Daughter of The Moon: http://www.angelfire.com/ga2/daughter
Daughter of the Moon is a Sailor Moon page that does a lot of the standard stuff...but does them with a bit of an artistic flair. Looking over the page, I see profiles, links, credits, etc...all of which most other Sailor Moon pages do, and while the content of some pages may be lacking in places, the graphics work makes up for it. After a while, I found myself not caring what content was on some of the pages...I just wanted to see more graphics. In terms of things the site could do better, well, first, either improve or ditch the Sailor Moon fanart that greets us on the first two pages. While a display of fanart is original, these particular pictures look flat, and that detracts from the rest of the page. In some areas, the content could be better. In the episode list, for instance...why not put in a short synopsis of the episode, or your own opinions on the episode...anything to make it more than a simple text list. The same could be said for the profiles. Anymore nowdays, the profiles used here are old info that almost everyone knows. What gets people to browse the profiles section of a page is something...ANYTHING that is original, such as your own views on the character. I guess what I am saying in a nutshell, is be both original and imaginative, and perhaps spend a bit of time out on the Net and look at other people to see what they are doing. Now, this site's strong point is its graphics. Especially in the profiles. I liked the monograms of the Sailors and the graphics on your "Linking Me" page were very good. There is a lot of potential at this site. It is on it's third incarnation and I believe it will only get better as time goes on. Artemis' Score: 7
The only thing I can say about this page is: "Wow." Her originality shows - and I just love the way she used her fan art to make the layouts. It's very... impressing. Her writing is clear and easy to read, she has a great personality and she's obviously talented in the graphics design field. It almost makes me at loss for words, because this page is one of the best I've seen on the net. Keep up the fantastic work Jewels! :) Luna's Score: 9.9
Diana is taking a short break and will review this page upon her return. ^_^ Diana's Score: N/A Overall Score: 8.5 |
