Continuing from Episode 9, we open
on Chad pointing a gun at Vic, with Carter and Harper standing in the alleyway
behind them.
MALCOM (Voice Over)
There are defining moments in
everyones lives when everything seems so clear. For one second. Where you only
have one choice. And you either take the choice, that seems so clear, or you
don't.”
CARTER
CHAD! DON’T!
HARPER
PUT THE GUN DOWN!
VIC
Please Chad. I didn’t kill her…
Chad looks at Vic and pulls the
trigger.
The opening credits roll
‘Chariot’ by Gavin DeGraw plays.
MBN
And Mac The Movieguy Productions
Present
LL COOL J
is
CARTER WINSLOW
CARLA GUGINO
Is
HARPER JORDAN
JULIAN MCMAHON
Is
CHAD COOPER
MEKHI PHIFER
is
MALCOM PALMER
ALLISON MACK
Is
RENEE TAGGERT
And
RICHARD DREYFUSS
is
VIC WARNER
SPARKS
Created By Mac The Movieguy
Written By Mac The Movieguy
Episode 10
Retribution
The scene changes to the house, with
Simon Banks (the screenwriter who owns the house) coming up to the officers.
“I need to speak to whoevers in
charge!” Simon shouts. Malcom catches him as Simon is moving to the house.
MALCOM
Mr. Banks.
“Are you in charge?” Simon asks.
MALCOM
What do you need?
“I want to turn myself in. I killed
my wife. I made the bomb.”
Malcom looks at Renee, who is
standing behind him.
The scene changes back to the alley,
opening on Carter, who looks shocked. Carter gradually walks down the alleyway,
in Chad’s direction. As he walks, we can see Harper behind him, crying. Carter
reaches Chad, who has his gun lowered. Carter looks over at Van, who now lies
at the edge of the alleyway, dead. A passerby walks into view, and quickly runs
away.
CARTER
Give me the gun.
Carter takes the gun from Chad.
Carter walks over to Van’s dead body and reaches behind his shirt, and pulls
out his gun. Carter puts his gun in Vic’s hand, planting the weapon.
CHAD
Carter…
Harper walks over to Chad.
CARTER
I can’t lose two friends.
CHAD
You don’t…
CARTER
Shutup.
CHAD
I’m sorry.
HARPER
He had his gun drawn. Vic. He had the gun pointed at you.
CHAD
What?
HARPER
There’s nothing you could do.
Chad stands there, looking at his
two teammates, who have just covered up his murder.
MALCOM (voice over)
There’s something I’ve learned in my short period of time, here on the squad.
There’s a strong sense of family. A sense that cannot be broken or swayed.
We’re not just Sparks. We’re brothers and sisters. And Carter is our father.
The scene changes to the police
station, a couple of days later. Chad is in a room that looks much like a
trial. Two superior officers, and Carter are seated behind a large desk.
“Officer Cooper. We cannot begin to
understand the gravity of what you are feeling right now. Losing your father,
and then your mother. Finding out that someone who was somewhat of a surrogate
parent, and a confidant, was responsible in part for your mothers murder.
However, your actions in the matter are still questionable. In this squad, your
emotions could cost the team their lives. If you hesitate, even one second,
more good men and women could be lost to you.”
The speaking officer turns to
another officer.
“It is because of these reasons, we
have decided merely to give you a six-month suspension. However, this
suspension will only come if you do not take a six-month leave of your own. We
wish, under this time, that you see a psychiatrist, and come back to the squad
well rested.”
CARTER
Chad. You have to understand. I want you on my team. The LAPD wants you on the
force. We just don’t want you… like this.
CHAD
I understand. And I will take the six month leave of absence.
“Then a suspension will not appear
on your record.”
The scene changes to a funeral, with
Chad seated with a row of his family members, watching a coffin being placed in
the ground. The camera pans across to see Carter, Harper, Malcom, and Renee
walking away from the funeral.
RENEE
Do you think he’ll be alright?
CARTER
He’s got six months to work it out. I’m sure he’ll be OK.
MALCOM
Did you recommend the six months?
CARTER
No, I recommended three.
HARPER
What do we do now?
CARTER
Well, I looked at some of the files for new recruits, and…
HARPER
You can’t be serious.
CARTER
I found two.
The rest of the team groans.
CARTER
They’re not Vic and Chad, but they’re still good candidates.
MALCOM
Well, I guess that means I’m not the new guy anymore.
They get in a car and drive away.
The camera cuts back to Chad as he stands over the open grave and drops a rose
in. He walks away and the screen gradually fades to black as he’s walking.