A Fisher Out of Water

Linnuial

Just over six feet in height, this young male elf combines the natural grace of his race with the rugged practicality required of a warrior. Pale skin, tinted with the hues of moonlight, contrasts sharply with his dark gray eyes; and a short mass of unkempt sandy blonde hair sits atop his head, wispy bangs hanging over the bridge of his angular nose. His eyebrows, while thin and graceful, bow always downward with focused attention, and his small mouth remains flattened and serious. Though tall like the rest of his kind and more slender than most men, he is still powerfully built, his upper half lithe and wiry. His legs are equally athletic, and he almost always seems to be resting on the balls of his feet, his knees bent in anticipation of threat.

He is dressed simply enough in a charcoal gray tunic, the bottom half extending halfway down his thigh below the leather belt cinched around his waist. The top few buttons are left open, revealing a white undershirt, whose long sleeves stretch all the way down to his wrists. A small hood rests behind his neck, some of his wild hair tucked into it. White breeches matching the undershirt cling to his legs, hinting at compact, subtle musculature beneath. They disappear into thick boots made from a tough hide that are obviously meant for traversing rough terrain. The boots are soft, but somehow Linnuial's feet, which are larger than those of most elves, make quite a bit of noise in them as he walks. When appropriate, Linnuial usually wears a strap across his shoulder, from which his weapons hang against his back.

Amarelei

This young elf maiden projects the very spirit of Yavanna both through her countenance and her demeanor. Her skin, though fair as that of any elleth, almost seems to give off a glow from within. A delicate nose graces the middle of her radiant face, just above full, soft lips, red in color as if stained by the juice of fresh cherries. Her inquisitive eyes mirror the last green shade of the leaves before autumn plucks them from the trees: a vibrant, yet faded hazel green, rimmed in a darker jade hue and flecked with gold. Falling down her back is a thick mane of rich earthen-brown hair, which barely allows the very tips of her pointed ears to peek through its full waves. Today it is swept back into a long, loose braid, tumbling down her back except for a few loose locks that frame her delicate face.

Her slender frame is hugged by leather and linen of the palest grays and greens. The sleeves of a soft white undershirt cover her arms to her wrists. Over this a pale green hooded tunic clothes her to just above mid-thigh, pulled close to her figure by leather laces that run from under her left arm down to her hip. Her legs are clad in the softest gray sueded leather, clinging closely enough to her skin to leave little doubt of her femininity, but not so close as to restrict her movement. Sturdy gray boots rise to her knees: though their soles show signs of wear, they are almost always clean.

A thin leather belt hangs low on the Lhimbadhril's hips. Tucked into it is a short, functional dagger, its handle etched with a floral pattern of marvelous detail. Next to it on the belt hangs a short length of twine. Strapped to her back is a light spear, not the sort intended for use in battle. Its length is crafted largely of wood pale in color, the metal point forged by a skilled elven artisan.


The pale golden light of the morning sun bathes the training ground in a peaceful glow. Very few sounds permeate the inherent quiet, save for the faraway whisper of drying leaves as the coming winter's icy breath winds through the trees surrounding the open lawn. From the southern sector of the grounds, a shadow is cast on the paling green of the grass; the slender form of an elleth silhouetted against the last rays of the sunrise. The figure remains still, almost statuesque, until a faint *twang* is heard, followed by a few grumbled words. Only now does the shadow animate, shoulders drooping and arms falling to her side, bow in one hand.

Unusually stealthy steps have carried Linnuial to a few yards behind Amarelei, leaving it a mystery as to how long he's been watching her practice. Taking a step forward now, his foot displaces the grass with a soft sound, and he clears his throat softly. "Good morning," he says warmly.

With motions unpracticed, yet far from imprecise, Amarelei pulls a second arrow from the quiver at her back and resumes her stance. The faint sigh of yew wood now takes to the air as she places her arrow to the bowstring, pulling it slowly back between nimble fingers. Her gilded green eyes narrow with the magnitude of her focus as she stares down the shaft of this arrow, concentrating. Her target appears to be a large bale of meadow grass, to which a roughly painted burlap bull’s-eye has been strapped. One silver arrow protrudes from the upper right corner of the target, and the ground to the right of the bale is also littered with similar arrows, all hers. From thirty paces away, she takes careful aim....only to lose grip on her bowstring as she is startled by a greeting. The arrow sails well to the right and above the target, and has yet to find a resting place as the elleth turns to behold Linnuial. "And to you, Linnuial," she mutters, surprise and sheepishness vying for prominence in her eyes.

Linnuial winces as his voice causes Amarelei's hand to slip, and a quick hand rises to cover his mouth. Wide eyes focus past Amarelei, following her wayward arrow until it strikes the earth several meters wide of the target. "I'm sorry!" he mumbles through his fingers, though now his eyes sparkle with amusement. "Though to be so easily startled, I fear you were more tense than even the string of your bow." Slow, deliberate steps take him closer to her side, though he leaves her plenty of room to shoot still. "You give too much attention to the shot, and not enough to the world around you. What if I were an orc?" Out of context, his question might seem quite silly, but there is genuine concern in his tone.

A nervous chuckle slips past the elleth's lips, a subtle flush creeping into her fair cheeks all the while. "'Twas with luck that even -one- of my arrows found its mark!" Her shoulders rise in a bashful shrug, an awkward smile now playing across her lips as she nods her chin toward the lone silver arrow sticking out of the meadow grass bale. "Although my hands know well the soils of the earth, and my eyes every path through forest and field....the finer particularities of archery elude them both to this day," she concedes, notes of both self-deprecation and playful mirth hinted in her smooth alto.

Drawn by Amarelei's smile, the young Thandir continues to draw closer, not conscious of his approach until he stands but a few feet away. "Your technique is sound, but you move with too much intent. Let there be no border between your motion and that of your bow. You must be one." Abruptly, he halts his speech, pressing his lips together. "I am not so skilled as a teacher as the Hirvaethor Telelas, but I would be happy to pass on what I know...?"

The tide of Amarelei's laughter flows more freely now, though still it retains a calmness about the way it ebbs and flows. "It would be no less of an honor, for your skill far exceeds mine own!" At the close of her sentiment, shy embarrassment finds its way into her manner once more. "Are you sure you are willing to take on a pupil as unseasoned as I?" Her bow hangs loosely within the grasp of her left hand, though the fingers of her right now sweep absent-mindedly over the polished wood and leather grip.

Linnuial's brow furrows slightly, his eyes flashing confusion at Amarelei's question. "Of course I am," he replies, his tone as though the answer should be obvious. "Nor would I call you unseasoned. I ... was very impressed by your bravery and skill during the quest to recover Sarinar. Already your aim is sharp, you need only refine your technique through practice... and I would prefer that practice be here, with me, rather than in danger on the field." His lips curve into a soft and genuine smile as his gaze remains briefly on the Lhimbadhril, but a moment later he is readying Brantoril. "Let us shoot together. By simply watching me, you may learn much that I have from teachers both here and in the Golden Wood."

With little more than a deliberate nod of acknowledgement, the intensity in Amarelei's demeanor surfaces anew. From the moment Linnuial draws forth his longbow, the elleth observes every nuance of his movement, her focus trained mainly on the grip of his hand on Brantoril, as well as the angles formed as he falls into his stance. A slender hand drifts to her face, brushing away a few locks sprung loose from her braid, then reaching to the quiver at her back.

Linnuial's first move is to space his feet wide apart, planting them firmly in the ground and perpendicular to his target line. His left arm locks forward, the muscles tensing beneath his white undershirt as he tilts Brantoril thirty degrees toward him. "Even before an arrow is nocked, you should aim with your bow... especially in times when a quick volley of fire is needed," he says quietly, his right arm bending back over his shoulder, his fingers seizing an arrow without wasted motion. Nocking it, he pauses, eyes glancing over his outstretched left arm at Amarelei. A nervous and self-conscious smile forms on his lips, but fortunately they are hidden behind his shoulder. "Your left arm should not move as you pull the arrow back. Let it and the shaft be one line, all the way to the target." He pulls the arrow back, Brantoril letting out a long groan as he tests its limits. Two fingers pinch the shaft of the arrow, not yet releasing, as Linnuial awaits any questions.

Just as the edhel readies his shot, so does Amarelei strive to imitate each movement. The degree of her concentration is plainly evidenced by the way she now chews on the soft fullness of her lower lip. Though her own bow is two handspans shorter than Linnuial's, her stature is also smaller. Thus with shorter arms and a narrower stance the elleth mirrors his position--with movements slightly slower and more contrived, for she is learning.

"Like this?" she calls over the arm that now draws back her bowstring, her voice lilting in her inquiry. Despite all of the Lhimbadhril's well-placed focus and strength, her shift in attention from the task at hand to Linnuial now leaves room for error; her left arm wobbles a bit at the elbow. She hurries to correct this obvious misstep as "Your left arm should not move" echoes in her ears. A hot flush now creeps to the tips of her pointed Elven ears as she casts a sidelong glance to the Thandir, perhaps an attempt to assess whether or not he had noticed.

Linnuial's sharp eyes focus on the wobbling immediately, but he lifts his chin above his shoulder and smiles nonetheless. "Yes, like that." Turning his head back toward the target, he closes one eye and sights the other along the line formed by the shaft and his left arm. "Now I shall fire," he says quietly. Muscles that already seemed tense define themselves even further through his clothing, his legs and arms all preparing for the recoil of the bow. Then, without warning, his fingers slip from the shaft. Brantoril's tips spring forward, launching the barb at the target with a straight jerk. Yet Linnuial's strength overpowers the reaction, and his aim is unhindered. The arrow flies true, landing just on the outside of the bullseye. A soft sigh of relief escapes the Thandir's lips.

The young forester follows the arrow's shallow arc through the air, the hazel green irises of her eyes flashing with hues borrowed from the afternoon sun as the arrowhead pierces burlap and meadow grass. Resting there for a few heartbeats, her gaze then refocuses to allow the length of her own arrow into her field of vision. Amarelei's chest rises and falls with a barely audible breath of preparation before she too looses her arrow upon the breeze. Her own strength, however, is decidedly lesser than Linnuial's. Thus as the tension imparted upon her bow is released, the force as it snaps back disrupts the rigidity she so strived to maintain throughout her left arm. Again she falters, sending yet another arrow into the far right side of the bale.

As the fate of her shot is now decided, Amarelei's nose wrinkles in apparent distaste. "Perhaps I took not enough time in aiming...?" she mumbles, a subtle line furrowing across her fair brow.

Linnuial's eyes followed not Amarelei's arrow, but instead remained on the Lhimbadhril as she shot. "It takes but a moment to line your arrow and arm with the target," he replies, slinging Brantoril over his shoulder and stepping over toward her. "The challenge is holding your line even as you shoot. Just as the arrow wishes to fly toward the target, the bow wishes to leap from your hands. You must control this force and keep the bow steady." He pauses then, hands moving in vain gestures as he tries to find the words for his instruction. "You must tense against the bow, yet also absorb its defiance in your muscles." He frowns. "It is difficult to explain."

Amarelei sets her jaw with renewed determination, though faint confusion also lines her face. With very little hesitation, yet undeniable uncertainty, the maiden swings her bow back into position, resquaring her frame to a flexible sturdiness. Fitting the notch of yet another arrow to her bowstring, she squints down the silver shaft to the center of the target.

Once more her bowstring is drawn back to her right shoulder; though rather than letting it slip hastily past her fingertips, the elleth's pinch endures as she makes several subtle adjustments in her posture. Subtly twisting an arm here, resetting her shoulders there, until finally, she appears satisfied. Yet this barb takes not well to the air, for her attempt to prevent the bow from jerking up and to the right is undone by overcompensation. The silver arrow spirals fast and low, lodging into the rain-dampened ground before even breaking the plane of the target.

"My apologies, Amarelei," he says, eyes falling to the ground where the arrow fell short. "Your shots found more success before you endured my counsel." Turning once again to her, he says, "Yet you have showed much strength in controlling your bow like that." Again he furrows his brow in thought, but in a sudden moment of clarity he says, "This time, keep your arm firm to maintain the aim, but let your knees flex to absorb the shock." He nods with certainty, smiling brightly.

Once more Amarelei lifts her frame per the edhel's recommendation, otherwise following much the same steps in firing this shot. Perhaps some balance now has been found, for though her release remains somewhat tentative, this arrow speeds a straight course to the target. With a solid *thwock*, it lodges soundly in the meadow grass bale--nowhere near a bullseye, yet well within the third ring, and now more toward the middle of the target rather than skewed off to the right. The distant shadow of a modest smile blooms upon her lips, though all too soon it withers like the blossoms of the gardens in this fading season, hidden in favor of attentiveness as she awaits further advice. "Ah, you apologize to soon, Linnuial!" Though even before these words spill past her lips, the young maiden's smile is unmasked anew. "It seems your teaching is due more credit than you hath given it thus far. For if nothing else, my arrows now strike more towards the target's center."

Linnuial smiles broadly at Amarelei's success, and he bows his head to her. "I am honored to have had some part in your skill, for it is quickly growing." Taking a moment to fasten Brantoril back onto its harness on his shoulder strap, the Thandir lets settle a moment's silence between his praise and his next, more serious urging. "Yet, however much your bravery and talent impress me, I implore you to seek no strife in which to test your aim." His eyes settle on the elleth for a moment, but for fear of sombering the mood too greatly, he quickly smiles and looks to the ground. "After all, if sharpshooting ellith such as you fight our battles, how will I ever make Hirvaethor?"

Both solemn resolve and kind reassurance are evidenced now in the elleth's aspect. Her smile now tempers, wide green eyes likewise softening. "Great honor shall be yours one day, Linnuial. In battle your skill and valor lies, whereas mine shall belong to the forest and its denizens for the rest of my days." This sentiment spoken, Amarelei now pauses to replace her bow at her back, her long earthen-brown braid cascading forward over linen-clad shoulders. "And that which holds captive my spirit now calls me forth into its halls...it is with regret that I now leave you here to your practicing. Yet I hope in my words you will find some reassurance." Gentle and flowing is the melody of her voice, not lost to the winds as she turns to depart, calling once more over her shoulder. "Namarie, and thank you."

As Amarelei speaks, Linnuial's eyes rise to meet hers, and a look of growing anticipation forms on his face. Yet, even though whatever words he might expect from her do not come now, he still flashes her a relieved, albeit soft smile. "Go to your woods, for I am sure they miss your company. Namarie, Amarelei."


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