A/N: i used to put all my fanfiction on
fanfiction.net but they deleted it :*(. daffodyl was my first
slash fic ever and it was really
good. no matter. i am gonna write lots more!! here is an extact from daffodyl,
its from part of the middle cuz unfortunately i lost everythng else,
but maybe you can see a glimpse of my writing!
DaffodylWhen first light reached dawn Daffodyl awake
with a start and looked all around her. 'Where are we?' she asked Frodo
'We have just left The Shire' said Frodo 'We are now in the Valley of Misfortune' Daffodyl shivered she had heard of the valley and it was said that nobody who went in ever came back, little pinpricks riveted along her back and she shivered she could feelt he evil in the place. 'Soon we will be in de Rohan' said Sam chewing bread his face covered in dirt ' Youd better ge t off that horse miss it is getting tired' Daffodyl lept of the stallion with a practised jump and Frodo and Sam gasped impressed. 'Also we have a suprise for you' said Frodo 'You will never guess what it is!' But Daffodyl was memerised by the beauty of the place they had come to there were rolling green hills that were mint green and lush there were trees with silver jewels as flowers and she could hear elf song in the air and she knew although you could not see that the nimphs would be chattering and hiding int he trees making dewdrops. 'DAFFODYL DAFFODYL!' Frodo shouted 'We have a suprise for you!' Daffodyl turned around and as she did the ring around Frodos neck glented in the golden sunglight and suddenly she felt a feirce jolt of pain thru her head 'Ahhhhhhh ahhhh aaaaah haaaaaahaaaaaaah' she moaned falling to the ground and clucthing her knees 'Ahhhhhh.' AHHHHHHHHHHH. The oteher hobbits rushed to her side. 'Daffodyl what is wrong!' they shouted. 'I know spells in elfish' said Sam 'I will say them : Le Linnathon Noro Lim Cuio i Pherian Annan!' he shouted 'Si Man i Yulma Nin Enquantuva!' In her Daffodyl saw fire and brimmstone and its was almost like a great earthquake in her was happening rocks were falling everywhere she couldnt breathe and she saw redness in her eyes a great voice boomed: DAFFODYL ASH NAG DURBALTHALK ELEN SILA ALDOUS MISHIMA' 'Noooooo' screamed Daffodyl and her hands reached out leik claws and grabbed at Frodos ring 'Noo I must stay pure my heart is an unbroken road I must not fallinto the darkness' but to everyone else it just sounded like gibberish until she felt herself fall into a deep blackness that was warm and glowing, but it only lasted for a few seconds. TBC! |