Title: Bishoujo Senshi Sera Chibimoon
by Akaruimi Ougon
Rated: G
Genre: Romance, Continuation, action, etc. (like the original)
Part: Episode 1
Created: 4/18/00
Updated: 10/4/00
E-mail: kim_yoon_mi@yahoo.com
SERIES: Bishoujo Senshi Sera Chibimoon Newmoon (BSSCMN)
Yoon Mi: We would like to thank the following prereaders:
Any other volunteer prereaders are welcome. (This means you get to
read it before it comes out! ^.~)
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Japanese Episode 9
FADE IN:
N/A RANDOM SCENERY N/A
(Flashes from this episode)
SMALL LADY
I can't help feeling uneasy around Seishin-chan. But, I don't have time
to wonder! The new enemy wants to kill Sailor Vesta. I cannot forgive
them for trying to kill her just as I'm getting to know her! In the
name of the moon I will punish them!
(FADE OUT)
Beginning song: Moon Dream
(Title screen: Seishin-chan's bad day! Dreams of True love.)
SMALL LADY
Seishin-chan's bad day! Dreams of True love.
(FADE OUT)
FADE IN:
INT. MOON CRYSTAL GAUKEN 13:00
(THE STUDENTS are all hanging over their desks in boredom.
MOMOHARA-SENSEI is writing at the black board.)
MOMOHARA-SENSEI
So that is how you conjugate a verb in English.
(SMALL LADY is drawing pictures of ELIOS in her notes. SMALL LADY
sighs.)
(Nobody is looking at MOMOHARA-SENSEI.)
(MOMOHARA-SENSEI turns to face the class, takes out a ruler, and
then hits it hard on her desk until the objects jump. THE CLASS
EXCEPT SEISHIN sit up straight. SEISHIN looks incredibly bored.)
MOMOHARA-SENSEI
I know other teachers let you sleep, but I'm not about to let the
entire class sleep. The next person to fall asleep in my class will run
10 laps around this school repeating this lesson and write an essay
in English about why it is not right to fall asleep in American classes.
Is that clear?
THE CLASS EXCEPT SEISHIN
Yes, sensei.
(MOMOHARA-SENSEI turns back to the blackboard.)
(SEISHIN tears a few pieces of paper and then loads them up into a
straw. SEISHIN aims for the chalkboard.)
MOMOHARA-SENSEI
Now, let's continue with forming the verb "to be."
[Yoon Mi: "To be" would be in English and the rest would be in
Japanese.]
(MOMOHARA-SENSEI writes a "t" and then an "o".)
(SEISHIN hits the x part of the t and the center of the o head on.)
(MOMOHARA-SENSEI ignores those shots and writes a "b" and then an
"e". SEISHIN hits the center of the loops on each of the letters.)
MOMOHARA-SENSEI
(WITHOUT TURNING AROUND): Uchinoh-san will run around 20 laps and
write an essay in English for each of the pieces of paper she hit the
blackboard with.
(SEISHIN folds her arms and leans back in her chair.)
SEISHIN
(MUTTERING): She can't make me do it.
(SMALL LADY looks at SEISHIN in horror.)
MOMOHARA-SENSEI
For the back talk you can stay for detention again and work at my
restaurant cleaning dishes. If you continue this behavior I'll contact
your guardians.
(SEISHIN pops some gum.)
SEISHIN
Don't have any who care.
(THE CLASS watches shocked by SEISHIN'S behavior.)
(SEISHIN shrugs, gets up and then walks to the principal's office.)
GIRL 1
(WHISPERING): Why did Uchinoh-san do that?
GIRL 2
(WHISPERING): She's an orphan. She lives with her Uncle in an
apartment, but he isn't home a lot. At least that's what I heard.
(SMALL LADY hears them.)
(FADE OUT)
FADE IN:
INT. PRINCIPAL'S OFFICE, MOON CRYSTAL GAUKEN 13:15
(The PRINCIPAL KURESUKE is sitting at his desk when the door
opens.)
PRINCIPAL
Uchinoh-san.... why are you here?
SEISHIN
I was being disruptive in Momoharas-sensei's class, so I decided to
leave.
PRINCIPAL
You decided?
(SEISHIN nods and pops another bubble with her gum.)
PRINCIPAL KURESUKE
I know that you enrolled yourself in this school, but you still must
follow the rules. To do this you must follow Momohara-sensei's
instruction.
SEISHIN
Alright. But the only reason I came was because Small Lady and
Diana were here.
(PRINCIPAL KURESUKE nods)
(FADE OUT ON SEISHIN'S EXPRESSION)
FADE IN:
? A DARK PLACE ?
CORALKO
Coral-sama, that was a good distraction last time. We should attack
again and then destroy that new Sailor Soldier. She hasn't reached
her maximum ki level yet.
(CORAL nods blankly.)
CORALKO
Good! You can have the world and the universe, and I'll get my
revenge.
(CORAL smiles emptily and nods.)
(IOLITE and ONYX appear.)
(CORAL looks alert. CORALKO moves the same way that Coral does.)
CORAL
Mama! Papa! Attack the school again and fetch me that girl in the
pool! (POINTS TO AND IMAGE OF SAILOR VESTA AND WHINES): I want
her here now!
(ONYX and IOLITE bow to the floor. ONYX and IOLITE get up and leave.)
CORALKO
Good girl. How much do you want to be a princess?
(The pupil drops out of CORAL'S eye.)
CORAL
Very much.
FADE IN:
EXT. / INT. MOON CRYSTAL GAUKEN N/A
(Camera: 16:00)
(SEISHIN is running around the school with MOMOHARA-SENSEI
watching her and timing her laps.)
MOMOHARA-SENSEI
10 more to go! You're slowing down. Faster! C'mon!
(Camera: 17:00)
(It's the interior of the classroom. How are you doing on the English
Essay? If you make a mistake I'll have to make you rewrite it.)
(SEISHIN grimances, but doesn't complain.)
(The paper shows some English plural mistakes and some mistakes
on the verb "to be.")
(Camera: 20:00)
(It's inside of a chinese restaurant.)
MOMOHARA-SENSEI
You're lucky it's not that busy tonight, you would have a lot more
dishes to do if it was. Just don't break any of the dishes and you
should do fine.
(SEISHIN shifts her feet, but refuses to complain.)
(Camera: 21:00)
(SEISHIN finishes the last dish, tired.)
(MOMOHARA-SENSEI smiles.)
MOMOHARA-SENSEI
Are you sure you don't want to take a break? You haven't had a
break since the start of detention. I'll get the chef to make
something for you.
SEISHIN
I'm not tired. Is detention over?
MOMOHARA-SENSEI
(nodding): Yes, at least let me take you home.
(SEISHIN is reluctant, but nods.)
(Commercial Break)
FADE IN:
INT. / EXT. ROAD IN MOMOHARA'S CAR 21:00
MOMOHARA-SENSEI
I don't want to be so strict, but sometimes I think my students need
the discipline more than I do.
SEISHIN
You don't have to explain. I've been kicked out 4 times. I won't be
surprised if I am again.
MOMOHARA-SENSEI
Why do you say that? Don't you want to stay? Small Lady seems to
be nice to you. Aren't you friends?
SEISHIN
What gave you that impression? No, I'm staying at this school
because I have a destiny to fulfill.
MOMOHARA-SENSEI
A destiny? Never mind... I remember from my childhood in the 20th
Century a special friend like Small Lady. She had a warm and patient
heart. I missed her after she had to go back home.
SEISHIN
You're implying I should be friends with the pink odango-atama?
MOMOHARA-SENSEI
It would do you both good. (ABSENTLY): She's so much like Chibiusa...
(MOMOHARA-SENSEI pauses smiling.)
SEISHIN
I don't think she likes me. She isn't the type. I'd cause her more
trouble than good.
(MOMOHARA-SENSEI laughs.)
MOMOHARA-SENSEI
(SMILING): No offense, but she and her cousin Usagi used to fight a
lot. Chibiusa and Usagi-tachi used to have fun even though you
wouldn't think they would be in the same group.
[Yoon Mi: Usagi-tachi: Usagi and the others, Usagi's group. roughly.]
(MOMOHARA-SENSEI stops in front of a large apartment building.)
MOMOHARA-SENSEI
This is the place you told me about?
SEISHIN
Yes. Thank you for the ride Teacher.
[Yoon Mi: I know it doesn't quite sound right, but since they are
conversing in Japanese it would be sensei... which would fit according
to the connotations.)
MOMOHARA-SENSEI
No, thank you for listening. You will at least consider my advice?
SEISHIN
(SHRUGGING): Sure.
(MOMOHARA-SENSEI leaves.)
(ONYX AND IOLITE show up.)
ONYX
I have to get my revenge on that girl that trapped me! Now where is
she?
IOLITE
I haven't been able to find out who she is.
ONYX
Don't you have a scheme?
(SEISHIN hears them. SEISHIN transforms.)
SEISHIN
Vesta Crystal Power, Make up!
(Sailor Vesta poses and then smiles lopsided.)
SAILOR VESTA
Lash Burn!
(ONYX screams as the whip wraps around her and IOLITE.)
ONYX
Don't you Sailor Twurps say your speech (EMPHASIS): before you
attack?
SAILOR VESTA
Oh? You want a speech? OK, let's see.
(ONYX grimances and struggles.)
SAILOR VESTA
(STILL HOLDING A WHIP): You interrupted my return from a bad day! I
should reward you if I was not so tired!... wait, let me try that again.
(SMILES WIDER)
(ONYX kicks in the air.)
SAILOR VESTA
You are taking up air with your breathing and adding to my bad day! I
will never forgive you! I am the pretty sailor-suited soldier for
flames, Sailor Vesta! In the name of the Asteroid Vesta, I will
chastise you!
IOLITE
But I didn't even create a gall.
(SAILOR VESTA shrugs at IOLITE.)
SAILOR VESTA
You never come up with anything interesting or new for the reports I
have. A monkey was already used when Sailor Chibimoon was fighting
the Dead Moon Circus.
(SAILOR VESTA lets IOLITE go.)
SAILOR VESTA
(BORED): Create some thing new!
IOLITE
Gall Puzzle Cube come out!
SAILOR VESTA
(ANGRY): I didn't mean like that!
(A shadow appears in the shape of ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON)
ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON
You are plaguing my friend with impossible puzzles! I will not forgive
you!
(ONYX faints and disappears from SAILOR VESTA's whip)
ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON
(SWEATDROPPING): I'm the pretty Sailor Suited Soldier for Love and
Justice, Sailor Chibimoon!
(IOLITE disappears)
ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON
In the name of the Moon I will punish you. (ANGRILY): No one stays for
my speeches anymore!
GALL RUBIK'S CUBE
They are boring! Now solve this puzzle!
ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON
Me? I'm no good with puzzles like that.
SAILOR VESTA
Just destroy it!
ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON
Pink Honeymoon-- Uhh- da--
(GALL RUBIK'S CUBE moves)
GALL RUBIK'S CUBE
No cheating!
SAILOR VESTA
Lash Burn!
ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON
Pink Honeymoon Thearpy Kiss!
GALL RUBIK'S CUBE
Cheaters!
GALL RUBIK'S CUBE
Justice!
ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON
That was good work! Are you OK?
SAILOR VESTA
(ANGRY): Why did you follow me?
ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON
I was worried about you.
(SAILOR VESTA'S flashback)
MOMOHARA-SENSEI
Small Lady seems to be nice to you. Aren't you friends?
SEISHIN
You're implying I should be friends with the pink odango-atama?
MOMOHARA-SENSEI
It would do you both good. She's so much like Chibiusa...
MOMOHARA-SENSEI
You will at least consider my advice?
(End of SAILOR VESTA flashback)
SAILOR VESTA
Sorry, yes, I'm fine. Would you like to see my apartment?
ETERNAL SAILOR CHIBIMOON
(SMILING): Yes! I would like that very much!
(FADE OUT)
FADE IN:
INT. SEISHIN'S APARTMENT 22:30
(SMALL LADY yawns as she walks in. SMALL LADY looks around
SEISHIN'S APARTMENT.)
SEISHIN
You can stay over if you'd like. Just don't mess anything up. There is
a phone in the kitchen.
(SMALL LADY looks at the Moon outside.)
(Moon Dream plays slowly and softly in the background.)
SMALL LADY
(DAYDREAMING): When I look at a moon like that I can't help thinking
about Elios.
SEISHIN
Elios? (THINKING): That sounds familiar.
(SMALL LADY begins to explain)
SEISHIN
(THINKING): Maybe this wasn't such a bad day afterall.
SMALL LADY
Don't you ever dream of true love?
(SMALL LADY smiles and slowly SEISHIN smiles too.)
FADE IN:
Ending song with credits: Moon Mystery
On the next Bishoujo Senshi Sailor Chibimoon sequence:
(Title screen)
SMALL LADY
Oh! There you are! Shush! Seishin-chan is studying with Sailor Mars!
She wants to know the ways of a miko! She's been calling Mars,
sensei!
SMALL LADY
Eh? What is she leaning from Mars-sama? I don't know, but I'm going
to find out! Maybe how to use Akurou Taisan! I want to know the
secrets of miko too! So.. (WHISPERING): We'll spy on them.
SEISHIN
(ANGRY): Don't you dare snoop on me! This is personal.
SMALL LADY
oh- da-- gotta run!
SMALL LADY
Sailor Chibimoon Newmoon: Mars-sensei is Seishin's model.
SMALL LADY
Tsuki wa Ai no message. (The moonlight carries the message of
love.)
(Ending screen with manga-ka and the companies involved)
(FADE OUT)
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Yoon Mi: To set the record straight, I did not pick that Gall. Hitsuji
did.
Hitsuji: I thought it was cute! Didn't anyone else think it was cute?
Yoon Mi: But it didn't attack anything!
Hitsuji: So! I don't care! It was cute!
Yoon Mi: Whatever. Anyway I hope everyone liked this one. Though it
doesn't tie into the main plot line.
Hitsuji: But it was cute! ^_^ and it developed Seishin's personality.
Yoon Mi: Are you sure she would be this way?
Hitsuji: Seishin was rein- *gets her mouth covered*
Yoon Mi: Read the Author's notes! It has how to slve a Rubik's cube,
plus some additional plot information.
Author's notes for this particular episode:
- OK.. now for a tid bit! Don't you love these tid bits? Anyway, here is
how to solve a Rubik's cube, since today's episode was about a
Rubik's cube. ^_^
http://www.unc.edu/~monroem/rubik.html
Also the official website: http://www.rubiks.com/
If you want a shot at the cube:
http://www.rubiks.com/cubeonline.html
- I should also note that if Toei (or in my scenario Keikaku) was going
to do this they would have to ask the permission of Androsoft.
- Seishin I made a rebel because she seemed to be the type and it is
a possible way for her to develop. However, she is also preceived as
a kind of character that would easily get angry. I tried to tone this
down a little in favor of the rebel look. I am not categorizing her as a
yenta though. That is going to be Seijitsu, or Juno. ^_^ I hope this is
OK with the readers.
- This episode was mainly for the purpose of developing the
character, it doesn't tie into the main plot. In the NA version I
decided to cut it. ^_^ (Sorta like the Sailor V episode)
- Also a hint.. keep an eye on Coral and Coralko's behavior! ^_^
- I also know that the dream of true love didn't quite pan out.. I was
planning to, but then I wanted to show detention, so I decided to lean
towards the bad day theme rather than the Elios theme.
Last but not least the usual disclaimer.
kim_yoon_mi@yahoo.com
Disclaimer: Bishoujo Senshi Sailormoon (and Sailor Moon), is
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Entertainment, Asahi TV, Bandai, Mixx Entertainment Inc., DiC,
Irwin, Pioneer, and Cloverway Inc.. I happen to love Bishoujo Senshi
Sailor Moon and in no way want to infringe or unlawfully profit from
Sailor Moon. Oh, and Princess Takeuchi Naoko is great! Thank you
Takeuchi-sensei for creating Bishoujo Senshi Sailor Moon! Anybody
out there have that in Japanese?
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