God Must Have Spent a Little More Time on
You
by Rose Thorne
(God Must Have Spent) A Little More Time
On You
by Rose Thorne
Disclaimer: The song (God Must Have Spent) A Little More Time On You
belongs to N'Sync and anyone else who helped to produce it. Yu Yu Hakusho
belongs to Yoshihiro Togashi, Studio Perriot, TV Tokyo, Shounen Jump, and anyone
else who helped produce this series.
Can this be true?
Tell me, can this be real?
How can I put into words what I feel?
[Hiei sits in a tree overlooking a lake, confusion running through his mind. He
can't believe that the events of the past few days have actually happened. It
feels so strange...these strange emotions. Especially the one known as 'love'.
Hiei sighs, not knowing how to express these new emotions.]
My life was complete
I thought I was whole
Why do I feel like I'm losing control?
[Hiei pulls his knees to his chest, his emotions reeling. He had thought his
life was fine as it was, and now his whole world is different...strange...He
feels like he's falling.]
I never thought that love could feel like this
Until you changed my world with just one kiss
[Hiei hadn't even known what love was until that night. He had never before
experienced it. He knew friendship since he had become a member of the Urameshi
team. And he had been confused even before he learned what love was. He'd had an
idea about it. Kurama had once explained ningen emotions to him, though Hiei
hadn't really understood it until now. The Jaganshi raises a hand to his lips,
remember the sensation of being kissed, and the realization that he is
loved that came with it. He had always thought that love was stupid, something
that was unnecessary. Now he knew differently.]
How can it be that right here with me
There's an angel?
It’s a miracle!
[Hiei thinks back to his life without this emotion, this love, and realizes that
he can never go back to life without it. He remembers the rumors about Youkos in
the Makai, and his heart sinks. But Kurama quells his fears with a few words.
Hiei hugs him gently, cuddling close, hardly daring to believe that this
beautiful being could love somebody like him.]
Your love is like a river
Peaceful and deep
Your soul is like a secret that I
Never could keep
[Hiei watches Kurama as he sleeps, a feeling of protectiveness surrounding him.
He frowns as he realizes that this is the first time he's ever felt that feeling
for something other than treasure or his sister. Kurama opens his eyes and pulls
Hiei against his chest, hugging him gently. Hiei falls asleep, feeling like he's
enveloped in a blanket of love.]
When I look into your eyes
I know that its true
God must have spent a little more time on you
[Hiei wakes to see Kurama, and he can't help but smile as he looks into his
lover's beautiful emerald eyes. As the fox leans close and kisses him, Hiei
realizes how fortunate he is to be close to one so lovely, so flawless.]
In all of creation are things great and small
You are the one that surpasses them all
More precious than any diamond or pearl
They broke the mold when you came in this world
[Kurama holds Hiei tightly, feeling very fortunate to have won the heart of one
so precious. He kisses Hiei as he realizes that no one could ever be as precious
as the Jaganshi he is holding. He knows that Hiei is unique in every possible
way.]
And I'm trying hard to figure out
Just how I ever did without
The warmth of your smile
The heart of a child
That's deep inside
Leaves me purified
[Kurama stares, breathless, as Hiei smiles at him. He has never seen anything so
beautiful, so...wonderful. He hugs Hiei again, wondering how anyone could ever
have abandoned a being so innocent and amazing. He remembers Hiei's confusion at
the beginning of their relationship and realizes that Hiei has never experienced
love before. The Jaganshi is truly just learning how to love. Kurama feels a
sense of wonder as he realizes that he is Hiei's teacher. His only teacher.]
Your love is like a river
Peaceful and deep
Your soul is like a secret that I
Never could keep
[Kurama kisses Hiei as the Jaganshi falls asleep after a passionate night. He
feels as if Hiei's love has totally saturated him, contenting him and making his
love for the fire youkai even deeper. Hiei has opened his soul to him in the
past few weeks, and Kurama feels privileged and blessed to have the honor of his
trust.]
When I look into your eyes
I know that its true
God must have spent a little more time on you
[Kurama smiles as Hiei stirs slightly and opens his crimson eyes halfway. The
Jaganshi smiles back and closes his eyes, snuggling closer to Kurama before
falling back to sleep. Kurama entwines his arms around his lover and buries his
face in spiky, sweet-smelling hair. He knows that Hiei is nearly perfect...At
least perfect for him.]
I never thought that love could feel like this
Until you changed my world with just one kiss
Kurama remembers Hiei's reaction to the first kiss. The fire spirit had run
away, probably frightened and confused. And Kurama had sunk into a deep
depression, knowing that, after this, they wouldn't even be able to be friends.
Then Hiei had entered his room late on night and had quickly kissed Kurama,
obviously not having any experience in the field. Kurama grins as he realizes
how far gone that is.]
How can it be that right here with me
There's an angel?
It’s a miracle!
[Kurama frowns as he realizes that Hiei is only in the Ningenkai until his
parole ends. He confesses the worry to his lover. Hiei just smiles. "Not
even Enma himself could keep me from your side, Fox." Kurama smiles back,
relieved. He knows that he has found his soul mate. Neither of them will let
anything separate them, not even death.]
Your love is like a river
Peaceful and deep
Your soul is like a secret that I
Never could keep
[Hiei and Kurama kiss passionately, entwined around each other. They both feel
as if they are drowning in each other's love. Both know that they are soul
mates, meant to be together. Made for each other. Both know the other
completely, body, soul, and mind. And they know that they will be together for
all eternity.]
When I look into your eyes
I know that its true
God must have spent a little more time on you
Well, this is the first songfic in a two part series. The other one is I
Drive Myself Crazy, also by N'Sync. Read that one too. 'Course, if you read
this one second, not much you can do. Doesn't really matter anyhoo...
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