By: Cherry-O 1-25-02
All right -_- I'm not sure if this fic is supposed to be a totally mockery of something or what, but this is fic is genuinely terrible. I think that there will be no disagreement about this what so ever.
To begin with, not a damn thing is spelled right. Maybe...the words 'the' and 'was'. Thats about it. The names Heero and Duo aren't even spelled right. O_o I mean, c'mon. There is one thing to be said about poor grammer and errors made for lack of a spell-check. But total disregard for basic words is another. And then to publish it? Gah...
Plus there were a ton of author's notes. In fact, almost every sentance ended with an author's note. O_o And it was irrellevent stuff like YAY! or something like that.
Luckily, the story was short. But despite the fact that it was short, it was still almost unbearable. The grammer, the spelling mistakes...gah.
In general, you see fics like this and leave. But I figured after the ammount of anger we got from my previous review, I thought I'd show you something TRUELY henious. Just be thankful that this is probably the worst of the worst that I've seen.
Except maybe for that one Artimes fic ~.^
Actual Plot: 0/5 There was no plot. Well...essentially, Relena dies and Heero and Duo screw.
Humor or Sadness: 1/5 Relena died. Brownie points *holds up bullet-proof sheild*
Writing Style: 0/5 Read it. You'll agree. Trust me on this one.
SMUT Level: 4/5 Some hentai in there. This is rated NC-17 on FF.net, so watch out.
Cherry-O Says: Remember kids, when you get a job in the real world, they won't pat you on the back for a crappy job. Sometimes you gotta suck it up. And believe it or not, I write bad fics. I'm falliable, and I know it. It's just my job now to protect you from damaging your learning skills even more. ^^/ Cherry-O out.
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