Silver Moonlight Princess

Oooh, yay. Grammatical errors already, and I haven't even entered the site! Here's what it says: "are only hope is a 14 year old girl and her five friends." If you are in 5th grade or above and don't find anything wrong with the above sentence, please hit yourself in the head. HARD. (In case you're wondering, the sentence should be "Our only hope is a 14 year old girl and her friends.") The fanart is pretty nice though.

Ok, now I've entered. Layout/setup is very nice indeed. I don't like the text following my cursor though. But what is this? More grammatical errors?! "Welcome to this Sailor Moon web Page!! Find out were everything is at site map or just look around."

Let's see if this gets any worse, shall we?

Well, I've quite a few misspellings already in the Senshi Information page. For what very little information she has on these pages, the information is for the most part correct. Now, unbelievable as it may seem, she has even LESS information on her villains page! There are also many misspellings and grammatical errors on the page. Family and friends? Oooh....mixing dub and original information is a no-no. The word "scouts" and Japanese names NEVER belong on the same page.

Moving on...there is abosolutely NOTHING on the "Music and Sounds" page! What a waste of webspace.

The webmistress has a nice collection of webgraphics, and they don't appear to be stolen. ^_^

There isn't much on the fanfiction page, except for one fanfic by the webmistress. The fanart site doesn't fare much better. There is also another link to the *cough* not up fanfiction by the author. Another waste of webspace.

Everything else there seems to be in order. I think if the webmistress took down the pages that don't need to be there, or put something on them, she'd be fine. Also, fix the dub/original info mixup, and get a spellchecker.

Diana's Score: 5.0 -->

Overall Score: 6.2 (provisional)