Barzag uHalmar (Akallabêth)



Here you will find info and roleplay logs for my Akallabêth character, the Hillman Barzag. He was a member of first the Númenor culture (based in Umbar) and then the Mordor culture; sadly he's now been 'retired' owing to non-availability of rp.

About Akallabêth

Akallabêth is a Tolkien-based MUSH, set in the Second Age before the fall of Númenor (during the reign of Tar-Palantir; starting year 3175 in the alternative MUSH timeline). It has a small player base, and so at the moment only a few cultures are open (which is why Barzag started off in Umbar!). However, the small numbers have sometimes allowed more freedom in roleplay than on a 'crowded' MUSH. The room descriptions are carefully crafted, and often breathtaking - you could spend hours just wandering round admiring the scenery.

Akallabêth can be found at
telnet: akallabeth.pennmush.org
port: 3175

Knapper at work

About Barzag

Name: Barzag uHalmar
Gender: Male
Species: Men
Kin: Rhevain (Hillmen)
Culture: Mordor
Title: Slave labourer; flint knapper


CURRENT DESCRIPTION:

You look upon one of the Hill-Folk, the race known to the Elves and Edain as Rhevain or Men of Twilight. At about six feet in height, he is taller than most of his kind, and this is complemented by a strong build; his well-muscled frame and calloused hands show that he is no stranger to hard work. Indeed, his shoulders are slightly stooped as if from carrying heavy loads. His skin is swarthy, weather-beaten from long days spent outdoors.

A mass of dark hair hangs to just above shoulder level, shadowing his face, and he wears a short beard, usually kept neatly trimmed. It cannot, however, hide this man's main distinguishing feature. His upper lip, upon which only a few sparse bristles grow, is cloven in the manner of a beast, and twisted slightly so that his mouth appears to be set in a perpetual sneer. Above this, his nose is long and straight; amber eyes generally regard the observer coolly from beneath lowering black brows, bitterness all too often visible within their depths. Were it not for the wrongness of his mouth, he might even be considered handsome, but his disfigurement prevents this.

He wears a plain tunic of coarse grey cloth, which is in fairly good condition still. The sharp-eyed might notice some sort of mark on his upper right arm, although the short sleeve of his tunic has been pulled down as if to conceal this. His trousers are of a dark material, faded now in many places. On his feet are a pair of scuffed leather moccasins.

IC INFO:
Mordor

A slave of the tanner Kavan, purchased from the slaver Rashan, who brought a caravan up from Harad. Where Rashan found him, who can say? Barzag is clearly foreign, for he shows little understanding of the Eastern Mannish tongue. He looks to be in his late twenties.

Umbar

Barzag is one of the Hill-Folk, known to the Elves and the Edain as the Rhevain or Men of Twilight. He was originally an itinerant flint knapper by trade; a little-valued position in Hillman society, yet a job he grew to love. Barzag was one of a group transported to Umbar in the spring of 3184 as unskilled labourers to repair the city walls; he was one of the few who went voluntarily. Barzag's aptitude for stonecutting was noted by the mason, who retained the Hillman to work on other construction projects. Barzag worked under Ureziran's direction for three years - there is even a rumour that towards the end of that time the Hillman became the mason's paid employee. However, Ureziran left Umbar to return to Numenor, and about the same time Barzag disappeared. Few had noticed his presence; fewer still his absence.

Barzag is currently in his late twenties. He is a loner by nature, being accustomed to the scorn of others, but is strongly loyal to those few who do win his trust. It is rare for him to show open anger, although he does have a tendency to bear grudges.

Barzag's history is on a separate page.

Barzag logs and writing

These are arranged in chronological order. In the case of logs I've followed the standard practice of not correcting typos (aagh - how come I don't notice them till they're posted?) unless the player made an OS amendment. The texts with no players credited are solo writing to fill in the gaps and give my character's life some background.

3183 and 3184

DateTitle
Autumn 3183A visit to Tarlang
13 May 3184 A new arrival. Barzag and a group of compatriots arrive in Umbar. (Barzag, Oroseph)
2 July 3184Sun and stone. The seaman Marazon, on duty on the city walls, has an exchange with Ureziran the mason and one of his hillman workers (Marazon, Barzag)
27 July 3184In search of a healer. A short rp; Barzag seeks assistance for a sick comrade (Marazon, Barzag)
12 August 3184A trinket, a thief and a tryst? The lady Finannriel is shopping in the marketplace when a thief strikes (Finannriel, Marazon, Barzag)

3185

Spring 3185Aftermath of a storm
9 September 3185Of the high-born and the low. Barzag meets the travelling weapons trainer Aloric, and is surprised by the man's progressive attitude (Barzag, Aloric)
early October 3185A present from Lindon? The Adunabar is being unloaded, and the presence of an Elf on the quay gives rise to a surprising incident, once to which Roziliel is full witness (Minarak played by Barz, Roziliel, Barzag, Sulome played by Hithilin)
29 October 3185Scribal designs. Barzag takes advantage of a chance encounter with the diplomat Inzilgadin and the scribe Roziliel (Barzag, Inzilgadin, Roziliel)
30 October 3185A lesson in letters. Inzilgadin tries to explain the written word to Barzag (Barzag, Inzilgadin)
21 November 3185Fishing for the moon? A midnight rendezvous outside the city (scene played by Barzag and Marazon)
19 December 3185A meeting in the market. The healeress Galenrien, walking in the market at close of day, encounters two of the city's Rhevain. (Galenrien, Barzag, Gurthul)
19 December 3185A cloak changes hands. Follow-up to the previous rp - Galenrien gives Barzag a cloak for a nominal fee. (Galenrien, Barzag, Gimilphel)

3186

January 3186Meeting by the Fountain
January 3186Of letters and lore
February 3186A stranger in the slums?. The lady Arlanazir puts in a brief and unexpected appearance in the city's least desirable quarter (Barzag, Arlanazir, Renzlitha)
February 3186A scuffle. A drunken young man takes exception to Barzag's presence in Summergate Square (Drunkard played by Gimilkhad, Barzag, Galayle played by Aaldain, Finannriel)
February 3186?The Empty Page?. Short conversation in Summergate Square (Inzilgadin, Barzag). I filled in some gaps with A missing scribe?
February 3186A missing scribe?
February 3186?Three men, a woman ... and a chair?. Gimilbatan's fountain provides a chill setting for a chill discussion about Roziliel's whereabouts (Marazon, Barzag, Galenrien, Inzilgadin).
April 3186?Ashes and dust. Inzilgadin and Rozi, leaving the Azruphazan Inn on an evening's errand, exchange words with one who seems less than impressed by their company (Inzilgadin, Barzag, Roziliel).
May 3186An obscuring rain. A brief conversation in the marketplace that manages to touch on a few of Marazon's favorite topics. (Barzag, Marazon).
May 3186Self defence. When Barzag encounters a familiar face in the New Town, he wastes no time in asking for help of a particular kind. (Aloric, Barzag).
May 3186A covert errand. Barzag, seeking casual work at the docks, finds work of a different sort. (Barzag, Renzlitha).
May 3186A request for healing
May 3186Night encounter. Inzilgadin makes a generous offer to one in need, only to have it rebuffed. (Barzag, Inzilgadin).
May 3186Respite
June 3186An offer
June 3186Warehouse search. A patrol of soldiers begins a search of the warehouse district. (Thalos, Barzag).
July 3186A notice. Brief rp, the attention of two passers-by is drawn by a notice pinned to a doorway (Barzag, Oroseph).
July 3186Meeting by the docks. Roziliel takes an opportunity to speak with the labourer Barzag. (Roziliel, Barzag, Inzilgadin).
July 3186Target practise? Marazon seeks to practise his archery skills in peace, but disturbs another. (Barzag, Marazon).
August 3186A glimpse of gold Two labourers come face to face with Umbar's Governor, Pharazon 'the Golden'. (Barzag, Pharazon).
August 3186Smith seeks work, worker seeks rest A short conversation on the steps of the King's Retreat. (Barzag, Nildumar).
August 3186Many meetings Several disparate folk congregate outside the King's Retreat, and a departure is announced. (Barzag, Galenrien, Marazon, Inzilgadin).
September 3186Caught in the act Smugglers are disturbed at their work, and a fight ensues. (Scene played by Barzag and Pharazon).
November 3186Afternoon in the Tavern Short scene in Azulada tavern. (Ciela played by Lyllith, Barzag, Thalos).
December 3186Stonework

3187

January 3187At the harbour. While some watch the ships, others observe the folk at the docks (Barzag, Aluran, Thalos, Kaelis)
January 3187Changed times
January 3187A gift
end Jan 3187A journey
February 3187A bard of travels. On the Harad Road Barzag encounters a strange man who carries with him an even stranger food (Barzag, Fredmin played by Neaskil)
February 3187Capture! Alone in the Southern Wastes, Barzag's luck is about to run out (Rashan played by Rhumnor, Barzag)
February 3187Water Short scene in the Wastes (Barzag, Rabahpuh played by Verdauga)
March 3187Nearing Nurn Short rp, the Haradrim set up their camp (Barzag, Rashan played by Rhumnor)
April 3187A visitor to the camp The Nurnian Callion comes looking for Rashan, and perhaps a slave? (Barzag, Callion played by Lyllith)
April 3187A slave is sold Barzag is auctioned, though Rashan has some trouble finding a buyer (Rashan played by Rhumnor, Barzag)
May 3187A spillage Kavan's new slave has the misfortune to spill a rather ..malodourous.. liquid on the Guildhall steps (Barzag, Rhumnor)
May 3187Discovery of a corpse. A body is found lying in an alley beside the Temple (Barzag, Rhumnor, Vallug played by Verdauga)
June 3187Short sharp scuffle. Or ... don't ask for a +train from a feature ;)
July 3187A warning to the unfaithful. The Dark Acolyte Lyllith delivers a warning to the folk of Nurn (Lyllith, Barzag as himself and Kavan)
July 3187Runaways. Barzag encounters a lone young woman in the stables -- does she have something to hide? (Barzag, Xahna played by Lyllith)
August 3187Daybreak in the Commons. Barzag encounters Xahna for a second time (Barzag, Xahna played by Lyllith)

3188

end Feb 3188Reflection
early April 3188Fire in the tannery

Other logs

My non-Barzag logs from the time I roleplayed in Umbar can be found here.

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Useful stuff

Maps of Umbar

Umbarhelp files

A map of Second Age Middle-Earth is at http://demon.unh.edu/images/tolkien/atlas/second_age_of_arda.gif
A map of Númenor is at http://img-fan.theonering.net/rolozo/images/maps/numenor.jpg

A history of Númenor is at http://members.ozemail.com.au/~sdgeard/hccnum.html

A map of Mordor can be found at http://www.isildur.com/tolkien/maps/mordor.gif

Links

My Dunland pages are at http://www.oocities.org/halwynofdale/dunland.htm
(yes, that's right, I really am a rabid Tolkien fan! Anyway, go check them out.)