A haiku is a very simple (yet complex),
Japanese poem made up of 17 syllables. It records a 'freeze frame' moment in
time and space. I wrote haiku myself to record a moment in my life, much as a
photographer takes a picture. Some haiku poets work inside and outside of the 17
syllable rule, whereas I always frame haiku to the ancient rule.
Here are some of mine:
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The Sixties - 1968
charlie brown plays ball
hippies gather in frisco
vietnam drags on |
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McMurdo - 1973
penguins on ice-berg
killer whale hunt seal pups
antarctic summer |
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Samurai - 1976
samurai blade moves
katana flashes silver
bushido spirit. |
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Rhodesia - 1979
weaver bird calls near
soft click of a safety catch
african sunrise. |
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Africa - 1980
distant thunder clap
baboon scatter to thorn tree
african sunset |
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Autumn - 1983
a moon full and bright
the cry of wild geese and wings
draws you to my fire. |
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© Mike Subritzky - The Flak Jacket Collection