Author: Robin N (157.198.3.51)
            Date:   08-20-1999 10:36

            Chapter 10 

            The Luzbel is approaching another island—San Cristobal and Fort 
            Tyson—and Juan is seeing them with an admiring Monica. (But it’s not 
            clear what she’s enjoying more, the view or Juan’s company.) 

            “Apoydada en el brazo de Juan, llevada por el, oyendo su voz calida, 
            siente que las horas pasan tan blandamente como la brisa que ahora 
            despeina sus dorados cabellos, tan suavemente como el mar que 
            extiende alla abajo, sobre la playa rubia, su pañuelo de espumas…” 

            They’ve been asked to lunch by the fleet who admire Monica. In 
            particular, Charles Tow, an Englishman, has searched out things to 
            please her. Juan tells her that their life has changed for the 
            better, and she asks him if his (Juan’s) has as well. He tells her, 
            “La mia la primera, desde luego… pero no hables, si es para 
            recordarlo.” He doesn’t want to think of the past right now, just to 
            enjoy the day in San Cristobal. He smiles at her and she can’t 
            respond because her voice is trapped in her throat, looking at him, 
            she feels she’s living a dream. He worries briefly and asks her if 
            she feels bad. 

            “No se como se llama lo que siento, Juan… acaso… acaso estoy cerca 
            de la felicidad.” 

            Juan can hardly believe what he’s hearing; is that strange word 
            right, something they’ve hardly felt in their turbulent life… 
            happiness? He fells as if he’s in a dream too, but if Monica said 
            so, it must be true. Without a word they join hands, their hearts 
            beating in a single rhythm and take the ladder and descend to the 
            launch. 

            Back in Martinique: Renato is now bending the governor’s ear. The 
            governor tells him that his mother wished for him to detain the 
            Luzbel, but he’s concerned about scandal. Renato, however, cares 
            nothing for scandal. The gov wonders at the change in him in the 10 
            days since his wedding: he’s become hard, and fierce. He tells 
            Renato he has no legal reason to detain Juan. Renato tells him that 
            if he makes him return to port, his boat left illegally and he left 
            owing debts and he will have the papers to prove it, plus there is a 
            wounded man who will testify against him. The gov tells him that 
            someone paid Juan’s fines and the charges were dropped against him. 
            Renato tells him that he paid it and now he wants to take away that 
            indemnity. The gov tells him that to do so, in Juan’s absence, is 
            inhuman. Renato doesn’t care; he’s willing to sign anything. Okay, 
            if that’s what you want, the gov tells him, but it won’t be easy. 
            We’ll send out orders to a few islands who’ll cooperate. Do it! 
            orders Renato. 

            The Luzbel continues on it’s Caribbean tour: they’re now approaching 
            Guadelupe and are near Maria Galante. Juan’s at the helm and let’s 
            Monica try steering the boat. He guides her hands and they tremble. 
            Juan smiles strangely. He wonders if Monica thinks he’s avoiding 
            Maria Galante so she can’t see Dr. Faber. She doesn’t think this. He 
            tells her that she can if she wishes, he doesn’t want her to see 
            him. He’s honest about his feelings of antipathy. She reminds him 
            that he did save her life. That’s true, but he did more bad than 
            good, it was his fault that he made his resolution to not set anchor 
            in a French port. He leaves in a dark mood and Monica worries. 
            Segundo notices her expression and questions her. He notes Juan’s 
            mood and tells her that Juan’s afraid to land in French territory 
            because he’s afraid to lose her and he won’t keep her against her 
            will. Monica asks him if he’s the one who advised Juan to flee Maria 
            Galante. He tells her yes. She tells him that she understands that 
            he acted on the behalf of the Luzbel, but that the Dr. wasn’t going 
            to do anything bad, she just asked him to write a letter to her mom 
            telling her she was fine. Does Juan know this? She tells him no, 
            it’s hard to talk to him sometimes. Segundo tells her that he’s a 
            changed man. He tells her that if she still wants to, he’ll get a 
            letter to her mother. He cautions her not to betray Juan’s trust 
            because he was betrayed much as a child, but he’ll put her letter 
            into the mail in Portsmouth tomorrow. 

            Monica goes to the cabin and finds Colibri there. She tells him that 
            she would like to be alone for a little while. She asks for a pen 
            and paper. In her search she comes across her black dress, looks at 
            it recalling the last night she wore it, and puts it back. A tear 
            escapes and Colibri notices it. She tells him that it’s her last 
            tear for Monica de Molnar! 

            Noel and Renato meet. Renato feels smug; he has news that Juan’s in 
            Portsmouth (one of the ports where he can possibly be detained or 
            perhaps in Roseau), but he supposes that Noel sought him out at his 
            mother’s bequest. Noel tells him that he, and everyone else, was 
            concerned by the way he left Campo Real. He wants to talk seriously 
            about what Renato is proposing to do. Renato tells him that the boat 
            will be detained and he will rescue Monica. Noel questions him if 
            it’s true, that he’s revoked his indemnification of Juan and signed 
            an accusation against him. Renato tells him that it was the only 
            course open to him. Noel is confused, “wait a minute, didn’t Juan 
            repay you when he returned from his last voyage? He had the money 
            and was off to do so?” Renato tells him that he can’t prove it. Noel 
            is greatly offended and tells him that it’s an infamy. Renato 
            justifies it by saying that Juan del Diablo has committed worse 
            things in his life. “Don’t you understand? Monica is innocent!” He’s 
            off right now to go to see the governor and tells Noel to leave 
            because it will be useless to try and defend Juan. 

            The governor tries to talk Renato out of this one last time, but to 
            no avail. He plans to go personally with the coastguard to apprehend 
            Juan. 

            Back on the Luzbel… The cargo is stored. Segundo watches Juan go to 
            the cabin door and pause. Juan thinks that perhaps Monica won’t 
            reject him now, things have changed between them, but it’s just a 
            “chispazo de luz entre las sombras,” and he slowly turns his back 
            and looks at the stars and muses, “No! She’s not mine… and she never 
            will be!” Inside the cabin, Monica says, “I am yours, yours 
            forever…” She lets these words of longing escape. She’s been looking 
            at the door, waiting for Juan to walk thru it. She too turns her 
            back to the door, torn with her desires. Looking out the porthole 
            she looks out at the stars and whispers his name uselessly, over and 
            over. “Juan… Juan… If you would love me!” 

            At Campo Real, Noel fills in Sofia with Renato’s plans, that he told 
            Noel that Monica is innocent of everything. This is news to Sofia 
            and she wants to know who spoke to Renato that he would have learned 
            this. Yanina tells her it was Aimee. Sofia wants to talk to her 
            immediately. 

            The Luzbel is now entering the port of Roseau, the capital of 
            Dominica and Segundo calls Monica at Juan’s behest. She looks at 
            herself in the mirror and recalls how Juan first made her look at 
            herself. Yes, she is beautiful, desirable, and she is pleased to 
            think that Juan finds her beautiful, “y siente el anhelo intenso, 
            irresistible, de mirarse en aquellos ojos oscuros y ardientes que 
            son ya como una obsesion sobre su vida, goce y tormento de su alma…” 
            Juan’s already gone ashore though—without waiting for me? Monica 
            wonders—and Segundo tells her that he had to arrange harbor and to 
            find a surprise for her… maybe a prettier dress. 

            Segundo tells her that Juan was in a rare mood last night, like a 
            tiger. He took 20 pounds from the ship’s account and asked Segundo, 
            “Habra en Roseau un anillo de novia? Alcanzaran veinte libras para 
            comprar un anillo de oro fino, con una piedra blanca que brille como 
            el sol?” Segundo told him sure he will, and Juan asked me if his 
            little finger looked small enough, “Sera asi el dedo de Monica?” 
            Monica asks him what he’s telling her, overcome with emotion. 
            Segundo tells her that he’s repeating his conversation, but perhaps 
            he’s talking too much. “Dice (Juan) que se casaron ustedes demasiado 
            de prisa, y que no pudo comprarle el anillo, pero que mas vale 
            hacerlo tarde que no hacerlo nunca. Y yo pienso igual…” 

            Monica is overwhelmed. She feels something too intimate to show in 
            front of a stranger, but her hands grab the railing and her eyes 
            seek out the boat rowing in to shore, carrying Juan. 

            In the store, Juan and Colibri are looking at rings. He’s got to see 
            the port authority, but they’ll return later to pick up the most 
            beautiful ring. Colibri is confuse, he tells him that sometimes he 
            sees Monica cry over the things Juan buys her. Juan says, “Why cry? 
            She has no reason to cry. One time she told me she was happy, that 
            she felt something she could call happiness. She told me herself, 
            quite clearly, and not that many days ago.” Colibri tells him that 
            she cried when she found the black dress, and that they were tears 
            for Monica Molnar, that she threw it back in the chest and cried 
            while she wrote… Juan wants to know what Monica wrote, but Colibri 
            can’t tell him more than it was a letter. Juan is immediately 
            panicked and wants to know where she wrote it. Colibri tells him 
            that Segundo mailed it in Portsmouth, but told him it was a letter 
            he wrote to his sister. Colibri calms him by saying, “Mi amo… mi 
            amo, no se ponga bravo! Yo no se nada… de veras que yo no se nada. 
            Preguntele a ella, patron… seguro que le dice la verdad. El ama es 
            mas buena que el pan.” 

            “Bruscamente se ha detenido Juan… Otra vez aquel chispazo de vida y 
            de esperanza se enciende en su imaginacion exaltada. Si… ella es 
            buena, es sincera, es generosa, es leal… y acaso le ama. Recuerda su 
            mirado, su sonrisa, las palabras en las que su voz ha tembado, su 
            muda emocion ante la belleza del paisaje, el lento renacer a la 
            vida… Poco a poco su amargura repentina se calma. 

            Tal ves tengas razon. No puedo juzgar sin haberle preguntado. Le 
            hablare mas tarde.” 

            Calmer now, Juan and Colibri set off for the port authority where an 
            official detains them. “Are you the captain of the Luzbel?” There he 
            is arrested in the name of France!!! 


      



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