This is my submission for the Rising Stars of Manga Contest by Tokyopop. I know the many reasons why It was rejected just by simply glancing over them: 1.The artwork - The backgrounds are barely there and plus some of the drawings just plain suck 2. The plot- pretty simple and stupid, might be boring to some too. 3. The spelling - I never proofread. I didn't have time to. I was really rushing it because I was trying to get it sent out before the post office closed. Had I'd known Tokyopop was accepting submissions after the deadline due to labor day I wouldn't have rushed so much. By the last several pages you can see I gave up on the toning because It would've taken too much time.This being said why would I still post the pictures here? Well a part of me still likes this comic even though it was a half-assed job. Basically I don't wanna throw it away completely.

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