By: Alyza Van Tassel
Inspired by Tim Burton's 1999 film, "Sleepy Hollow," and Washington Irving's original tale.
All suggestions welcome. Please do not sue me, this is just MY version of the story!!!!!!, and I am certainly not profiting in any way by this, other than having the pleasure of knowing that other people will read and like my writing. Please ask me for permission before using this story anywhere and do not plagiarize, or I'll chop your head off like a tulip! :) Hee hee, I'm kidding…but don't you DARE copy without permission! (If you ask me to let you put it on your site or something, I'm pretty sure I'll say yes…but ASK first! K? PLEEEEEASE?? :) (E-mail me at: Alyza_@excite.com) Alyza, Eliot (as MY character), and all other people who do not appear in the originals belong to me. A couple of things about the story. No, at first, the Headless Horseman is not ghastly-looking in the BEGINNING like in the movie (sharp teeth, I mean) I'll let you know how he changes as the story progresses. K? And remember..... NO PLAGIARISM!!! Or else!!!

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So, most people are familiar with the Legend of Sleepy Hollow. But what they don't know is what happened many years before the Headless Horseman rode the trails of the Western Woods, striking terror with its most powerful blows even at the strongest mortals. What they don't know is the tale of a young heiress, the story of how a runaway and a warrior created what could never be -- love, consequently shattered by the horror of war, demonic possession, and destiny. But the storyteller knows that not even the very fires of Hell itself could keep the pair apart…but the question is.......will they pay with their souls for it?
This is the story of Alyza Van Tassel (1755-1779) and the man later known as the Galloping Hessian of the Hollow.

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Chapter the First

Here begins the tale............

Sleepy Hollow, New York, 1770

"Alyza…" The high-pitched sound came from outside.
After a minute of no response, the voice spoke again, this time louder and with more impatience. "Hey, Alyza!! You awake?"
A bump on the white, quilt-covered bed stirred slightly. A moment later, a sleepy girl of about the age of 15 emerged from underneath the covers. Her long blonde hair was a complete mess; the result of what she called a 'nightmare night.'
Alyza Van Tassel slowly got up, nearly hitting her head on the low canopy. Yawning, she took the cup of water from her bedside table. She set it down once she saw that some wax had dripped from her night candle into the cup.
"Well, THIS day is starting off nice," she muttered to herself as she made her way to the window to the left of her bed. She pulled aside the silky white curtains, letting the warm effulgence of the morning sun envelop her and the room. Her mood brightened at seeing the glowing horizons and the woods in the distance. Even though Sleepy Hollow always looked the same, it fascinated her every time. Alyza just wished she could say the same about the life she led there.

She stuck her head out the window, and beheld her friend Paul Masbath, a raggedy boy of the same age as Alyza herself. He was from a family much poorer than the Van Tassels (they were of the middle class), but Alyza's best friend nonetheless. She did not care how much money Paul had. He brushed his brown hair to one side and looked up, squinting.
"Hey there," he said. "Wow, your hair is almost as messy as mine!"
Alyza gave him a sarcastic smile. "Very funny," she said. "What are you doing here this early, anyway?"
"Well, I figured your father's still asleep, so he won't yell at me," Paul replied. "You know, with him not wanting me here and all."
Alyza made a gesture of rejection. "Oh, pish-posh," she said. "No one is going to tell me who MY friends are."
"So you're coming or not?"
"Of course," Alyza said. "'Tis tradition."
"Great," Paul answered. "Then—"

Just at that moment, Alyza heard someone coming up the stairs. "Oh no, be quiet," she whispered to her friend. "My father's coming."
Paul made a wave of agreement and vanished behind the corner of the house.
The heavy door opened.
"Good morning, sunshine," her father's head (since that was all that could be seen in the doorway) said. Finally, the rest of her father stepped into the room.

"How are you?"
"Very well, Father," she replied, all the while glancing outside out of the corner of her eye. She hoped Paul didn't scram.

Now was the time for her to apply her powers of persuasion. "Papa..."
"Oh my word," he said immediately. "Whenever you call me that, it either means you want something or you're just being nice." He smiled. "It is usually the former."
Alyza wasted no time. "May I go gather some flowers today? It is such a beautiful spring morning, and I thought--"
"Of course, dear," he replied, and Alyza smiled. "Take heed of the woods, though; make sure you leave them before darkness falls."
"Don't worry," she answered as she kissed him on the cheek. "I'll be back before you know it." With that, she skipped out the door, in a mood quite different from her usual morning moods.

"Everything is in bloom," Paul said as the pair walked just outside the Western Woods on a flower-filled meadow. Alyza breathed in the air deeply. The scent was intoxicating, wonderful. She bent and added some more flowers to her giant bouquet.
"What on earth are you planning to do with all those flowers?" Paul wondered aloud. Alyza smiled.
"Well, half are going into our house, and half are...for you-know-what."
"Ah, I see. But we don't need this much," Paul replied. "It's usually only a few handfuls."
"Don't worry, we can always scatter them to the winds," Alyza answered and took off at high speed, her long light blue dress and transparent veil trailing behind her.
"Hey, wait!" Paul yelled out as he followed her to their usual place, a small clearing just beyond the meadow. Once there, he found his best friend seated, accompanied by three other young women and a young man. They lifted their heads up to look at him. They were smiling, happy to see all the members of their group assembled together once again.
They helped the poor of Sleepy Hollow. They gathered herbs and made healing potions to help treat illnesses. But their group meetings were kept secret, for some of their practices involved chants to help inspire them.

Sephine Castellion, the daughter of a prosperous Spanish merchant who had moved to the Hollow three years ago, and her friend Ines Alighieri greeted Paul with warm and welcoming glances. So did the third member of the group, Genevieve Van Garrett, the only child of the richest man in Sleepy Hollow. The fourth was Ryan Bates, a nice, sweet guy, who had had his eye on Genevieve for quite a while....
Alyza waved for Paul to come down the hill. She turned back to the wooden bowl she held in her hands.
"Are we all ready, then?"
"Absolutely," Paul said, finally sitting down next to Sephine. Alyza grinned to herself. It was so obvious he liked her. She could hardly keep from chuckling as she saw him smooth out his brown hair and brush it back. Sephine blushed. He did look very handsome though, but Alyza did not like him in that way. Paul had been her friend for too long. She had seen him do things like puke, fall into puddles and off trees, and faint.......the list went on. She wondered what Sephine would think if she knew half the things Alyza knew. Nevertheless, she decided not to say a word.

"Err......let us proceed, then," Alyza finally said. They sat in a circle. Alyza put herbs and special leaves that she had gotten from her house into the bowl. Genevieve added fresh water from the river. Paul helped Sephine get the juice out of the berries that they had gathered in the Western Woods. Finally, Ines stirred the mixture. They all breathed in, out, and in again. Alyza started a chant....
"Rogo auxilia Dei. Laudamus legatum caelorum. Cupimus bonos res."
Ines and Sephine translated the Latin into English, saying it together, inhaling the deep scent of the potion they had made. "I ask God for help. We praise the legate of the skies. We desire good things."
Ryan, Paul, and Genevieve joined in. Alyza unnoticeably rolled her eyes (but in a nice sweet way) at Paul. He was singing louder than everyone to impress Sephine. Why did he act like such a goofball every time he was around her? Well, Alyza just answered her own question. She had to admire the girl, though, and didn't blame Paul for liking her. She only wished that one day, SHE would meet a charming, dark, handsome man who would truly love her, forever. Ah, but those kinds of people existed only in fairy tales, it seemed. But deep in her heart, Alyza knew that someone like that was out there, somewhere.

She stopped her rambling thoughts and concluded the chant, pouring the concoction into a small blue bottle. This would be later heated and left to settle.

She was happy.


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