Focus,
Support and Elaboration
(Six
Traits: Ideas and Content)
Once the writer clearly establishes a focus, or main event, for a
narrative, support and elaboration must extend and develop the ideas presented. Details should be relevant, specific, and sufficient.
The following books are good models for these traits
Author |
Title * Indicates Out of Print |
Summary |
Curriculum |
Character |
Allen, Jeffrey |
Nosey Mrs. Rat |
Mrs. Rat uses all kinds of tactics to get the "scoop" on all of her neighbors. |
Social Studies |
Self-discipline |
Andrews, Jan |
Very First, Last Time |
A young Inuit girl walks alone on the sea floor for the very first last time. |
Social
Studies |
Responsibility |
Bang, Molly |
The Paper Crane |
A mysterious man goes into a restaurant and pays for his dinner with a paper crane that comes to life and dances. |
Social
Studies |
Perseverance |
Buehner, Carolyn |
Fanny’s Dream |
"Cinderella" story:a hard-working farm girl dreams of a better life and finds it for real. |
Social Studies |
Honesty |
Cherry, Lynn |
The Armadillo from Amarillo |
A wandering armadillo explores Texas. |
Social Studies |
Respect |
Cooney, Barbara |
Miss Rumphius |
A little girl grows up and makes the world a better place. |
Social Studies |
Responsibility |
DePaola, Tomie |
Strega Nona |
When Strega Nona leaves him alone with her big pasta pot, Anthony is determined to show the townspeople how it works. |
Cultural group: Italian |
Responsibility |
Fox, Mem |
Wilfred Gordan McDonald Partridge |
A small boy tries to discover the meaning of "memory" so he can restore that of an elderly friend. |
Health |
Compassion |
Hoberman, Mary Ann |
One of Each |
A dog with one each of everything in his house thinks his life is perfection but finds that no one else can enjoy its oneness. He solves the problem by getting doubles and sharing. |
Health |
Fairness |
Hoff, Syd |
Arturo’s Baton |
Famous conductor and his baton make beautiful music. He looses the baton, his manager, servants, dog search. Problem: how to lead the orchestra without the baton. |
Social Studies |
|
Hoff, Syd |
Oliver |
Oliver the elephant is the eleventh elephant and the circus needs only ten. Oliver tries a variety of ways to find a job and home, but ends up with the circus because of his talent. |
Health |
Perseverance |
Hooks, William |
The Three Little Pigs and the Fox |
Three grown pigs leave home with 3 pieces of advice from mom. Appalachian version of classic tale where Hamlet, the youngest pig, rescues 2 greedy brothers from a mean, tricky fox. |
Social Studies |
Responsibility |
Houston, Gloria |
But No Candy* |
While her uncle is off in WW II, Lee watches candy gradually disappear from the family store and realizes her entire world has changed. |
Social Studies |
Patriotism |
Hutchins, H. J. |
Believing Sophie |
A little girl is accused of shoplifting and tries to prove herself innocent. |
Social Studies |
Honesty |
Isaacs, Anne |
Swamp Angel |
Tall tale, female counterpart of Paul Bunyan, an Appalachian tale. |
Social Studies . |
|
James, Simon |
Dear Mr. Blueberry |
A young girl and her teacher correspond about the whale she has discovered in her pond. |
Science |
Loyalty |
Keller, Wallace |
The Wrong Side of the Bed* |
A little boy gets up from the wrong of bed and everything goes topsy-turvy. |
Math: Spatial orientation |
|
Lester, Helen |
Hooway for Wodney Wat |
All his classmates make fun of Rodney because he can't pronounce his name, but it is Rodney's speech impediment that drives away the class bully. |
Health |
Courage |
Lord, John |
The Giant Jam Sandwich |
A village plagued by 4 million wasps makes a giant jam sandwich and traps the hungry insects inside. |
Math: Big numbers |
Perseverance |
Munsch, Robert |
Moira’s Birthday |
Without her parent’s consent Moira invites the whole school to her birthday party. |
Math: Computation |
Fairness |
Nixon, Joan |
If You Were a Writer |
Advice from a mother who is a writer to her child who wants to be a writer too. |
|
Self-discipline |
Pittman, Helena |
A Grain of Rice |
A farmer outwits an Emperor and gets to marry the princess. |
Math:
Factorial numbers |
Perseverance |
Simms, Laura |
Rotten Teeth |
Melissa becomes a first-grade celebrity when she brings a bottle of teeth for show and tell. |
|
|
Slawson, Michele |
Apple Picking Time |
Neighbors spend a fall day picking apples on a small farm. |
Social Studies |
|
Small, David |
Ruby Mae Has Something to Say |
Tongue-tied Ruby Mae fulfills her dream of speaking for world peace at the U. N. when her nephew invents a device to solve her speech problem. |
|
Courage |
Stevens, Janet |
From Pictures to Words: A Book About Making a Book |
Animals in an illustration try to help the author write a book. |
|
|
Tompert, Ann |
Grandfather Tang’s Story |
Grandfather tells stories using tanagrams. |
Math:
Shape |
|
Turner, Patricia |
The War Between the Vowels and the Consonants |
Funny book about letters and which are most important. |
|
Courage |
Wilhelm, Hans |
I’ll Always Love You |
Friendship between a boy and his dog. |
Health |
Responsibility |
Williams, Vera |
A Chair for My Mother |
A mother, daughter, and grandmother save money for a comfortable chair after their furniture is lost in a fire. |
Social
Studies |
Self-discipline |
Yolen, Jane |
All Those Secrets of the World |
When four-year-old Janie’s father goes off to war, the rest of the family moves to the grandparents’ home on the Chesapeake Bay where Janie learns a secret of the world that helps her understand her father’s long absence. |
Social Studies |
Patriotism |
Zalben,
Jane |
Beni’s First
Wedding |
Beni
participates in a Jewish wedding |
Social
Studies |
Compassion |