Erin, my partner believes that passing a federal law banning animals from performing in circuses is a "colossal demand." I think that it could work if we had more backing from the government on this issue. I do agree that it is going to take a lot of support and effort, but it is not an unthinkable task.

    "Would people really get excited to go see a circus without the animals? I'm not sure. Sure now and then it's fun to see human stunts on the trapeze but when it comes down to it, it's all about the animal,"  Erin said. The problem with this statement is that it is an opinion with no basis. True, animals have been performing at circuses for a long time, but can't tradition be broken? Animal-free circuses make a lot of money on their trapeze acts and people all across the world go to see them perform. I believe this an unfair statement, and therefore, can not apply it to my Website.

    Erin pointed out that I  exaggerated that, "Animals are abused everyday,"  I agree, this is a slightly exaggerated statement, I corrected it to say "many animals are abused everyday." I believe my statement is stronger and more credible now.  She also believes that the government is doing all that it can to protect circus animals. How does she know what the government is doing? Even though the government has laws protecting animals doesn't mean they are inforced. The main idea of my Website is to show the audience what the government is not inforcing.  This can be shown, by allowing animals to be used and abused in circuses, which are supposed to be regulated by the government.

    Professor Feller suggested that my Webpage was "highly emotional, even with multiple exclamation points..." I edited the site, removing all of the exclamation points and rewrote my first page to make it accessible for anybody to use. I toned it down, trying to appeal to both sides. I also mentioned that audience members should support the ban on circus animals, by contacting their local legislative body and to lobby for the ethical treatment of animals.