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Reviewer: Raliegh

Layout=17/20 Good Layout its a great one since its your first! You should just make it so the banner doesnt scroll though
Content=5/10 There should be more dolls and graphics but it was pretty good
Image Quality=15/15 no broken images
Stuff about you=5/5 awesome info
Hits=2/5 you dont have a counter
Originality=6/10 your getting there
Updates=10/10 good updates
Owners Personality=10/10 it seems like your pretty nice
Pop ups=5/5 No popups great!
Neatness=10/10 Very neat
Final Score=85
Letter Grade=B
Comments=Good Job on your site i love the layout bur i really do think you shouldnt have the top frame scroll all the way. And you should get a hit counter and a guestbook.

Reviewer: Sour Kiss

First Impression: /18
Splash Page: /7
Name Originality: /13
Content: /14
Errors/Neatness/Readibility: /10
Color Scheme: /8
HTML Knowledge: /5
Layout Originality: /8
Pop Ups: /5
Total: /88%