Here's the revised versions. Sorry if the naming convention seems a little weird (ie. we're on concept 5 now instead of concept 3); this is just so that I don't get confused.

I have tried to do everything you asked, but it would be great if you could read through it again and check for those annoying, niggly little spelling mistakes that somehow make it through to the final product unless you're really careful.

Paul

Concept 5 - Front
(Don't worry about the vertical alignment of text, by the way, this is difficult to do unless I convert the text into curves and shapes (which I will do once we're all happy with the design, but it means that I can't edit the text any more))

Concept 5 - Back

Concept 6 - Front (not too sure about this one)