*Disclaimer*
Originally written for a year 9 English assignment, then submitted for a writing competition. Deals with werewolves and fantasy.



Hour Before Dawn

Matthew
The teacher drones. We’re to write a story from personal experience. The class is asleep; it’s too hot. Lilith, the fourteen-year-old next to me, leans over and whispers, “So, what’re you going to write about, Matthew?”
The teacher seated us in boy-girl formation – “So he can learn our names.”
Lilith whispers again, as Mr. Dubhson looks at us. “Lilith, we know you like Matthew, but can you leave him alone now?”
The class laughs. Lilith blushes and looks down while I grin lewdly. I was lucky when Dubhson arranged us in these ‘permanent’ seats.
Finally, we start writing. ‘A true life-story? Alright. But no-one will believe.’

‘[Foreword]
Humankind disbelieves things they cannot accept or explain logically. They label a true vision ‘dream’; genuine event ‘legend’. This is my true life story. Enjoy.’

Surely, werewolves are only superstitions?

‘[Hour before Dawn]
A nine-year-old flees. Above him, the sky is a swathe of darkness; the huge moon glows orange-red. He is Malin.’

I grin. ‘Malin’ means ‘little war-mighty one’.

‘Malin has no idea where he is, nor what he’s running from. Something wants him, and he won’t escape it. It pursues relentlessly. He is tiring quickly, and it knows. Soon, eyes appear, glowing in the strange light – blue, green, yellow, golden brown; even red. Panic. As the eyes close in, he realises that there was a whole pack. An eerie howling begins, and then a pair of red eyes leap. In the queer moonlight, he sees that it is a huge black wolf before it slams into his chest. Terrible agony. Tearing flesh. There is a ferocious snarl as another pair of cyan eyes spring, before the world disappears.’

I can’t banish the memory. Was I mad? What if someone actually believed?

‘Much later, Malin wakes. There is no light. It is the hour before dawn; the darkest hour. Fire burns across his torso. He tries to move, only to find his skin covered with a thin, dry substance that crumbles when he bends. Time passes. When he thinks there is enough light to see, he raises his arm. Torturous flames dance along it, and he sees a layer of reddish-brown, which turns to powder. A hoarse cry releases itself as he realises it is blood.’

I wriggle uncomfortably in my seat. Fire seems to sear across my chest. Blood appears to coat my arms. Sickened, I sprint to the toilets. I throw up.
When the bell rings, I force myself to walk leisurely.

* * *

Lilith
The bus rumbles away steadily. I wonder how Matthew can write so vividly. My mind refuses to leave the introduction alone. What if he was recounting an actual incident?
* * *

Matthew
I doubt.
‘Perhaps I should just write something “normal”.’
‘No way! Remember, ‘the best stories are always based on real experiences?’
‘Yeah, but I can’t say, “Yes sir, it’s based on experience.” He’ll never believe.’
‘You should still finish. Edit later.’
‘I don’t like the way it stirs up memories, though.’
To quiet them, I look up werewolves on the Net. There are several hits. Only the last is useful. Apparently, they’re some really old branch of the Garou, and were called ‘Loup-Garou’; wolves that turned human. Total nonsense, but I still hope it’s true.

The next evening, I shut myself away and lose track of time, only aware that everybody eventually falls asleep. ‘Finally!’ I strip and escape through the window. The landscape is bathed in strange, ghostly moonlight. I step into the silky whiteness.
A wolf’s nose erupts from my face while ears creep up the side of my head. Bones shorten, lengthen, rearrange themselves. Body parts squelch into new positions. A tail sprouts from my spine. I fall onto all fours. My fingers meld into paws, and a wave of dark fur washes over me.
The wolf basks in the simplicity of life all night, hunting and gorging on prey.

* * *
Lilith
‘After a while, Malin realised that it wasn’t all his blood. He could register a dull throbbing all over. Sitting up, he found that his shirt was stuck to his body. He had a deep gash running diagonally down his torso, and smaller scratches on his arms and legs. They seemed to have been caused by claws, but had started to heal. Malin staggered around before he found a stream. It washed off the worst of the blood. The wounds were developing scabs. He was lucky. He’d stumbled into a campsite. The campers called the ambulance, and took him to hospital. However, he was discharged the next day, with no serious injuries.’

“A true story?” I ask. Matthew merely looks at me. His expression says, ‘What do you think?’
“You’re Malin.”

‘That night, Malin couldn’t resist the darkness. It beckoned with fingers of fog. His body ruled his mind, and he slipped outside. The change happened quickly. Where a boy had stood seconds before, a wolf now crouched. The world came alive. The grass teemed with life, the stars shone with a clarity that he’d never noticed. When the stars faded, the wolf ceased roaming, and raced back to the house.
Malin crept inside elatedly. He’d finally met his other self. He’d never felt the emptiness before, but now that it was gone, he could identify it. As he dressed, he pondered about the purity of life; of merely existing.’

I return the story, deciding that I will discover for myself.

* * *
Matthew
The moon is red . The wolf notices and ignores it. But something will happen tonight.
The wolf senses a presence, and slinks over. They are kin. ‘How?’ I join them. One speaks, telepathically. ‘Tonight, we increase our numbers. We hunt humans.’
* * *

Lilith
I sneak outside. The darkness is oppressive.
* * *
Matthew
We see a human in the darkened landscape. I scent her. She’s Lilith. We surround her. She seems unafraid.
A huge wolf tackles her. The others begin howling. Snarling, I leap at the attacker, pushing him off Lilith. He growls back, baring his teeth. I fight. Lilith is hurt, unconscious.
Claws, fangs. Blood. Pain. We are a lethal pair.
Finally, I pin him. ‘I have no wish for your life. Leave!’
He whimpers and flees. The others slink away.
Lilith bleeds. I lick her wounds. They begin to heal. ‘So she believed.’ The moon sets, and I depart. She must find her own way back, or die trying.
* * *

Two young wolves run together. By day, they are Matthew and Lilith; by night, they are one.


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