Bishoujo Senshi Sera Chibimoon
by Akaruimi Ougon
Rated: G
Genre: Romance, Continuation, action, etc. (like the original)
Part: Episode 3
Created: 7/7/00
Updated: 10/4/00
E-mail: kim_yoon_mi@yahoo.com
SERIES: Bishoujo Senshi Sera Chibimoon Newmoon (BSSCMN)
Hitsuji: Diana honto ni Kawaii tsu. [Diana is really cute!]
Yoon Mi: Hitsuji baka desu. [Hitsuji is stupid.]
Hitsuji: Yoon Mi, that was mean!
Yoon Mi: You were about the give away the episode!
Hitsuji: I was not! I was doing a hook *sniff*! Let me do the
disclaimer.. Now as I am writing this there is Cloverway to consider!
They are so indecisive! Hint: Stick close to the original as possible!
Can't they do it in Japanese.
(Yoon Mi rolls her eyes)
Hitsuji: What? Anyway Takeuchi-sensei is great! She's the creator of
Sailor Moon. Her full name is Takeuchi Naoko. Nakayoshi.. well they
makde the magazine that used to carry the manga of Bishoujo Senshi
Sailormoon. Kodansha Inc made the tankoubon, and then Toei
Entertainment made the anime. Which is what we are basing this
version of the fan fiction on. Asahi TV put it up on the TV. They are
the channel that Sailor Moon was on. Bandai makes the toys, and then
Mixx makes the manga, and DiC made the first dub of the anime, and
then irwin also makes toys. They are all great and Yoon Mi and I in no
way want to infringe on their copyright of Sailor Moon, because Sailor
Moon is great!
Yoon Mi: What a touching speech. You were about to give away the
episode.
Hitsuji: I was not! Besides Diana turns hu-
Yoon Mi: You are now! I know you! You'd tell the whole episode!
Hitsuji *pout* I would not!
Yoon Mi: Fine.. but I think it's about time they read the fan fiction.
Hitsuji: Can't I say the next one is about Sailor Venus?
*Yoon Mi gags Hitsuji*
Yoon Mi: *I* Would like to thank the following prereaders:
Wolves- Keep the flute making up! Then you can make some Ail flutes
for the Sailpr Moon Cos players. Thank you for reading the fan fiction
and loving it so much!
Elliot- Thanks for the proofreading! It helps a lot!
Serendipity- I know you will be a successful writer someday! You just
need the practice! Thanks for reading my fan fiction.
Otakimi-chan/ Hanoko-chan- I know you loved the fan fiction. Thanks
for your support!
Sailor Kiska- for dishing it out and having faith in me! Thank you!
Any other volunteer prereaders are welcome. (This means you get to
read it before it comes out! ^.~
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Japanese Episode 3: Diana is Captured! A Kitten in Human Form.
FADE IN:
N/A RANDOM SCENERY N/A
(Flashes from this episode)
SMALL LADY
Diana wants to be human! I laughed at her even though I didn't mean
it! Then she ran away and got captured! To those who captured her!
(ANGRY): In the name of the Moon I will punish you!
(FADE OUT)
Beginning song: Moon Dream
(Title screen- Bishoujo Senshi Sailor Chibimoon Newmoon: Diana is
Captured! A Kitten in Human Form.)
SMALL LADY
Bishoujo Senshi Sailor Chibimoon Newmoon: Diana is Captured! A Kitten in
Human Form.
FADE IN:
INT. CRYSTAL PALACE 20:30
(The scenes opens with a close up on Diana's face.)
(The camera pans out to show that DIANA is riding on top of SMALL
LADY's Head.)
PERSON 1
How rude to bring a cat to a ball, especially on top of her head. I know
She is a Princess, but she should have standards.
PERSON 2
I don't see why she should bring a cat at all.
(DIANA hears and gets upset.)
DIANA
(THINKING): I've always been by Small Lady's side. Am I in the way?
Am I preventing her from becoming a real Lady?
(The camera points back to PERSON 1 and PERSON 2)
(Sailor Jupiter is behind the two people in a stunning new green dress.
She taps both people's shoulders.)
(PERSON 1 and PERSON 2 turn around.)
SAILOR JUPITER
(RAISING ONE EYEBROW): Do you have a problem with having cats
here?
(PERSON 1 AND PERSON 2 sweatdrop and raise their hands palm out
and shake their heads.)
SAILOR JUPITER
I have three friends who are cats. Diana is one of them. She just
happens to be on Small Lady's head. Luna is sick and Artemis is with
her. All of them talk. Do you have a problem with that?
(SAILOR JUPITER is making a slight punching motion into her palm.))
(PERSON 1 sweatdrops.)
SAILOR JUPITER
Now (GRINNING A LITTLE): appologize to Diana and Small Lady for
ruining their wonderful evening.
PERSON 1
Appologize to a cat?!!
(SAILOR JUPITER takes one step closer to PERSON 1)
SAILOR JUPITER
(MISCHEIVIOUS LOOK): Do you want to talk about it?
PERSON 1
(BOWING): Uhh.. yes mam! I mean I don't want to fight.. I mean.. I will
appologize!
(PERSON 1 runs over to DIANA and SMALL LADY dragging PERSON 2
behind him, skids to a stop, and bows)
(PERSON 1 makes PERSON 2 bow and they appologize profusely)
DIANA
I understand! Most people don't rest their pets on their heads!
SMALL LADY
(WHISPERING): How do you know that?
DIANA
I read your How to Become a Lady" book from Sailor Mercury!
(SAILOR JUPITER approaches and PERSON 1 and PERSON 2 run off.)
DIANA
Isn't that rude?
SAILOR JUPITER
What was rude was those two not being polite to you.
(DIANA's eye turn to stars and she jumps into SAILOR JUPITER's
arms.)
DIANA
Sailor Jupiter sugoi! [Yoon Mi: "Sailor Jupiter is awesome!" I couldn't do
it in English because "awesome" has a generation association to it.
"sugoi" doesn't. It's just a positive interjecture.]
(SMALL LADY smiles)
DIANA
(THINKING): I wonder if I am in Small Lady's way.
(FADE OUT)
FADE IN:
INT. A DARK PLACE ?
(ONYX and IOLITE are grovelling at Coral's feet. Coral is red with
anger. Coral points to the pool.)
CORAL
Look at her!
(The pool shows Small Lady laughing an smiling.)
CORAL
She gets to have fun again and with her kitten! Can't you tell the cat
(EMPHASIS): Coral wants? [Hitsuji: Ohhh coool! 3rd person! It's genius!
The Japanese rarely use I! Nope! They often interject their names
instead, or drop the noun! *grins*] (WHINING): Coral wanted the gray
kitten. Coral wants it now. (STERN): Stop being late! You are supposed
to be my parents! (WHINING): Small Lady isn't supposed to have fun!
(EMPHASIS): Coral is supposed to have fun.
IOLITE
We're sorry! The new crystal was too powerful for us.
ONYX
We're truly sorry. We won't fail you again, Coral-sama.
CORAL
You better not! I can't tolerate it!
(ONYX and IOLITE fade into the shadows)
CORALKO
Don't worry Coral-sama. You know I'll always love you.
CORAL
(POUTING): They don't love me. No one does. Only you Coralko, only
you!
(CORALKO smiles as her eyes pulsate a red glow.)
(The camera centers on the pool which is showing DIANA's face.)
(FADE OUT)
FADE IN:
INT. CRYSTAL PALACE 20:00
(The camera opens on DIANA's face.)
(DIANA looks worried as she steps away from the hall and goes to the
balcony. She jumps up neatly onto the banaster.)
(SMALL LADY finds DIANA on the banaster and rests her elbows next
to her.)
SMALL LADY
The party was wonderful! I got to dance, and eat, and show off my
beautiful new dress. It would have been perfect if those two guests
were not so rude to you!
DIANA
(WISTFUL): You are lucky. As a human you can dance, and eat sweets,
wear beautiful dresses, and even fall in love with bishounen. [Hitsuji:
Ahh beautiful boys. What a wonderful thing! *.* What would anime be
without them. *shakes head violently!* I won't have it! *.* Bishounen.]
I wish I could do that.
(SMALL LADY imagines DIANA in a dress as a cat.)
SMALL LADY
(GIGGLING): You'd look funny in a dress!
(DIANA gets upset and jumps to the floor and runs off.)
DIANA
(THINKING): Maybe I am in the way! Otherwise Small Lady wouldn't be
so mean!
(SMALL LADY runs off after DIANA, but quickly loses her.)
(DIANA runs down the balcony stairs when two hands come from the
shadows and grab her. A person in the shadows laughs with
accomplishment. DIANA struggles and tries to cry out.)
(FADE OUT)
(Commercial Break)
FADE IN:
INT. CRYSTAL PALACE 21:00
(complex camera sequence)
(SMALL LADY is running on the balcony still looking for DIANA.)
SMALL LADY
Diana! Diana! I am very sorry Diana. [Yoon Mi: This works better in
Japanese. Take my word for it. It would be "Diana, Gomen nasai",
which is perfectly fine in Japanese, but a little awkward in English.]
Don't leave me! I don't want to be alone!
(A worried face freezes and shrinks then is put in the upper right
hand corner.)
(SMALL LADY is looking in Diana's bed and in her room.)
SMALL LADY
(Desperate): Diana? Diana? (TEARS FILLING HER EYES): Please, please
I'm sorry.
(The screen freezes and shrinks into the upper left hand corner.)
(SMALL LADY is running through the palace.)
SMALL LADY
(CALLING DESPERATELY): Diana? Diana! Please, Diana!
(Tears stream down her face.)
(SMALL LADY wipes her eyes with the back of her hand.)
SMALL LADY
(WHISPERING SOFTLY): I need you! Why are you not answering me?
(SMALL LADY falls to the floor crying.)
(Screen freezes and shrinks in to the right hand bottom corner.)
(SAILOR JUPITER sees SMALL LADY.)
SAILOR JUPITER
We've been looking all over for you-
(SAILOR JUPITER notices that SMALL LADY is crying.)
SAILOR JUPITER
What's wrong?
SMALL LADY
Diana ran away.
(SAILOR JUPITER hugs SMALL LADY.)
(SMALL LADY cries more.)
SAILOR JUPITER
We'll see Neo-Queen Selenity before you go to bed.
(Camera focuses on SMALL LADY's face. This shrinks into the left
hand bottom corner.)
(A pastel image of SMALL LADY holding up DIANA and laughing is
revealed in the center screen.)
(FADE OUT)
FADE IN:
INT. CRYSTAL PALACE 21:10
(NEO-QUEEN SELENITY is with LUNA, ARTEMIS, SAILOR VENUS, SAILOR
MARS, and SAILOR MERCURY.)
(SAILOR JUPITER and a tired SMALL LADY enter.)
(NEO-QUEEN SELENITY's face softens a little.)
NEO-QUEEN SELENITY
(TO SMALL LADY): What happened?
SMALL LADY
(QUIETLY): Diana ran away. I la- laughed at her. [Yoon Mi: In Japanese
it would not break down that way. azakeri-warau would be laugh at..
but it would go at the end of the sentence. So it would more likely be.
Atashi Di-diana azakeri-warau. or Di-diana azakeri-warau. But since
this makes no sense whatso ever in English grammar rules, I had to
break it up at the verb rather than the object.] (PAUSES): and then
she ran away.
(LUNA sweatdrops and collapses. ARTEMIS licks Luna's head.)
ARTEMIS
Are you alright?
LUNA
(COUGHING): But it's cold and it's not safe.
SMALL LADY
(ASHAMED): I laughed at her when she said she wanted to become
human. I looked everywhere for her.
SAILOR VENUS
We'll find her! Don't worry! The (IN ENGLISH): Sailor Team (In
JAPANESE) is on the job. [Yoon Mi: Again, in Japanese it would break
down differently. it would be Subjsect Object, Verb.]
SAILOR MERCURY
I think I can get a trace on her, but it's late.
SAILOR MARS
That's right! You should go to bed and sleep!
SAILOR JUPITER
I'll tuck you in.
( Everyone except LUNA and ARTEMIS raise their hands.)
SAILOR VENUS, SAILOR MARS, SAILOR MERCURY, AND NEO-QUEEN
SELENITY
I want to help!
SMALL LADY
Thank you.
(SAILOR JUPITER, SAILOR VENUS, SAILOR MARS, SAILOR MERCURY,
and NEO-QUEEN SELENITY fight for priority with rock, paper,
scissors.)
ARTEMIS
(SWEAT DROPPING):Some things never change.
LUNA
I guess they never will.
(FADE OUT)
FADE IN:
INT. A DARK PLACE ?
(Diana is in a big silver bird cage. Diana is acting like an ordinary cat
and innocent. Coral examines Diana up close.)
CORAL
(SHAKING CAGE): Talk! Talk! Talk! Talk! Talk now! Coralko, she won't
talk.
CORALKO
Selfish cat. What you want is-
(CORAL is not paying attention. CORAL is shaking the cage harder
making DIANA yowl.)
(CORALKO sweatdrops.)
CORAL
Cat talk!
DIANA
(INNOCENT): You are very rude by human standards.
CORAL
She talked! But I am a good little girl!
(Still picture of DIANA leafing through the "How to Become a Lady"
book.)
DIANA
(REMEMBERING): Aren't you supposed to say "Diana, would you please
be so kind as to talk to me." I believe it's more proper.
CORAL
(YELLING AND INSISTING): I am a good little girl. You're just a fur ball
with whiskers and a tail that can talk. You can't tell me I am not a
good girl!
(Coral pouts)
(Picture of DIANA on top of SMALL LADY's head.)
DIANA
Small Lady-sama was nice to me. She talked to me as a friend. She
would never have to kidnap me.
(A picture of Diana chatting with Small Lady.)
DIANA
She didn't care if I was a cat or not.
(A picture of DIANA being introduced to SMALL LADY.)
DIANA
and if she ever did, she treated me with respect, even though I was a
cat.
(DIANA's eyes water)
DIANA
I miss Small Lady-chan. (INNOCENT): May I please go back to Small
Lady now? I need to appologize for my actions.
(Coral shakes the silver cage again.)
CORAL
No! Not until you are nice to Coral! Love Coral! You must because
Coral orders it!
(DIANA recovers and wipes her tears away with the back of her paw.)
DIANA
I miss Small Lady-chan.
CORAL
Iolite-papa! Onyx-mama! I don't want this rodent anymore! I want to be
a Princess now! Kill Small Lady! [Yoon Mi: Cats are felines, but Coral is
naturally stupid, like Hitsuji.]
DIANA
Cats are fe-
IOLITE AND ONYX
Yes, Coral-sama!
(FADE OUT)
FADE IN:
INT. BALCONY 20:00 NEXT DAY
(SMALL LADY is crying softly on the banaster.)
SAILOR MERCURY
(VOICE ONLY): I tried to trace Diana, but I can't lock onto her signal.
Sorry.
SAILOR MARS
(VOICE ONLY): I couldn't see anything in the fire. Sorry.
(Small Lady cries harder.)
SAILOR JUPITER
(VOICE ONLY): I couldn't find her either. Demo, Diajoubu! [Yoon Mi:
Means "But, it's OK!] You have to stick it out and beleive that Diana
still loves you! You two are true friends!
(SMALL LADY continues to cry.)
SMALL LADY
Why? I want you back Diana!
SAILOR VENUS
(VOICE ONLY): We will never give up! We are the Sailor Team and that
means we won't rest until we find her. Uhh.. I couldn't find her either.
(SMALL LADY looks up at the sky.)
SMALL LADY
I am sorry Diana. I am really sorry (SHAKING HEAD IN HER HANDS AND
YELLING): I just want you back! (QUIETER): You are the only friend I
have left. [Hitsuji: *sniff* *sniff* I can just see the tears streaming
down her face.]
(SMALL LADY cries)
(DIANA jumps up on the banaster.)
(SMALL LADY grabs DIANA immediately and swings her in the air and
hugs her gently.)
DIANA
I'm sorry I ran away, but then-
IOLITE
Gall Monkey! Appear!
(The gall forms and appears)
(It's a toy monkey. The stitches are visible.)
ONYX
(POINTING): Get Small Lady.
DIANA
(RAISING HER PAW): those two kidnapped me!
MONKEY
Eek! Monkey!
(SMALL LADY puts down DIANA carefully with a serious and slightly
angry look on her face.)
DIANA
Henshin yo! [Yoon Mi: It means "transform"]
(SMALL LADY nods and grabs her locket)
SMALL LADY
Pink Moon Crystal, Make up!
(SMALL LADY transforms.)
ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON
For Kidnapping my beloved friend, Diana, when we hadn't worked
things out yet! I cannot forgive you! I am the pretty sailor-suited
soldier for love and Justice.. Sailor Chibimoon! In the name of the
moon I will punish you! [Yoon Mi: I could do this in Japanese.]
(DIANA's eyes turn to stars.)
DIANA
Small Lady-chan
GALL MONKEY
Monkey!
(Monkey does a little spin and appears in Eternal Sailor Chibimoon's
outfit.)
(ONYX and IOLITE leave laughing.)
GALL MONKEY
Monkey Copy!
ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON
Stop that!
(ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON points)
GALL MONKEY
Stop that!
(GALL MONKEY points in the same direction as ETERNAL SAILOR
CHIBIMOON)
ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON
Copy this!
GALL MONKEY
Copy this!
(ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON does a ballet spin.)
(GALL MONKEY tries to copy and gets dizzy.)
ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON
Got you!
(ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON takes out the sceptor)
(The attack sequence starts.)
ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON
(VOICE ONLY PRAYING): Pink Moon Crystal, please I want to make up
for my mistake. Please make Diana human if she still wishes it.
[Hitsuji: The wish is unclear! ^_^ now Diana can become human when
she wants!]
ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON
Pink Starlight Honeymoon Therapy Kiss!
MONKEY
Justice! Eek!
(Monkey is destroyed)
(The sparkles start around Diana from her paws. Light slowly
surrounds her. Her legs lengthen and form slowly.)
(LUNA with NEO-QUEEN SELENITY watch.)
(DIANA is now naked. Ribbons form over her body. Clothes take form
with sparkles forming around her.)
(The transformations finshes. Diana still has her tail.)
LUNA
Diana has finally found her true form and she's safe.
NEO-QUEEN SELENITY
Their friendship is deep and sincere.
(NEO-QUEEN SELENITY smiles down at LUNA and walks away with
LUNA.)
(The image of a healthy LUNA in NEO-QUEEN SELENITY's arms freezes
and turns into someting like a sketch. A simular shot between SMALL
LADY and DIANA appears.)
(FADE OUT)
Ending song with credits: Moon Mystery
On the next Bishoujo Senshi Sailor Chibimoon sequence:
(Eternal Sailor Chibimoon running.)
SMALL LADY
Neo-Queen Selenity and King Endymion are leaving on a trip.
(SAILOR VENUS is shown with an index finger up in the air.)
SAILOR VENUS
Artemis, we have to get Luna a present.
(A picture of Artemis talking.)
ARTEMIS
You are disobeying orders! We'll have to clean to floors again!
SAILOR VENUS
I don't care if we have to clean the entire palace, besides it will be
alright! What they can't see they won't know about.
(A darkened image with a dress.)
ARTEMIS
That's "What they don't know won't hurt them." Anyway, I'm not
getting involved! Princess Venus was nicer to me than you! She was
kind and considerate to a cat like me!
SAILOR VENUS
That's mean!
(sounds of SAILOR VENUS cramming ARTEMIS into a basket and
ARTEMIS resisting.)
ARTEMIS
If I was human you'd give me more respect!
(Sailor Venus whistles Moonlight Desentsu)
SMALL LADY
On the Next Sailor Chibimoon Newmoon: The Evolution of Venus's
Starseed! A Beautiful Princess appears!
(A picture of a sparkle starting around Sailor Venus)
SMALL LADY
The Moonlight carries your message of love.
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Hitsuji: Yay! You took my gag off! Thank you Yoon Mi!
Yoon Mi: Only because I had too.
Hitsuji: Maybe you're not that mean afterall!
Yoon Mi: It just warms my heart. By the way if nobody has noticed I
used a 24 hour clock in this fan fiction. It's because the US is the
only country that doesn't use a 24 hour clock.. so I used the
Japanese way for a Japanese fan fiction! That I can smile about! The
dub will be taken over by the great ole American system.
Hitsuji: Am and PM yay! That is a great system.
(Yoon Mi Sighs)
Yoon MI: I was being SARCASTIC.
Hitsuji: Oh! Now can we discuss the episode? Huh, huh?
Yoon Mi: I guess it's worth a shot, but make it quick, I'm tired.
Hitsuji: Yoon Mi isn't sick.
Yoon Mi: You are the one that's sick.
Hitsuji: Nope! She's OK! Wasn't Diana transforming cute? and she has
her tail..
Yoon Mi: Oyasumi nasai! [Good night!]
Hitsuji: Yoon Mi sleepies?
Yoon Mi: I said good night!
Hitsuji: You won't talk about the episode?
(Yoon Mi replaces the gag on Hitsuji and leaves)
Author's Notes:
- I had some major problems with Japanese this time. Sorry about
that, but Japanese has a different construction than English. So if
some words aren't contracted, etc, consider that it would make more
sense in Japanese. This is the Japanese version you know!
- On the wish.. I took advantage of the Japanese language so it is
completely unclear as to what Eternal Sailor Chibimoon is wishing for.
See one sentence can mean will become can become, and so on.. so
therefore I can get away with her changing whenever she wants.. ^^;;
- Technically Diana never will need a manner's book, but I thought it
was a nice touch, and a bit of irony to go with it.
- I know the Monkey was sort of over doing it! But, hey, lightens the
episode a bit. ^^;; I think I've been watching too much Kodocha
recently.. which has both serious and funny seconds apart.
- This episode might be a tad too long.. ^^;; sorry about that. I tried
to cut it down as much as possible. It's supposed to play out in about
21 minutes.
- Yoon Mi and Hitsuji are still fictional. Why? Because they just are.
- The copyrights still belong to their respective companies, and this
episode still belongs to me!
kim_yoon_mi@yahoo.com
Disclaimer: Bishoujo Senshi Sailormoon (and Sailor Moon), is
copyright of Takeuchi Naoko, Nakayoshi, Kodansha Inc., Toei
Entertainment, Asahi TV, Bandai, Mixx Entertainment Inc., DiC, Irwin
and Cloverway Inc. I am NOT doing this for money, just entertainment
and because I happen to love Bishoujo Senshi Sailor Moon. Oh, and
Princess Takeuchi Naoko is great! Thank you Takeuchi-sensei for
creating Bishoujo Senshi Sailor Moon! Anybody out there have that in
Japanese?
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are based have the right to use the character based on them as they
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person allowed to ever allowed to plagiarize this fan fiction is
Takeuchi Naoko, creator of the wonderful ORIGINAL Sailor Moon. It
would be an HONOR is she did.
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