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The Great Big Adventure

by Melody

Special Mini Chapter- Perfection

The team were sitting down by a beautiful brook. Cool, crystal clear water was streaming out. Carin sat on some rocks, combing her long sienna hair, that was streaked with hues of amber and gold. Her deep chocolate eyes sparkled, which gave her a youthful appearance. So leaned against a tree, thinking, as she twisted her delicate fingers through her ebony hair. So called out to Stacy, whose sleek, straight hair lightly grazed her shoulders. Luyba was looking into the water, peering at her own reflection. She saw long, curly, russet hair flowing behind her. Rosy cheeks colored her face. Paula, with long silky, raven hair, was conversing with Siana, whose honey blonde hair fell down in graceful waves. Siana was very mature, and had curves in all the right places. 

A young man came through, and suddenly stopped in his steps. He saw six gorgeous young women, and was awed by their exquisiteness. The young boy was named Hamien, and was smart and kind and handsome. The six looked at him. "Hello," said Stacy, in a voice as sweet as honey, "Who are you? I'm Stacy. That's Carin, Luyba, Siana, Paula and So."  "I'm Ha- Ham- Hamien." the boy stuttered. "Might I say I appreciate the presence of such lovely ladies."  He went bright red.  "Oh, I'm sorry, Hamien." said Siana. "Yeah," said Luyba. "We know you are madly in love with us.  "Mmm Hmm." said So. "How could you not? In this chapter Melody made us wise, elegant, and generous. But since we are so perfect, we must also go save the world. We know we're going too, because the main characters always do. And some innocent hunk falls in love with us. He can't decide who, so we all end up dumping him. And somehow, they always stay friends. So Carin, would you do the honors?" Carin took a deep breath. "We're sorry. but there are many other roads you can take. Most perfectionists usually come up with some crappy speech which uses wonderful imagery which keeps them on the New York Times Booklist for weeks, but we're keeping it sweet and simple. Go home." And with that, the six sashayed away, because perfect people never walk, they glide. And Hamien just sat there, more sadder, more wiser, thinking, "Go home. Those melodious words will leave their mark on me forever."

Ugghh. How much did that chapter make you puke? Hey, you guys asked fro it. A nice, kind, chapter. So there it was, smothered in butter. Give me your comments.

Cookie: Next mini chapter is: The YomaHomos Holiday Special. It should come out the week of Christmas.