| Sailor Moon: Senshi Talkshows - The Senshi Visit Jerry Spring By Cherry-o - 1/23/02 First and foremost, I must give props to this fic for using the Japanese names. Sadly enough, there are not enough Sailormoon fics out there with the original names. -_- However, then I actually start to read the fic, and my opinions went DOWNHILL from there. First of all, any mockery of the Starlights in sucha ahteful manner is totally unnessicary. Sorry that some people are so closed minded. It bothers me, I find it to be horricly disgusting. Ok, so we all know what happenes with them in the Anime. Rub it in much? Come on, get over it. >>JS: *taken aback but then looks at Yaten, who is waving to some girls sitting in the front row* And you? >>YATEN: *looks toward Jerry hatefully* As long as I get my money, I'm happy. How much more out of character can you get? Yaten would more than likely be ignoring the girls than waving to them. And since when is Star Healer money-obessesed? C'mon, if you're going to write a story ridiculing them, at least make it with something you can ridicule off of. Now, Taiki and Yat-chan leave the stage within moments, for no aparent reason. Well, other than the oh-so cliche "Taiki has to study", but Yaten leaves apparently because he's been paid. -_- After this, of course, the Outer Sneshi show up, and Uranus has the intention of beating the tar out of Seiya. At this point, Star Healer shows back up with Taiki arguing with Ami. The cliche pile is building up here. Through most of this, an old woman in the audiance keeps protesting the gender-bending ways of the Starlights, and even attacks Taiki in mid-transformation. And the cliche storm continues as more characters fall from hammerspace to attack the lights. At one point the crowd seems hopeful that Star Fighter is dead ;-; BUT SHE LIVES. Stick that in your LJ motha fucka. The author even pulls back the DK Generals. -_- *hides Nephrite behind her* God, save him. -_- At the end, Seiya has gone insane and the rest of the characters are running amok. Actual Plot: 0/5 Cliches abound...emphasis on the abound. Humor or Sadness: 0/5 I wasn't even mildly amused. At any point. It was pretty damn sad, though, I mean, with the writing style and all... Writing Style: 2/5 Decent style. Has potential. Again, Kudos for original names. SMUT leve: 0/5 I'm a hentai-at-heart. (H.A.H.) Cherry-O says: Over all, it's over done. The author shows the potential to write something decent---should they choose to lay off the over used points and pick something worth writing about. Shows REAL potential for a serious fic. Until then--may I suggest staying away from humor fics? Cherry-O out! *waves* |