CROSS MY HEART...

| INTRO | PART 1 | PART 2 | PART 3 | PART 4 | PART 5 | PART 6 |
| PART 7 | PART 8 | PART 9 | PART 10 |



This is one of my Star Wars fan fics. It was written by myself and my brother. If you don't like it, that's your problem, not mine.
I know that it may look long, because there are ten parts, but the first part is only 1, 450 words long. Oh, give me a break, that isn't THAT long!
If you've read it [He he he, here I go, expecting someone to actually COME to this site!] then, please, tell us what you think. Comments - both good and bad - are wanted and welcome. Hell, how are we to get better if we don't know what we're doing wrong?!?
This story is set 7 years prior to "Episode I: The Phantom Menace"

DISCLAIMER:
The Galaxy belongs to George Lucas, some of the planets belong to Jude Watson and Lucas Books/Scholastic. Lucas owns Yoda, too, and anyone else who was used bar the characters that we made up... Gee, that sounds dodgy..
This is a labour of Love and Boredom. There was no money involved, and there would be no point in sueing us cause I think the only thing of any worth that I own is my cat. And he drools.

Wanna know more about the characters?

First things first, the bio's you'll read for the first two characters tell you about them eight years after this story took place.
Vaktar Nohr
Lalia Xan
Gavin Vrlsk
Sergent Mallor
Gordon and Bennet
Master Tommn