Poetry by Children
Moving Windows: Evaluating the Poetry Children Write by Jack Collom
I REMEMBER...
I remember my first pair of black shoes.
I remember putting on my mother's clothing.
I remember falling for the third time.
I remember trying to fly from my rocking chair.
I remember asking my cat to dance with me.
I remember my grandfather and I swimming in the beach, with the roaring
waves.
I remember when my grandmother and I had our first fight and I tried to
throw her out the window.
I remember the eighth time I punched my friend Doris on the nose.
I remember so many things that I sometimes don't remember.
-- Odalya Camero, 7th
I remember when I was one I started to walk to the door.
I remember arguing with my sister about her doll just because I broke it.
-- Melissa Rosa, 3rd
I remember when I threw my brother a cup of soda at his face.
I remember playing with my cousin's dancing-playing-hearing record, turning
the lights off, playing the drums, acting like a ghost.
I remember taking water and then spitting all over the house.
I remember putting ketchup in a water gun and saying to my brother, "I
killed you, I am very foolish." What a happy time we had.
-- Evelyn Carenas, 5th
I remember the day my hands got stuck under my window sill and I cried so
hard I farted.
-- Anonymous, 4th
I remember my first watch. I opened it to take out the Mickey Mouse.
-- Veronica Fernandez, 5th
I remember eating sand when there wasn't anything else to do.
-- Claudia Bravo, 8th
I remember when I was sitting on a tree and a dog kissed me.
I remember when I went to the movies and all I did was close my eyes.
-- Myra, 3rd
I remember when I smelled a rose the whole thing broke.
I remember my birthday. One person came.
-- Ana Torres, 3rd
I remember when I was little in kindergarden I met my friend Gia. When we
had snack I brought crackers and she brought grapes, and we put it together
and ate it.
-- Renee Breazzano, 5th
I remember when my sister and I had the first fight. We didn't talk to each
other for days. She kept slipping notes under the door, but I didn't know
how to read so I just kept giving them back.
-- Ida Caputo, 4th
I remember a beautiful raven fighting with an old brown woodpecker.
-- Kristina Lacognata, 4th
I remember seeing a comb outside on the street a long time ago. It was green.
-- Sandra Martinez, 5th
I remember talking to my friend about myself, and when I finished she wasn't
there.
-- Danielle Stone, 6th
I remember going to the store with my uncle and I got shot.
I remember going to the school and they mugged me.
I remember going to the movies and a monster tried to eat me.
I remember going home and my mother was not there.
I remember going to my friend's house and he would not let me play.
I remember going to the park with my friends and one of them hit me in the
head with a ball.
I remember making new friends and one of them hit me with a spitball.
I remember watching TV and it broke on me because I kicked it.
-- Danny Santiago, 5th
I remember when it was snowing, all of that snow comes from the blue sky
and ends up on the street.
-- Cynthia Gonnez, 6th
I remember when I learned how to jump, I was so happy that I jumped.
-- Rosita Vasquez, 4th
I remember when I was born. It was the happiest day of my life.
-- Lenore Garcia, 4th
I remember the day I bought a rabbit and it died right in my face.
-- David Fergus, 4th
I remember my dogs looking at me with a crazy look.
-- Bobby Miranda, 4th
I remember when I was born I didn't want anyone to see me.
-- Anonymous, 3rd
I remember when my dog fell off the roof with a smile.
-- Pedro Fonseca, 5th
Remember
Eating a
Mushroom during an
Eclipse with
Millions of
Beautiful
Erotic men
Roaming around me.
-- Tiffany Benn, 5th
I remember when my dog Lady got hit by a car three times and didn't die,
but the fourth time she did.
-- Tina Burke, 3rd
I remember my first cat. He was so white I forgot he was there.
-- Maria saona, 3rd
I remember when I took a banana and splashed it on my head.
-- Joann Cruz, 5th
I remember going camping in the woods near a pond and finding a beautiful
orange salamander.
I remember when my sister "overloved" the salamander. It died
from being rubbed in dry sand. She cried for three days.
-- Naomi Berner, 6th
I remember when hope was a strain beyond your strength that adds an inch
to your inward length. Hope is the moment when you jump up
from the trouble out of the slump. Hope is the light in the awful dark,
the clear bright blazing becking spark that sets your
feet to a running place for one little look at her beaking face.
-- Reynaldo Camilo, 5th
TYGER, TYGER, BURNING BRIGHT
IN THE FOREST OF THE NIGHT
Horse, Horse, clickety-clackety.
In the ponds, splash, splash.
Come in for a nice delight and wake yourself from the night.
Kid, Kid, I don't have the time. But away went the horse with
his clickety-clackety splash, splash.
-- Doris Norris, 5th
Lion Lion, what big eyes through
the forest, up in the sky.
From the mountains to the isle.
Oh Lion what so lies? From my eyes to my bone I shiver and tiver
with my eyes. I sit and wonder where I am. I come as your sign.
Why so high? You sit beside me. I wonder why. I like you. You
like ne, so step outside and rumblewise. I fight you so you fight
me, but sometimes I wonder why. My mother comes, she smacks you fast.
-- Ana Maria Mendez, 4th
Condor! Condor! up in the sky,
how can you fly so high?
Glowing eyes in the night.
Why do they glow like a G.E. light?
The wings of Paradise stretch so far,
why do they look like a glob of tar?
You live so high on the mountain peaks
just sitting there for twenty weeks.
-- Charles Amorosa, 4th
As the weasel whips through
the wind he picks up a chicken.
After he finishes it he thunders
back for more.
With his beady little eyes he
watches as the chickens go by,
waiting for the right moment to attack.
What a fearless beast he is.
Very slowly he squirms by you
and you don't even know it.
-- Rita Sansotta, 4th
Lion, Lion, why are you
King of the Jungle?
I am King of the Jungle
'cause I am brave.
Butterfly, Butterfly,
why do you have so beautiful wings?
I don't know, said the butterfly.
-- Barbara, 4th
Oh little cat, why are you so
gentle and kind? Oh little dog,
why are you so fierce and angry?
Oh why are you so white and soft?
Oh why are you so big and small?
I asked my animals one day. They
just stood there watching me and then walked away.
-- Michele Campis, 6th
VERTICAL WORDS
Adrian ran down the road, made a
Dent in a window and he
Ran back home, then he was
Inside the house. Then there was
An assembly waiting for him.
"No you don't," they said.
-- Adrian Harry, 4th
A boy is
Lying to me.
Oh, I
Need the
Excitement
-- John Lucas, 3rd
Lost in a woods
I saw a
Girl. She was so beautiful my
Heart was torn apart.
The girl didn't like me as much as I liked her.
-- Anonymous, 6th
Embarking on the
Never-ending flight of the
Dark world they call
Love,
Expect to receive
Something
Spectacular, and you get dumped.
-- Roesanne Cordero, 8th
Love is like a dove flying
Over the ocean in a flash
Very late in the
Evening, saying, "How about a date?"
-- Venus Rhodes, 6th
Though my
Heart
Is breaking,
Still I like to dance.
-- Vicki Babb, 4th
Madness is terrible. It is
A horrible thing.
Don't you just love it?
-- Marilyn Gonzales, 6th
Mom
And
Dad
-- Anonymous, 9th
Night stays in a can like soda
Until someone opens it.
Then it fizzes,
Squirting all over your face.
-- Lamar Gardner, 5th
Jack will
Understand
Love and
I will not
Allow it.
-- Julia Papleo, 3rd
Under the artificial me which
No one really knows, I try to
Deliver the message that I hope
Everyone will see. What is
Right or wrong. I am
Starting to find out.
Trying to know which one I should do;
Although I am confused and
No one is listening and I am almost near
Death,
I'm trying to
Nervously tell
God to fill me with understanding.
-- Jane Martinez, 8th
A dog was
Lost and I
Said,
"Okay - another dog."
-- Rosa Medina, 3rd
Everything around me
Now is
Just so full
Of
You and me.
-- Joseph Caracciola, 3rd
THIS IS JUST TO SAY
I have eaten
the plums
that were in
the icebox
and which
you were probably
saving for breakfast
Forgive me
they were delicious
so sweet
and so cold
-- William Carlos Williams
This is just to say
I have eaten the ice cream
in the freezer which you were probably
saving for your boyfriend.
Forgive me,
it was so cold and I was so angry.
-- Cesar Victorino, 4th
I am sorry I
let your
sister spill the
juice but
it looked like
orange raindrops
falling from the
sky.
-- Kerry Washington, 1st
Sis, I am very sorry for spoiling
your date last night by pouring juice
on your white dress, pulling off your
wig, cutting your boyfriend's hair,
eating up the whole pizza, refusing
to give you the unbrella when it
started to rain and for pouring
water on your head so your mascara
ran and you looked like a raccoon,
but I had loads of fun!
-- Evanne Keith, 4th
I'm sorry that I ate your lunch.
I'm sorry that I ate your breakfast.
I'm sorry that I'm going to eat your supper.
-- Carlos Cintron, 4th
I'm sorry I looked at your diary,
But I was desperate to find what
was in it. So I didn't like it.
So I put lipstick on it. It
was funny then.
-- Nichola Tucker
Sorry to say
I exploded your house
but it looked so
nice up in the
air. But I don't
think your cat
and dog liked it when they went
and never came back.
-- Adolphus Reid, 4th
I'm sorry that I put the baby
in the bathtub, but I thought she could
swim.
-- Anonymous, 4th
This is just to say
Sorry for embarassing
you at the dance when I poured spaghetti
on your white dress but it was
kind of intresting looking at you
while you were screaming at me
for doing that.
-- Angela Knight, 6th
This is just to say
I'm sorry I read your diary,
but you read mine last week.
You can make a new one
that I didn't read.
-- Melinda Joy Nixon, 1st
I have given
your favorite geraniums
to the dog
for dinner.
The order in
which she ate
them was facinating.
Slowly disappearing
into an opening
and closing door.
-- Naomi Berner, 5th
REPEATED LINE
Yes it is
Yes it would
Yes you could
Yes I will
Yes I am
Yes it is
Yes you should
Yes it will
Yes she will
Yes it can
Yes she is
Yes I do, and I love you.
-- Anonymous, 3rd
I live in a house with you.
I like it too.
I wish I could always see you.
I like it, it's cool.
I want to see you every day.
I want you.
I'll keep you.
I'll dare not trade you.
I like you the way you are.
I'll read to you.
I'll do anything you say.
I want to keep you but I can't.
I wish I could know you.
I wish I was a princess.
I wish it was true.
I would miss you if you left.
but I'd like that too.
I like you.
-- Jackie Lee, 3rd
I think of you
I think of me
I think of everything this world can be
I think of sunlight
I think of rain
I think I'm going insane
I think of flowers
I think of thorns
I think of animals with pointed horns
I think of the beginning
I think of the end
and this is what I think I'll send.
-- Leara Bowles, 5th
When I opened the refrigerator a giant red tomato jumped on me.
When I opened the refrigerator a carrot threw carrot juice at me.
When I opened the refrigerator a glob of jello flew on me.
When I opened the refrigerator a drumstick beat on my head.
When I opened the refrigerator rice started shooting at me.
When I opened the refrigerator the soup fell on my feet.
The next time I go in that refrigerator, I'm carrying a gun.
-- John Russell, 6th
HAIKU
Peas are what
I hate, but peas are
what I eat.
-- Deanna Fernandez, 6th
Torres is hoping
to get my girl. Ah,
he won't suceed.
-- Robert, 7th
I am tired.
Please don't wake me up.
Morning isn't over.
-- Deana C., 5th
I want the
world to know that I
am here today.
-- Edwin M., 6th
My sisters sometimes
bother me. So what? I
bother them back.
-- Melissa Baez, 4th
My dog bites
and I answer the door.
I am happy.
-- Anonymous
The purple flower
on the green grasses, so
I sit down.
-- Dominick Gallusso, 3rd
You know what
I mean when I say
I love you.
-- Anonymous
She was a
very stupid lady, but she
got over it.
-- Preya Singh, 5th
I remember when
I saw the cloud kiss
my dog today.
-- Jose Rosario, 3rd
I'm in love.
I'm in love. Keep it
just like that.
-- Lisa Wittaker, 4th
Women are sexy.
Oh boy, is that true!
What'll I do?
-- Clarence, 6th
Remember me, remember
me. Put it all together
and remember me.
-- Nora Llerandez, 3rd
I saw you
talking to your best friend
in the park.
-- Eulalia Bastista, 5th
The wind is
blowing as I stand waiting
for my love.
-- Anonymous
Ugly singing birds
stand behind my uncomfortable bed.
Too much bother.
-- Ingrid Gonzales, 8th
Go to Heaven.
If it's nice, call me.
I'll be there.
-- Jennifer Leyden, 3rd
What happened to
me and not to you
can be words.
-- Jeanette Orsini, 5th
If you like
gum then go buy it
and chew it.
-- Anonymous, 3rd
POETRY IS
Poetry is like words out of place.
-- Sonell, 4th
When I sit to write poetry I feel a very unusual person.
When I can't think of something I look very fierce. I take
glances, look at everything so I can get an idea.
When I finish I feel temperamental.
-- Danielle Lapointe, 5th
Poetry is something I can't understand. It's confusing too.
I don't know what to say, but I like it. It's like going
through a maze but not finding my way out...
I can't find my way out!
I can't breathe! There are three doors. One leads to
poetry, one leads to ice-skating, one leads to horse-riding.
I open the door and out comes poetry. Oh how I love poetry!
-- Mille Hernandez, 5th
Poems are so classy.
They answer you right back.
-- Tania Trovato, 4th
Writing a poem is like eating a harsh brain.
Writing a poem is like eating dirt if you ate it before.
-- Monique Allen, 4th
Poetry is like a basketball bouncing in my head and it flies
out of my ear and I take a shot and the backboard yells
POETRY and I say Shut up back to the backboard and the shot
goes in and the backboard falls on top of me.
-- Kevin Kay, 4th
Poetry is just a ball that I'm throwing on the wall.
-- John Young, 3rd
Poetry reminds me of a cat washing itself while the master is looking for
it.
-- Anonymous, 5th
Poetry is like your mouth playing a trick on you.
-- Nanette Suarez, 3rd
Poetry is like the alphabet all talking at once.
-- Kristina Locognata, 4th
Poetry is like
having a snake
in your room
and you don't know what to do.
-- Lisa Colon, 6th
Poetry is like
a movie star
with no fans.
-- April Chin, 6th
Poetry is like a cloud. It rains when it wants to.
-- Orlando Crespo, 6th
Poetry is a
slow flash
of light
because it comes
to you piece by
piece.
-- Felix Rivera, 6th
OTHER
The good side of love is meeting
someone that cares about you.
But the bad side of love is
when that certain person who cares
about you falls for another girl.
Then you slap him in the face.
That's another good side of love.
-- Virginia A., 6th
The sun is like a rose
People said a rose could never be the sun
and I said yes! yes! yes!
and I kept saying yes!
-- Kaisha White, 5th
It is dawn,
as beautiful as Goldie Hawn.
The planes fly
deep in the sky, high,
while poor birds
fall off a roof and
land flat dead.
Deep in the clouds children
Go to bed,
and a big blue bird
up in heaven.
TWA just turned eleven.
-- Anthony Fraticelli, 5th
Woman/Child
As I sit on my veranda swing
as I sit on the playground swing
watching my birds fly about
watching some pigeons take off
my lover alights from his horse
Tony gets off his bike
how he showed his love for me
how he gave me a sweatheart candy
I think he loves me.
I bet he likes me.
-- Denise Smith, 6th