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Preface – Welcome 

(I can resist anything, except temptation)

 

            Jennifer Gordon stepped out of her cab and pulled her thin white coat tighter about herself, cutting off only a little of the breeze from biting into her skin.  Looking up at the towering steel and glass monoliths about her, the young blonde whistled lowly to herself in awe.

                “Aunt Barbra, you sure know how to pick a city to be Commissioner of.”  As the young woman strolled forward to the main police station she realized just how poor her choice was to choose fashion instead of practicality.  It was already dark out and even though her new skirt and designer silk blouse were considered the height of fashion from home, Gotham’s night sky and streets seemed to hold no caring for good taste.  Cautiously Jennifer opened the front glass door into the glow of the inside of the police station.  The young blonde eagerly stepped inside into the warm building, happy to be in the heated hallway.  Quickly she rubbed her upper arms, generating as much heat as she could as she walked down the short hallway to the front desk which was hovered over by young man who seemed to be immersed in a stack of papers that were strewn about.  As Jennifer finally stepped up to the desk the man held up his index finger, motioning her to wait for a moment.

                “Yes?” the officer said as he finally looked up from his desk.  Jennifer finally brought her arms down from her sides and put her hands in her jacket pockets.  Looking at the young man’s name tag she saw the faded name of ‘Jeff S.’ and cleared her throat.

                “Excuse me Jeff, I’m here to talk to Barbra Gordon,” the young woman said in her normal friendly voice.  She saw the officer give no sign of warmth or friendliness back as he began to respond.

                “I’m sorry, but Commissioner Gordon is very busy at the moment.  If I can take a name and message, I’ll have her give you a call back when she is free.”  The young man shuffled through some papers on his desk to find a relatively blank one and then grabbed on of the three pens that were laid about on the various papers atop his table.

                “Listen, I’m Barbra’s niece, Jennifer Gordon, I’m supposed to meet her here.  You see, I just moved here becau---“  The young woman quickly found herself interrupted before she could begin to tell her story.

                “Oh yeah, Gordon’s niece…  Was told to be expecting you.  Just wait over there in one of those chairs,” said the man as he pointed to the faded red seats that lined the left side of the hallway she had just walked down.  Near one of the seats sat a table with year old magazines and an ashtray that was dangerously close to overflowing everywhere with cigarette butts and gum.  “I’ll call Gordon right away, she’ll be down here as soon as she gets a free chance.”

                “Umm….  Ok, thanks,” Jennifer responded with a reluctant smile as she walked timidly over to the closest chair and sat down.  As the minutes slipped away into two and a half hours, Jennifer finally let out a relieved breath as she saw her aunt finally coming to meet her.  The young blonde stood up and strolled excitedly to meet the relative she hadn’t seen in over two years.

                “Jenny!” the Commissioner said proudly as she opened her arms up to hug her niece.  “How’s my little troublemaker been?”  Jennifer hugged her aunt gently and then stepped back, beaming up a genuine smile.

                “Good now that you’re here.  I was worried for a while that you’d forgotten I was down here.”  Barbra grinned.

                “I’d never forget my only niece was waiting in my lobby.  Sorry I was taking so long, there was a last minute meeting, police stuff,” Barbra said distractedly. 

                “From what’s on the news back home, I’d think that Batman person has taken care of all the crime down here,” Jennifer said in a light laugh.  “I’m surprised there’s enough work left for the police.”  The young woman paused as she saw a dark visage quickly pass over her aunt’s face, then disappear just a quick.

                “Batman is wonderful for Gotham, don’t get me wrong Jenny,” Barbra said as she started walking towards the main doors of the building.  “But he’s only one man.  Even with him and a full time police force, Gotham is no safe place at night.”  Barbra stopped walking and turned to face her niece as the reached the bottom of the cement stairs that Jennifer had ascended earlier that night, and laid her hands on the young blondes shoulders.  “Listen, I want you to know that I’m very happy that you’ve come to live with me here in Gotham for a while.  You’re my family and having you here is a wonderful thing.  Understand that as I say this it isn’t meant out of maliciousness, it’s out of love.  I don’t want you wondering about in Gotham, especially at night, for a while.  Not until I’ve had a chance to show you the town, the safe places and the…  Less than safe places.  Can you do that for me Jenny?”  The young woman felt the importance of her aunt’s words sink in through the stern look on the elder ladies face.

                “Ok aunt Bar, I’ll stick to home for a while except for school,” Jennifer said in her most responsible voice she had.  “Don’t worry, you can count on me, besides, I wouldn’t know where to go even if I wanted to go out.”  Barbra relaxed herself and smiled again down at her niece.

                “Come on, let’s get you to your new home,” Barbra said as the two got into her car.

                As the vehicle moved down the streets and intersections of Gotham Jennifer felt her gaze drawn again and again to the passing scenery, the neon signs, the different people, the different clothes, the different streets, some clean, some dirty, some full of pot holes.  In a place deep down she could already feel the pull in her to explore her new city that she lived in, but quickly set the urge aside remembering the face of her Aunt.

 

Chapter 1 – Idle

(To swing on the spiral of – Tool Lateralus)

 

                “It’ll be alright Terry, don’t worry,” Max pleaded again with her friend.  She knew that it was hard for the young man to part with the item that was tightly zipped up in the back pack.  “I promise, it’ll be ok, everything will be alright.”  The pink haired woman knew that it was an important step for Terry to leave the costume behind for the weekend so that when he and his girl friend were alone, so there wasn’t a chance of the Batman curtailing the two’s get away.  “If anything goes wrong, Mr. Wayne or the Commissioner will be able to handle and if not, we’ll call.”  Max could see the pained look on the young man’s face as he slowly backed away and separated himself from the suit that he had now come to think of as truly a part of who he was now.

                “Yeah, you’re right Max, I shouldn’t worry so much it’s just…  I don’t know, it’s kinda like I’m leaving a family member behind or something, it’s just kinda hard to explain is all.”  Terry let out a breath as he heard the honk from bellow.  “That’ll be Dana, I guess I better hurry.  Now you have my number right?” Terry asked for the fifth time.

                “Yes.  And I have Mr. Wayne’s, and Commissioner Gordon’s, and the local police station, and half of Gotham’s it feels like.”  Max smiled as she put her hand on her friend’s shoulder.  “Go, have fun, forget about the Bat for a while Terry, just relax.”  Terry drooped his head again for a moment then quickly looked up as another honk came from outside.  “Look’s like your weekend date is getting a little impatient there buddy, better hurry up.”  Terry smiled.

                “Ok Max, thanks.  And remember, first thing tomorrow mornin---“

                “I’ll be at Wayne Manor to give Mr. Wayne the suit when he arrives back from his trip,” Max groaned at having to repeat the instructions back to her friend.  “Listen, the suit will be fine here for a night.  I’m sure Mr. Wayne will understand that this was a last minute thing that Dana pulled on you, now go, please go,” Max said in a half groan half laugh.

                “Ok, thanks again Max.  Did I tell you that you’re the greatest?” Terry said as he grinned.

                “Yeah yeah, just hurry up before Dana comes up here to yell at ya.  The last thing I wanna do to start my weekend off is a fight between you two in my home,” Max said as she gently pushed the young man to her door.

                “Alright, have a good weekend,” Terry said as he slid out the front door.  Max laughed as she watched her friend eye the back pack that he had just dropped off one last time before the door closed.

                “That boy has a problem,” Max said lightly to herself as she walked into the kitchen for a glass of water.  As she sipped from her glass, Max walked over to the backpack lying on the couch and sat down next to it.  “I’m sure Terry wouldn’t mind too much if I checked out what kind of high-tech setup he has for this thing,” Max said to herself as she opened up the bag and lifted up the cowl.  “Always wondered what kind of security Mr. Wayne would use for something this top of the line.”

                Max had the security measures that were programmed into the costume bypassed in one hour.

 

Chapter 2 – At the time

(“I embrace my desire to” Tool - Lateralus)

 

                Jennifer opened the door to the ‘8 Shot’ club and inched her way in, trying to stay as close to the wall as possible.  The young woman could barley make anything out through all the smoke and moving bodies but what she could make out was mixed with an auditory assault from speakers that felt like they were everywhere.  She knew she had promised her aunt that she was going to stay home but she felt a quick little peek wouldn’t hurt anything.  She wouldn’t get to know anyone or get too friendly, she just wanted to see what all the excitement was about.  And everything did seem pretty exciting here, everyone was moving about, moving against one another, smiling, laughing, leaning into one another, presumably to hear the other person talking over the music being thrown out at decibel levels clearly not meant to be heard for sustained periods of time.

                “What’s your name there young lady?” came alcohol laced voice.  Jennifer turned around to see a slightly tipsy gentlemen in his late twenties dressed in all black with stark white slicked back hair.  As the blonde tried to move back somewhat so as not to be pressed up against this new acquaintance, Jennifer realized that if this club had a maximum capacity to it, it was clearly exceeding it.

                “Jennifer,” she yelled, hopefully getting some of her name across to the young man.  “I’m new here, to Gotham that is.  Is it always this crowded here?” she asked as loudly as she could it felt.  She watched as the man next to her gave a momentary befuddled look before he began to answer.

                “Yes,” came the yell back.  Before she could get any more questions out, Jennifer’s head quickly spun around as a sharp noise rung out from close to the entrance a few feet away from her.  Suddenly the music died away as the entire club quickly went from a moving living entity to simply just people in stunned silent masses.

                “This, ladies and gentlemen, will now be the start of our robbery if you all would be so kind as to co-operate, we will try to make this as hassle free as possible.  You’re compliance will be greatly appreciated,” came a voice from a masked man standing on a table near the entrance.  His statement was reinforced by the four other disguised men standing near him, all armed with guns pointed at the crowd.  Jennifer heard a few loud gasps and she thought she even heard the sound of someone fainting as she tried to take in everything that was happening.

                “Now boss?” one of the gentlemen near the leader asked.  The man on the table looked down, then jumped off the table.

                “Go ahead,” was the leader’s response.  At that, the four men spread out among the floor pilfering items from club goers, issuing commands to have watches and rings an wallets all placed in bags.  One man spoke up slightly when one of the robbers came around, saying something about leaving his fiancées ring alone and was quickly followed by the dull sound of a hand hitting a stomach, knocking the wind out of the young man.  Jennifer listened to a ladies voice as she tried to console her fiancée quietly.  It seemed like forever as the men went from person to person in the club, demanding belongings while the leader, whom seemed like a tall wiry fellow, stood glaring over the crowd.  Finally someone came up to Jennifer and she promptly stuffed her purse and watch into an outstretched bag, her face pained in fear and grief.

                “Ok boss, we got everyone’s stuff plus all the money from the tills and safe from in back,” one of the men said as they walked up to the leader of the group.  The tall man paused for a moment, then looked back out over the crowd.

                “Thank you all for your hospitality, and now we take our leave.  Please enjoy your night, your donations have been greatly appreciated,” came the man’s facetious voice.  As the tall man turned towards the front door to exit, the sound of sirens came wailing near, eliciting shocked eyes from the criminals.

                “Boss?” came a questioning voice from one of the bigger men.  The tall man turned around to face his crew.

                “Crap.  Wasn’t expecting the police to arrive this soon,” the leader said, mostly to himself.

                “What are we gunna do boss?” came another man’s voice.  The tall man turned and started marching through the crowd towards the rear of the building.

                “We’re just gunna have to leave out the back, leave the car,” the boss said as his men followed him.  Jennifer watched through the crowd of people and saw the gang of thieves go into the back room of the club towards the exit, and let out an audible sigh of relief as she saw the door that isolated the back part of the club from where she and the rest of the people were close.  Slowly, whispering and murmuring went rippling about through the crowd as people started regaining there composure.  And then, just as quickly as the room seemed to have come back to some sort of safe familiarity, it broke again as the group of men came storming back into the main club room, causing the quiet whispers in the crowd to die off immediately.

                “They got the place surrounded boss,” a short masked man said.

                “Thanks,” the tall man replied in a thick sarcastic voice.  “Glad to know you have a grasp of the current state of things, I’ll sleep better tonight.”  No one talked after that comment as the tall man began pacing back and forth near the front of the room.

                “This is the police, we have the place surrounded,” came the voice of Commissioner Gordon.

                “Aunt Barbra!” Jennifer quietly cheered to herself.  The tall man groaned at the statement that came from outside the club then turned to face everyone.

                “Ladies and gentlemen, you have all been elevated from victims of theft to hostages, please sit down, now,” the leader said solidly.  Everyone just stared at each other for a moment until a large robber came up and started shoving people to the ground, then quickly everyone followed suit, hoping to avoid anyone from manhandling them to the ground.

 

Chapter 3 – Inconvenient Plays

(“For a minute, I lost myself” Radio Head - Kharma Police)

 

                “Look Mr. Wayne, like I said, I can’t get a-hold of him.  If you can’t get in touch with Terry with all the doodads you got in your mountain-o-technology what makes you think I can do any thing different?”  Max felt like she was talking to a brick wall as she paced around the living room watching the TV of the robbery/hostage situation going on.  Terry wasn’t answering his phone and Mr. Wayne was being stubborn in trying to provide anything helpful.  Max looked back over at the backpack that was open and the costume that was slightly sticking out of it.

                “Terry,” Max said in a sigh a little away from the phone.  “You so need to be here right now.”  As Max listened to the man on the other end of the line she felt her eyes grow slightly wider.

                “What do you mean nothing?  There has to be something we can do!” Max stated emphatically into the receiver.  How could Mr. Wayne be so callous, not even wanting to help out.  There had to be something, he owned so much stuff, he should be able to do something.  Max glanced again at the cowl of the Batsuit sticking out of the back pack.  “You have all those crazy gadgets, can’t you send in some robot or something?” Max asked again as she took a step towards the back pack.  “No I don’t know what the trouble with robots are but I’m sure you’re going to take the time to inform me,” Max said with a grumble as she reached out with her free hand, running it along the materiel of her friend’s costume.  Max’s mind wandered as Mr. Wayne broke into a lecture of code performance and reaction times of robots and other variables that made them unreliable and unsafe, concentrating on the Batsuit more and more.  “Fine Mr. Wayne, well just wait it out, gotta go,” Max said quickly, hanging up the phone.

                “You know, this isn’t a good idea at all,” the pink haired woman said to no one in particular as lifted Terry’s suit out of the back pack, placing the cowl over her head.  “But nothing can go wrong, right?” she uttered sarcastically.

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                Jennifer sat quietly on the floor as she watched the group of men argue every once in a while, followed by long awkward silences.  Occasionally the tall man would walk over to the bar, pick up a liquor bottle, then smash it at a near by wall, sometimes send shards of glass into the crowd causing slight stifled yelps and flinches from men and women.  The police had brought in a negotiator and he had been talking on and off with the thieves over the club’s phone, but nothing seemed to be changing except for the fact that the robbers seemed to be getting more and more angry and impatient as time went by.  Jennifer let out a light sigh as she looked up at the ceiling from her seated position, feeling helpless to do anything else from her current state, and as she peered up she saw a ventilation shaft cover start to rattle lightly.  The young blonde squinted, staring up harder at the cover moving around almost directly above her, then suddenly come loose, landing almost on her, just mere inches away from her, followed quickly by the falling of a black clad person.  Jennifer let out a gasp at the loud noise and sudden intrusion, then she began to recognize the figure, at least she thought she did.

                “Bat…..  Man?” she said as she leaned over and began helping what looked like a very feminine Batman to their feet.  The costumed figure turned to her quickly.

                Uhhh, sorry about that whole almost falling on you thing, I’m kinda new,” came a female’s voice from inside the costume.  Suddenly the costumed woman turned her head slightly and began talking into the air.  “Because I turned them off, I knew you’d try and stop me.  Either start being helpful or I’ll turn off your feed.  Fine!”  The costumed figure turned to Jennifer and tried to start saying something again but the only thing she got out of her mouth was “Oof,” as one of the bigger thieves slammed into her, sending him and her sailing across the room into a bar table, smashing it into the back wall.

                “Be careful,” Jennifer said softly as she watched the… Batgirl take on the robber.  For a brief moment the big man seemed to have the upper hand until finally Batgirl got some distance, just enough, to start moving, mostly away from the man, sending objects near her sailing at the attacker.  The robber batted most of the things away until finally a cash register landed him squarely in the face, knocking him out cold.  Jennifer let out a light squeal as costumed woman hopped over onto the serving side of the bar and began running at on of the other robbers.

                Max felt her body stop as the thief she was trying to tackle brought his fist out and hit her squarely in the stomach.  The pink haired woman rolled slightly with the much and felt the suit she was wearing absorb a lot of the blow, leaving her slightly winded but not completely out of breath.  Max was getting upset but not so much with the situation of the robbers but more of her confusion at the Batsuit and also the endless rattling of Mr. Wayne in her ear.

                “Max, look out behind you,” she heard as she felt something slam into her back, throwing her forward onto the attacker in front of her.  Max and the robber tumbled to the floor, grappling each other.

                “Thanks,” the Max said in a low voice as she wrestled her hands free and jumped away from the situation, running to find some open ground.  Looking around, she watched as three of the men started to converge on her from the front slowly and Max took that as a queue to back up some more until she finally bumped into an empty table behind her.  Turning around, she hurriedly picked up the large object, the suit she was wearing giving her enough strength to wield it around fast, and began swinging it wildly at her attackers, making them keep their distance.

                “Max, reach into the belt, third container from the left of the buckle and throw it at them,” Wayne said.  ‘Finally,’ Max said in her head, ‘the old man is being helpful.’  Max kept the table held up with one hand as she used the other to reach into the belt she had on and pulled out a small steel-like ball and flailed the object at the approaches, missing them completely and landing near the opposite wall.  She watched a small amount of gas come shooting out, presumably some type of gas that would have disabled the men near her.  Max reached her hand in her belt again and came up empty handed, letting out a frustrated grunt.

                “Crap,” she said then threw the table she had at the center man approaching her, knocking him down while she lunged for the still standing man on the right.

                As Jennifer watched the Batgirl fly into the armed attacker on the right she could see the other man who had been missed by the flying table pick up a broken table leg and begin heading over to the costumed heroine.  The blonde quickly got to her feet, lifting one foot up and taking off her shoe, and ran over and began hitting the man approaching the costumed woman with her shoe.

                “Hey, pick on someone your own size,” Jennifer said loudly as she brought her shoe down another time on the man’s head.  The young blonde’s eyes began growing wide as she watched the looming man turn to face her, leering out a grin as he grabbed her wrist in a motion almost to fast for her to react to.  The young woman let out a noticeable gulp while the man brought his clenched fist back to start a long swing and closed her eyes, waited a moment for the blow to come, then another moment, then she felt the man’s grasp on her wrist slacken.  Opening up her eyes, the young woman saw the man on the floor with her costumed hero standing over him.  Jennifer let out a soft ‘yay,’ and bounded over the man’s unconscious body to hug her savior who had her head facing another direction.

                Max quickly turned back around as she felt the blonde woman’s arms around her.

                “What’s she doing?” Max heard Wayne ask.  The pink haired woman groaned.

                “She’s hugging me, something you probably haven’t had done to you in the past twenty years,” she said in a low voice.  “I just saved her life, she’s probably pretty happy about that,” Max finished as she wondered if she should hug back or not.

                “Forget about that right now, you need to stop the leader before he gets away,” Wayne said sternly.  Max reached up and started pulling the blonde lady away from her.

                “Your going to be ok ma’am, please sit back down,” Max said in the most reassuring voice she could muster, then turned around to see the tall man standing near her, bringing his fist clean across her face sending her sailing sideways.  Max landed with a dull thump, sliding into a nearby wall and shook her head.  Looking up she saw the man approach and she quickly darted up and began swinging her fist, missing the man by a wide arc.  The thief grinned as he used her off balance position and pushed her back down onto the floor, then slammed his foot into her side.  Max let out a breath as she felt the impact hit into her belly.

                “Teach you to mess with my plans Bat,” the man said in an almost laughing voice.  Max saw the next kick coming and she rolled slightly out of the way, causing the man to loose stability, and grabbed his leg he was using for standing, wrenching him to the floor.  Jumping onto him, Max smashed her knee into his chest, causing him to pause for a moment to catch his breath and with that free time, she crashed her fist home across his face, knocking him out.

                “Good job,” she heard Mr. Wayne say to her.  Max stood up and smiled to herself for a moment.

                “I did do a good job, didn’t I?” she said to her self almost in awe at the situation.  Looking back over the area, she saw the crowd of hostages all staring at her with wide eyes, the young blonde lady that hugged her earlier beaming a bright smile at her.

                “You should get out of there.  If Gordon sees you, she won’t be too happy,” Wayne said.

                “Yeah, got it,” Max replied.  Max walked up to the blonde woman that had helped her in the fight, getting ready to ask for directions on back ways out of the club, but before she could say anything the woman began talking first.

                “I’m Jennifer,” she touted happily.  “Thank you for…  Well, for pretty much saving my life.  Are you like, Batman’s sister?” Jennifer asked.  She watched costumed figure drag her hand down the features of her coweled face.

                Ummm, not exactly,” Max said.  “Hey, you know any back way’s out of here, some way the cops aren’t really blocking?”  Max watched the young lady point her finger upward, towards the ventilation shaft that she had used to break into the club in the first place.  Max let out a heavy sigh at her own forgetfulness.  She knew she wasn’t normally this flustered or out of sorts but then again, she never fought a mob of thieves in a club before either.  Max took a moment, trying to remember how to activate the suits jets to help her get up to the ceiling and just when she was ready to take off, she felt a hand on her arm, causing her to look over at the blonde one last time.

                “Hey uhhhh…” Jennifer began shyly.  “Don’t be a stranger.”

                Ummm, sure,” Max said, her confused face covered by the suit she was wearing.  Then she made the jump for the ceiling, the thrust from the suits boots carrying her up, letting her make her eventual escape out from the roof of the club.

                “Don’t be a stranger?” Jennifer said to herself in a befuddled low voice.  “I shoulda just said, ‘Hi, I’m a dork’.”  The young blonde mentally cursed herself for being so uncouth in front of the costumed heroine.  Then, after a moment she smiled to herself while the Gotham police began running in, checking on the situation.  The Batgirl person had hugged her back earlier, the thought causing Jennifer to let out a slight sigh.  “Maybe Aunt Barbra knows her,” Jennifer said as she let her mind drift over the images of the costumed woman saving everyone in the club.

                “Knows who?” came a voice with a distinct ring of anger inside of it.  Jennifer quickly whirled around to see a very sour faced Commissioner Gordon staring into her eyes, patience all but gone.

                “Aunt Barbra I—“ Jennifer started before being cut off by the grim woman looking at her.

                “I told you not to go out at night around here.  Didn’t I say it wasn’t safe?” Barbra said, the seriousness in her tone unmistakable.  Jennifer gulped loudly.

                “Yes Aunt Barbra,” the blonde replied, her head drooping down.

                “You’re just lucky Batman was here to help out, otherwise, who knows what this could have turned into,” the older woman said, still scowling.

                “Oh, it wasn’t Batman.  It was a Batgirl,” Jennifer replied, her tone becoming unconsciously lighter.  She watched as her Aunt’s face became even more perturbed, which she didn’t think was possible till just then.

                “Batgirl?” she asked bluntly.

                Uhhhh, yeah.  She uh, she came in and saved us,” Jennifer said nervously, noticing that there was nothing around her but thin ice now.  The blonde watched as Barbra pulled out her cell phone, pressed a few buttons then held it up to her ear, waiting.

                “We need to talk,” was all aunt Barbra said into the phone after a moment, then flipped the device closed and placed it back into her pocket.  “Get into my car, it’s parked out front,” the Commissioner said, to which Jennifer happily obeyed, eager to get out of her Aunt’s sight until she calmed down some.  Jennifer knew that her aunt was upset but was puzzled at why the mention of a Batgirl would upset her more.  The blonde thought about it for a bit while she sat in the car waiting for her aunt to come out and drive them home, but her mine kept wandering back to the hug she had given the costumed lady.  She giggled lightly to herself for a moment while still alone in the car.  She hadn’t even meant to hug the other woman, it just kinda happened, making her smile broaden a little more but then she remembered her lame comment she had said and her face turned into a frown. 

                Just as she was about to utter her comment she had used to finish her meeting with batgirl off with, to see if it really did sound as bad as she thought it did, she stopped, watching the drivers side car door opening with her Aunt getting in.

                “So,” aunt Barbra began.  “Tell me about this Batgirl, and don’t leave anything out.”  Jennifer spent the rest of the car ride home pouring over what she remembered, sometimes smiling, her voice getting excited as she would talk about the young costumed woman taking on the robbers, knocking them this way and that.


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