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Each week, HAVN will post a photo on this page to solicit critics from our
members, Please post only
constructive messages. Send your photo to the Webmaster
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title, brief description and other technical information.
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Đạo
và Đời
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Photo taken at Vietnam early summer
Nikon F100
| Name : Hien
Dang |
| Comment : Very
nice photo. The only comment I have is to separate the monk from the
mannequin. The monk would be placed in the dark area, before the
mannequin to give more balance to the composition. Of course, it
depends on the time the photo was taken since this |
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Art de triompbe |
Photo taken in Paris last summer on moonless night
Pentax PZ1 35mm
| Name : Duc
Pho |
| Comment : Amazing
colors! No critiques from me, only questions. How do you get the
blue color like that, how about details like speed and aperture?
Author : Dang
Hien
Ảnh Arc de Triomphe tôi
chup ở Paris ờ Vào tháng 5-2000. Ảnh chụp lúc 9:00 giờ
tối, ǵơ Paris, với máy 35mm Pentax PZ1, ống kính zoom
28-105mm, tiêu cự 35mm, khẩu độ 8, và tốc độ B lối
10 giây, phim Fuji Super HQ 100 ISO.
Tôi chup 8 exposures, v́ nghĩ rằng nếu chỉ
chụp 1 hay 2 exposures mà bị hỏng, th́ phải cho vài năm
nữa có lẽ mới trở lại Paris để chụp và chưa
chắc khi đó Arc này có đèn chiếu sáng hay không. Sau đó
tôi cho vào Photoshop 6, làm special effect Find Edges để Arc
trông như có đèn neon viên quanh.
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Untitled. |
Photo taken around 2:00PM, on a cloudy day, Caddo lake. the rental canoes were
docked on the piers as the flood water was rising, and the rental office was
closed.
Pentax 645n with 80-160mm lens set at auto on Fuji 100 film.
First suggestion: Have the photo reproduced next to
this Comment space so that when commenting on the photo, the viewer can
see the photo in its full details right there, and do not have to go back
to the previous page to have a second look at the photo.
| Name :
Cookie Nguyen |
| Comment Suggest
title to be: "Storm is coming" |
| Nice
composition.Artist captured great colors and details in the
water.Picture reveals fear of something about to happen:storm |
| Comparision
corner: Naughty kids bunched together wondering about for the
punishments of their parents
I made some critiques on the first photo (The
Boats on Caddo Lake)in our Club's website but they are truncated and
only the "First Suggestion" remains. Since there is no
more Comment Page for that photo, I would like to suggest one more
thing here: the title of the photo. Since the boats were in disorder
and some of them were almost up side down, I prefer the title
"After the Storm' or "Storm has come". Sorry Cookie
for contradicting you, and don't get mad at me please
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