SERIES: Bishoujo Senshi Sera Chibimoon Newmoon (BSSCMN)
Hitsuji: Ohh! That was a long break, wasn't it Yoon Mi?
Yoon Mi: What do you mean? I did all the work commenting on this particular episode!
Hitsuji: I always do all the legal stuff!
Yoon Mi: Which in this version is always at the bottom of the page.
Hitsuji: *crying* You're always mean to me! I am too useful!
Yoon Mi: For other things besides whining and scaring away people? Wow! That's a new one on me.
Hitsuji: Was that Sar-sarcasm?
Yoon Mi: *rolling eyes* get on with it already!
Hitsuji: *pouting* fine! Bishoujo Senshi Sailormoon (and Sailor Moon), is copyright of Takeuchi Naoko, Nakayoshi, Kodansha Inc., Toei Entertainment, Asahi TV, Bandai, Mixx Entertainment Inc., DiC, Irwin, Pioneer, and Cloverway Inc. I happen to love Bishoujo Senshi Sailor Moon and in no way want to infringe or unlawfully profit from Sailor Moon. There is also Optimum who does the voices! I forgot the before!
Yoon Mi: Ahh.. personally this episode I don't like as much as the other venus one.
Hitsuji: Because *I* wasn't working on it with you!
Yoon Mi: You nearly ruined the other episode, so be quiet.
Hitsuji: You're beeeeiiiinnnggg Meaaaaannnn!
Yoon Mi: *sighing* Is that all you can say? Anyway, we would like to thank the following people for prereading this fan fiction.:
Wolves- for the support and enthusiasm.
Mitsukai- for being amazed.
Otakimi-chan- for loving it
Sailor Kiska- for giving positive and negative feedback and being amazed.
Lindsabean- for wanting even more! (though I have no idea why!)
Japanese Episode 4: The Evolution of Venus's Starseed! A Beautiful Princess appears!
| N/A | RANDOM SCENERY | N/A |
(Flashes from this episode)
SMALL LADY
My parents are leaving and Sailor Venus seems to have gotten into even more trouble! Sailor Venus! You'll have to scrub the floors again! or in the name of the moon I'll punish you!
(FADE OUT)
(FADE OUT)
Beginning Song: Moon Dream
Title Screen: Bishoujo Senshi Sailor Chibimoon Newmoon: The Evolution of Venus's Starseed! A Beautiful Princess appears!
SMALL LADY
Bishoujo Senshi Sailor Chibimoon Newmoon: The Evolution of Venus's Starseed! A Beautiful Princess appears!
(FADE OUT)
FADE IN:
| ? | EMPTY SPACE WITH A LIGHT | ? |
(The place is dark. A yellow-gloved hand reaches out of the darkness. We see it touching Artemis's crescent moon lightly.)
SAILOR VENUS
(VOICE ONLY): Don't forget your true form. Never forget your true mission. Please, don't fail me Artemis.
(FADE OUT)
FADE IN:
| EXT. | IN FRONT OF CRYSTAL PALACE | 11:00 |
(SMALL LADY is trying not to cry as she chases the car)
NEO-QUEEN SELENITY
(YELLING): Be brave, and we will be back soon!
KING ENDYMION
Remember Small Lady, One day you will be a true lady.
NEO-QUEEN SELENITY
Find your true destiny.
(LUNA waves from the front seat of the car.)
(Camera shot of back seat)
(Tears are in NEO-QUEEN SELENITY's eyes.)
(KING ENDYMION holds NEO-QUEEN SELENITY close.)
(FADE OUT)
FADE IN:
| INT. | SAILOR VENUS'S BEDROOM | 13:00 |
(SAILOR VENUS is brushing her hair as she is glancing at a magazine. The Magazine lists the 10 hottest cashiers in the Crystal Tokyo area.)
(ARTEMIS is staring at Sailor Venus.)
ARTEMIS
(WISTFUL): You look beautiful.
(DIANA walks outside the bedroom door, she hears Artemis and stops.)
SAILOR VENUS
Why thank you Artemis! What do you say we do some shopping. This soldier life is hard! Let's relax!
ARTEMIS
I'm not gooing--
(SAILOR VENUS crams him in a basket.)
SAILOR VENUS
Stop resisting! Resistance is hopeless!
ARTEMIS
That's resistance is futile!
(SAILOR VENUS puts ARTEMIS in the basket when ARTEMIS isn't paying attention.)
ARTEMIS
Princess Venus was nicer!
(SAILOR VENUS ignores ARTEMIS)
SAILOR VENUS
Princess Venus?
(SAILOR VENUS leaves VENUS'S ROOM)
(DIANA follows)
(SAILOR VENUS runs down the hall quickly on her toes. DIANA falls behind.)
(SMALL LADY sees DIANA)
SMALL LADY
I've been looking all over for you!
DIANA
I'm sorry Small Lady-sama, but Sailor Venus-sama and Artemis-papa are looking like they are running away together.
SMALL LADY
Then, Let's follow them!
(FADE OUT)
FADE IN:
| INT. | A DARK PLACE | ? |
CORALKO
You deserve to take over the universe, Coral-sama.
CORAL
That's right! Coral deserves to take over the universe! Glad I thought of it!
ONYX
Coral-sama, one of the guardians has left the Crystal Palace.
IOLITE
Small Lady is following her.
CORAL
Well what are you waiting for? Kill them!
IOLITE AND ONYX
Yes, Coral-sama!
(FADE OUT)
(Commercial Break)
FADE IN:
| EXT. | THE NEW SHOPPING DISTRICT | 14:00 |
IOLITE
Gall Gaffe! Come out!
(The gall forms and comes out in the clothes from the 70's Japan, looking chubby.)
[Yoon Mi: I wanted to use thin, but that's a cultural construction I'm not sure that the Japanese have.]
ONYX
(POINTING TO SAILOR VENUS): Attack that girl!
GALL GAFFE
Yes, Onyx-grandma
[Yoon Mi: Gaffe is a social error or a faux pas. Gall Gaffe is being rude. In Japanese terms calling someone Onyx's age grandma would be an insult.]
(GALL GAFFE chases SAILOR VENUS)
SMALL LADY
(YELLING): Watch out!
(SAILOR VENUS gets knocked over and the basket falls open.)
DIANA
Artemis-papa?
(SAILOR VENUS lies unconscious)
(SMALL LADY transforms.)
SMALL LADY
Pink Moon Crystal Power!
(Artemis runs to SAILOR VENUS)
SMALL LADY
Make up!
ARTEMIS
This is my fault! I should have told you! Please, please wake up!
(Time slows and then stops.)
ARTEMIS
I have to transform into my true form and awaken your true power.
(ARTEMIS flashes and turns human)
(ARTEMIS leans over SAILOR VENUS and kisses SAILOR VENUS's forehead)
SAILOR VENUS
Artemis?!
(Artemis blushes)
ARTEMIS
I'm sorry I wasn't there for you to ease your pain.
(SAILOR VENUS starts to object. ARTEMIS puts a finger over SAILOR VENUS's lips.)
ARTEMIS
Find your true form.
(SAILOR VENUS nods)
(A miniature version of SAILOR VENUS appears.)
GUARDIAN VENUS
Welcome back Princess Venus. I am the guardian of your crystal.
(SAILOR VENUS's starseed appears in the air and lands in GUARDIAN VENUS's hands. The starseed blossoms and transforms. She presents it to SAILOR VENUS.)
(SAILOR VENUS holds out her hands. GUARDIAN VENUS lands into SAILOR VENUS's hands.)
(SAILOR VENUS sparkles with energy. A yellow dress floats about her and the sign of Venus appears on her forehead.)
(The planet of Venus floats behind her. Around Venus floats a castle.)
PRINCESS VENUS
Venus? Is that home?
(GUARDIAN VENUS nods)
(PRINCESS VENUS looks away.)
PRINCESS VENUS
I had many dreams when I was young. I wanted to be an idol.
(The sound of fans cheering as MINAKO says thank you)
PRINCESS VENUS
I thought I had lost my dream when I became a Sailor soldier. I lost hope of attaining that dream when I became a guardian of Crystal Tokyo. But there are so many nice things on earth.
(PRINCESS VENUS looks at GUARDIAN VENUS.)
PRINCESS VENUS
I won't be able to take my friends with me, will I? Not even Artemis.
(GUARDIAN VENUS gives an understanding look.)
PRINCESS VENUS
I have a new dream. I just want to protect my Prince and princess. I can't turn my back on my friends and this planet.
(Tears run down SAILOR VENUS'S face.)
GUARDIAN VENUS
I knew you would say that Princess Venus. Good luck Princess in achieving your dream. If you ever need your true power just remember me, call out the name of your castle and use your crystal.
(GUARDIAN VENUS disappears in a sparkle of light.)
(SAILOR VENUS wakes up in a new Sailor soldier uniform.)
(ARTEMIS lays by her side. ARTEMIS is a cat again.)
ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON
(TAKING HER STANCE): How dare you interfere with my spying on Sailor Venus and hurt her! I will not forgive you! I am the Pretty sailor-suited soldier for love and justice! Eternal Sailor Chibimoon! In the name of the moon, I will-
(ONYX screams.)
ONYX
Not again!
(ONYX leaves)
ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON
Hey! I wasn't finished yet! (PAUSES): Where was I? Oh right! I will punish you!
[Yoon Mi: Isn't it a pain? But it wouldn't break down that way in Japanese, but you get the idea by now!]
(GALL GAFFE snores, wakes up and rubs her eyes.)
GALL GAFFE
Midget child, could you repeat that?
(GALL GAFFE scratches her head confused.)
DIANA
That was not polite!
(GALL GAFFE, without using the proper addressing forms, asks IOLITE permission to strangle ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON. IOLITE gives permission and GALL GAFFE strangles ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON.)
(ETERNAL SAILOR VENUS gets up.)
ETERNAL SAILOR VENUS
I think I can handle this!
ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON
But.. Sailor Venus..
(ETERNAL SAILOR VENUS nods)
ETERNAL SAILOR VENUS
(RAISING HANDS INTO AIR): Castle Magellan, give me the power to vanquish this evil!
(A yellow crystal materializes into SAILOR VENUS's hands. The crystal blooms. SAILOR VENUS grows bright with a yellow aura.)
ETERNAL SAILOR VENUS
Because I believe in my true dream Guardian Venus, give me the power!
(The energy attacks GALL GAFFE.)
GALL GAFFE
Granny Eternal Sailor Venus isn't fair to me!
GALL GAFFE
Justice!
(ETERNAL SAILOR VENUS transforms back into SAILOR VENUS. SAILOR VENUS picks up Artemis.)
SAILOR VENUS
Was that really you, Artemis?
(ARTEMIS simply smiles.)
(ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON seems to be grumbling.)
(SAILOR VENUS walks off with ARTEMIS. An image of a laughing PRINCESS VENUS is overlaid in the background.)
(ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON changes back into SMALL LADY and runs after SAILOR VENUS.)
SMALL LADY
I can't believe you are a Princess too. I should report you.
SAILOR VENUS
You were spying on me. I was just getting Luna a present.
(SMALL LADY smirks as she holds up the magazine with the top 20 bishounen cashiers.)
SMALL LADY
You won't tell I won't tell, Let's see those bishounen together!
SAILOR VENUS
(SWEATDROPPING): OK.. but I promised Artemis that we'd get Luna a present...
(DIANA is stumbling far behind.)
DIANA
Wait for me!
(Freeze shot)
(FADE OUT)
Ending song with credits: Moon Mystery
On the next Bishoujo Senshi Sailor Chibimoon sequence:
(SAILOR MARS is sitting in front of a fire mediating inside the palace.)
SAILOR MARS
I need to be alone for today.
SMALL LADY
Why?
SAILOR MARS
It's the anniversary of Oujo-san's death. It's the day lost all my dreams.
SMALL LADY
Lost your dreams? You should find them again! I'll protect you until you do!
(Title screen)
SMALL LADY
Sailor Chibimoon Newmoon: Mars's starseed transforms! The Princess of War appears.
SMALL LADY
Tsuki wa Ai no message. (The moonlight carries the message of love.)
(A picture of two twins with black hair in tightly fitted suits floating in the air.)
(Ending screen with manga-ka and the companies involved)
(FADE OUT)
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Yoon Mi: Let's cut to the chase and just give the Author's notes.
Hitsuji: *crying loudly* I want to discuss the episode!
Yoon Mi: What is there to discuss? Sailor Venus wanted to see some bishounen [Pretty boys/ cute boys] and then Eternal Sailor Chibimoon tried to rescue her, but Eternal Sailor Chibimoon was rescued instead!
Hitsuji: Oh.
Yoon Mi: Now read the Author's notes.
Author's notes for this particular episode:
- Pro Sailor Chibimoon advocates will most likely object to my using Sailor Venus to take over the show and vanquish evil, thus making Eternal Sailor Chibimoon basically worthless. This is sort of a bad joke as it were. Bear with it. It's going to continue for a few more episodes.
- I honestly don't like this episode as much out of the set of 4. Sailor Mars's is about the best it could be. I find this episode a bit choppy. I'm sorry.. but I edited the thing 4 times to get it to work at all.
- Guardian Venus's voice should be a quieter and smaller version of Sailor Venus's voice. I have enough faith to know that Fukami Rica can do this. Watch out for the notes on the dubbed version though! *grins evilly*
- This fan fiction belongs to Hitsuji and Yoon Mi. All original ideas and characters belong to us. (They are also my characters that I invented so they can not be taken either, and yes they are fictional)
- Yoon Mi and Hitsuji are fictional character who belong to me, the original writer. I will not be disclosing my "real name", so don't bother to ask. But if you must, you can call me Akaruimi. I use that for fan fiction and Original Manga.
- Any Comments, critiques, or criticisms can be e-mailed to me. Flame me if you want, but I can flame you back and post it.
Last but not least the usual disclaimer.
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Disclaimer: Bishoujo Senshi Sailormoon (and Sailor Moon), is copyright of Takeuchi Naoko, Nakayoshi, Kodansha Inc., Toei Entertainment, Asahi TV, Bandai, Mixx Entertainment Inc., DiC, Irwin, Pioneer, and Cloverway Inc.. I happen to love Bishoujo Senshi Sailor Moon and in no way want to infringe or unlawfully profit from Sailor Moon. Oh, and Princess Takeuchi Naoko is great! Thank you Takeuchi-sensei for creating Bishoujo Senshi Sailor Moon! Anybody out there have that in Japanese?
Copyright: This is my property and therefore no one may take it in part or whole unless they ask permission or I give it out. All pictures relating to the created senshi are my copyright and my property. You may not take anything associating with this page without expressed permission of the artists or author. The people who the new soldiers are based have the right to use the character based on them as they wish (but need to ask permission for the other soldiers). The only person allowed to ever allowed to plagiarize this fan fiction is Takeuchi Naoko, creator of the wonderful ORIGINAL Sailor Moon. It would be an HONOR is she did.