wouldn't say love at first
sight. That would be too trite. He hated this place already. He
really hated it. The many dots of disgusting perfection seemed like
a cover for total torture. She looked innocent, like a little bird
that was fed by its mother. She had been smoothed away from the
flames. He had his share of flames. Her dusky dark eyes gave him a
look he couldn't describe and he found it very compelling. Something
new perhaps.
Chapter 2
Dean
He sat gingerly in trig. He was feeling insecure lately. I wasn't
into the possessiveness portrayed in Romance Novels. However, Rory
used to possess his attention and she didn't anymore. It was hard
not seeing her at school everyday or having her eyes looking into his
every evening. He could hear echoes of Rory's grandfather and knew
that the indecisiveness he usually had needed to disappear. He
would need to communicate to her something he could never ever say.
Tomorrow it would be done.
Chapter 3
Rory
Rory brushed her hair and tried to smile. However she couldn't.
School had become increasingly unpleasant to her and she could barely
tolerate it anymore. The usual cliched complaints of teenagers in
high school were not similar to her rants. To put it simply, to be
basic in her thoughts, She was lonely. Her fellow masculine
classmates leered at her. The girls were too busy discussing
themselves to really notice her. It never really mattered to her to
an extent. However, day after day it becomes an undesirable
routine. "The bus will be visiting the mother of all homes soon!"
her mom yelled as she completed the edges of her appearance for the
day. Rory reluctantly trekked down the stairs. Not to hell,
although it seemed like it from her perspective. She mounted the
bus carefully. She also had this discreet fear of falling
embarrassingly and with immense surprise. "Hi Rory"
She turned her head with a great jolt and it was her boyfriend. In a
strange way she was disappointed. He walked gently to spot beside
and touched her carefully. He touched her like she was
china. "Rory, there is something I am going to say." Dean's quiet
voice spoke louder than usual. She looked out the window staring at
the dying gardenias and sunflowers suffering from the soon onset of
winter. Dean said what he had to say and it was done. It was over.
She heard every single syllable. She heard every single word.
Chapter 4
Jess
Jess was bored. He debated fleeing his bland English class via the
window. They were discussing the many joyful aspects of his least
favorite over-rated Shakespeare tale. Well, that was his opinion.
He thoughts traveled to Rory. Luke appeared to be awfully protective
of her. He decided for the time being he would follow an old
philosophy. You can look but you can't touch. He most definitely
planned to look.
End Chapter 4
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