| Sailor Moon - Chibi Moon's Fetish by Buni 3/22/02 Note: My reviewing scale has changed. I think it's fairly self-explanatory but if you don't understand, check my Reviewer Profile. It is explained there. Rating: NC-17 Summary: Chibi Moon pleasure herself by the TV - Please R&R! OOC: 10/10 Plot: 0/10 Wrongness: 10/10 Lawsuit would be from: American Humane Society This story is just...wrong...I forced myself to look at it since there hasn't been any new reviews. I swear my brain is going to turn into mush one of these days. I showed the story to Saru and she said " That's upsetting even for ME ". *coughs* The story is five run on sentences set up in five paragraph looking segments. The gist of it is adult Chibi Usa orgasms watching dogs on TV. x.x Here's the lovely first sentence/paragraph. "Chibimoon, who now was 18, began to blow up her crystal clear, and round balloon, as she watched a still picture with Dodger, the dog from ‘Oliver & Company’, on her TV, and Chibimoon blew in the big balloon, till it couldn’t get harder and bigger." Yeah...there isn't much else to say except for my comment on this segment: "Few minutes later, her hot sperm ran down her legs," O_O!!! Chibi Usa produces sperm! *falls over* |