| Magic Knight Rayearth: Only You By Buni - 1/27/02 OOC: 3/5 Idea: 0/5 Plot: 0/5 Mary Sueness: 12948129834/5 Over All: 0/5 Oh yay…I’ve found a horrible fic in the Magic Knight Rayearth section…goody goody gumdrops. *hits head on desk* This story is packed with Mary Sue- mainly because the lead character IS a Mary Sue and the story is in first person. @_@ There isn’t much to say about the story but I provided a few quotes with my own input. If you think you should take a look at the actual story anyway; may the Holy Orange bless your forsaken soul. Well, I came here to see the man I love, his name is Eagle Vision. Yeah, you may think its just the kind of regular 19-year-old girl crush, but this is not. Damn yes its just a crush! Eagle is mine you whore! *protects her Eagle* I’ve always been in love with him ever since I laid my eyes on him. Well, the first time I laid my eyes on him was when I was 5 and he was 6. The quote stands alone on this. --;; His Dad, was running to be the president of Autozam, and my Dad was trying out to be the vice president. They won, so I got to hang around Eagle more. Eagle and I became great friends and we were always there for each other. But when I found out he was ill, we kind of drifted apart. WRONG! VERY WRONG! Eagle never told ANYONE that he was sick because he used too much of his mental energy. If he *had* told this Mary Sue, he would have also told his other good friends; Lantis and Geo. If you have read the manga or watched the anime, you know that Geo found out about Eagle’s condition because he snuck around looking for his life data files. Later, Eagle told Hikaru and eventually his secrete became a secrete no more. ^^ Geo and I became great friends too, but we barely talked after he became one of the best fighters. I’m also a good fighter, especially with weapons. I haven’t found one person who could beat me, except Eagle of course. Ahha…a traditional Mary Sue where she is a good “something”. The Mary Sue stated that she was good friends with Eagle, therefore, she would have met Lantis. Lantis is (besides Hikaru) the only person who could damage Eagle’s FTO. It’s safe to say that Lantis would have beaten Eagle in weaponry also. "Eagle?" Tears filled up in my eyes, and I ran to his bed and wrapped my arms around his limp, cold body. Yes, Eagle is in a comma recovering from his loss of mental energy but he is NOT DEAD. He is ALIVE. ALIVE humans are not COLD. "Fine, i guess, all I have been doing is sitting in this bed for two years. You don’t know how BORING it has been!" Eagle is the Supream Flight Commander of Autozam who is very much a gentalmen and quite kind. Does THAT sound like a high ranking officer or the type of vocabulary a gentalmen would use?! *sobs as she holds Eagle* "95% Eagle (on life meter)! You’ll be awake soon!" I bent down and kissed his cheek. *cheesy music plays* A chilling plot twist! *dun dun dun* "Eagle!" A short red headed girl ran in. "Huh?" The girl looked at me. Not to be mean or anything, she didn’t look very attractive. I was much more prettier, but, hey, thats the way I think. --;; "Of course!" She tugged on to my arm. "Lets go, I'll get you a special room!" This is for all you perverts! XD |