The beautiful girl

They came at night. Sky was dark and silver and she couldn´t get sleep. She closed her eyes and counted to hundred. She could hear them talking on a quiet voice. "She has problems" said a voice that she recognised to be her mother. Last thing she remembered was her dad who said "We got to get her to hospital. This cannot go on"
She woke up. It was dark and she couldn´t see anything clearly except her mother standing on the door. Mother said "We have to go now, Shan." "To where?" She asked, although deep down inside she knew where they were going. "Just get yourself to the car." Mother´s voice was suddenly cold and she knew why. It was because of the scars in Shan´s wrists. She wasn´t wanted to this life, she was too much for this perfect family.
Shan went to the bathroom. She looked into the mirror and smiled. Smile was faked and she knew that. She looked her black hair, blue eyes and white skin. Eyes were tired. Girl was tired. Just fifteen and all tired. She looked outside the window and saw mother who was standing next to the car nervous looking her watch. Dad was sitting in the car smoking a cigarette. Shan leaned out of the window thinking about jumping. Sun was coming up and soon everybody could hear about the tragedy of Shan, the beautiful girl.

Omat kommentit: Buah, dramatiikkaa. Tyhmä juttu, johonkin englannin kieliseen kirjoituskilpailuun tai jtn. Tarinan piti alkaa sanoilla "they came at night" siksi tuo. Ja sanamääräkin oli määritelty, joten ei siitä sen enempää. Huono kun huono. opettaja ei tässä kommentoinut mutta antoi muistaakseni 90 pistettä. Huonoin pistemäärä englannin aineesta mitä olen koskaan saanut, ja sen huomaa. Ei voi muuta sanoa kuin buah.

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